Time Travel at the Same Time: but They Are All Villains!

No, one person insists on writing all kinds of mysteries and secret realms. Isn't that funny?

I just finished reading the latest 49 chapters, and I would like to briefly share my personal feelings. First of all, the issue of combat power. I've watched a lot of 99 series, but there are really very few that overwhelm the combat power. Since I'm afraid that the protagonist's combat power will increase too quickly and the plot will collapse, why should a world like Dragon Ball appear in the early stages where the combat power is so different from other worlds? Afraid that the combat power will collapse quickly, then carefully screen the stories and then sort them. Suppressing the combat power simply means that the author has no intention. I feel that I want to write about these worlds, but what should I do if the combat power increases too quickly? Give it a try. Then there is the problem that the title does not match the content. If the protagonists are all villains, then write something about what a villain should be like, wise, self-interested, double-sided, hypocritical. There are so many classic villain templates out there, but the protagonist gives me the impression of Xiao Ruozhi. The third issue is rhythm. Two words, scattered. You can't write a major plot point for each world? In the end, I wrote two pages to change the world, and I wrote two pages to change the world. Why did it happen so quickly? As for the above, to be honest, I feel that the author has no outline, and writes wherever he thinks, and his writing is not very good. This book can have more than 300,000 words, which means that the author has a good psychological quality and is well-edited.

The villain is really a villain, and in the end he just wears his skin. It's better not to use this gimmick, it will make people disgusted.

After sharing, the cultivation level increases too slowly, especially if it is done by one person.

Whether there is Shennong or not, I am most afraid of this kind of novel. Even if the male protagonist is the sixth level of Hokage, he can change the terrain at will, and one person cannot defeat the Celestial Master.

Very toxic from the start. First: Under one person, as soon as he wakes up his memory, he will defect out of nowhere, which is like a lunatic. Second: The power system can also be transmitted to other worlds. You can think about it. This was written without thinking. The power systems of some worlds can only be used in your own world. For example, Death: Without the spirit son, how can you use it in other worlds? How to write about dozens or hundreds of worlds and so many power systems in the later period? Brainless writing, no logic, no need for explanation, no sense. . .

Do villains have nannies these days? Why do you ask Conan to check magic for you and provide him with information, and you just wait to reap the benefits?

Suppressing combat power? Guess what is one of Tongchuanliu's core selling points?

I don't want to read it. The weird fairy world is too boring, and the style of painting is also very inconsistent. Not many people will like the sudden appearance of a mentally ill protagonist, right? Psychotic protagonists have always had a small audience, and few novels have been written well. Isn't this asking for trouble? I think I made a complaint before, but it was deleted.

He's just Ruozhi without any charm as a villain, and his combat power is so overwhelming that it doesn't feel any fun at all. It's exactly the kind of upgrade mode to fight monsters. Anyway, I'm very disappointed that another one is trying to sell someone else's meat.

With such pressure on combat power, shared abilities become useless.

I have a question, is the person who traveled through Dragon Ball a fool? I know the plot, and I followed Vegeta in the early stage, and relied on sharing to increase combat power. Other weak worlds rely on sharing to increase combat power. I understand, Dragon Ball? Pressure on combat power? Otherwise, don't write about Dragon Ball. Although Dragon Ball's combat power is exaggerated, it is a semi-comical anime. The world with the most exaggerated and simplest way to increase combat power, various methods, and pig's feet are Saiyans. You might as well write that the Dragon Ball world is from Earth. I didn't see that Pig's Trotter Golden Finger needs to be attached to the plot? MD, I still followed the original work. Conan believed that the world merged and Conan became smaller, which would not happen. The author also wrote that Shinichi was rescued. I thought that without following the plot, he turned into a pig's trotter and was forced to give medicine and follow the original work. This is no good, hard work, and it's also stupid.

The pressure is too harsh, or don't write this kind of thing

Don't know why! Feeling a little sick! Not even as good as the original characters

Should he be killed or not? What are you doing? Aren't you writing a villain?

The real villain still only wears the skin of a villain. I won't look at what's behind

The problem of suppressing combat power, there are so many worlds, you have to have one that can suppress the scene, and it seems that there is no one that can suppress it. No matter how you subdivide it, it can be regarded as Zhutenliu Plot problem, the title is about the villain, but I just saw the part where Conan feeds medicine and tells Kuroba Kaito to go to Dr. Agasa. This does not fit the character. It is considered that the title does not match the actual thing. It is possible that the author Lien Da There is no Tsuna. There is a huge possibility of eunuchs in making side plot modifications based on the original plot. The most important thing is to poison it and put it later. In the early stage, it must be directly reversed to the end. In the later stage, it can be cleaned up Some world chapters are too long. I don't want to click on them just by looking at the chapter names. In summary, it is okay when I first read it. After Conan is fed medicine, it stands out as dull and boring.

Conan and Nine Dragon Balls have the same world view, and they have star-blasting combat power.

Pluto is also a villain, with a black hole level of power, a nebula body that is spiritual, and a dual practitioner of hexagonal warfare.

Well! Although he may know who I am, although I may be sent to prison or killed by him, although... But! I just want him to live, I have to let him live and kill me. . The author writes really well. I like such a confident protagonist.

Let me start with this: This book is so "beautiful"! ! It's just that it has so many imperfections that it's not recommended to consume it after meals.

It is still necessary to catch up on the new book issue. If possible, click on it when you turn to the end to record the catch-up reading. Thank you. There is also a question about the secret realm. The follow-up plan is to connect this with the restriction of Tianshidu and wait for me to fill in the hole. 🙏