In the End of the World, I Am Grabbing Territory in North America

Didn't you become a warlord? Why are you acting like a younger brother now?

I have read Chapter 22 so far, and there is nothing poisonous about it. The storyline is still reasonable and the setting is good. The only thing you need to pay attention to is to avoid arguing with your compatriots. After all, you should write less about these things when you are on the other side.

It's a new work by a newcomer. The outline and details have all been written. It's not a prisoner, North America will be destroyed in the future, and the protagonist is fighting for territory. It's a cool article that doesn't hurt anyone. Please give me your support. Thank you!

Around Chapter 20, I met the heroine Xing. The painting style changed suddenly and there was no sense of apocalypse anymore.

Chapter 21 of the End of the World: Start falling in love and expose yourself. You should not be able to protect yourself yet.

The writing is very good, but it's a pity, why don't I write it again?

So far, the writing is actually quite good, but if it's just the ability that's shown so far, which is similar to radar, and the body is slightly enhanced, it feels like he can only be a tool.

Trump has won the championship, hurry up and update station b

Stop updating the novels and go back to station B to update the President series. It will always be better than here!

It's coming, it's the follow-up to the annihilation of North America that we have been waiting for for more than two years.

I have been reading books for more than half a month. Hehe, the author is awesome. I have read hundreds of books and I still have a good taste.

Why aren't the videos on station B updated? There is obviously so much material.

Let me report the data, brother, how many studies have you done? Is it over 200?

Original author of Bizhan? , When will the video be updated?

Can the author draw a map? Please draw the terrain of Wuling base, combat readiness warehouse, etc. Thank you.

I rarely see bugs anymore. Please support me. I am also the author. Although I am now a reader, I have to say that although the setting has some minor flaws, it is not important to me. I am not obsessed with logic. But what do you think of your writing? The biggest problem is the lack of ups and downs or contrast. Although it can be enhanced with plot and environment descriptions. , But without contrast, it is impossible to bring out the fun and excitement of reading, whether it is pleasure or anticipation. As for one of the details, since the protagonist can translate the language of the bug, you should write the bug as a mother-in-law, so that the teammates can contrast and the effectiveness of the attack is achieved. You are a newbie, some skills are actually in the details.

Very good. Those who are addicted to Chapter 22 can be rescued. Two monthly passes are given to you, and there are two more to see your performance this week.

Brothers, since I read a lot, I am trying to write my first new book. It is about urban life. It is called "Talk and Gossip". In the past month, I have guaranteed 20,000 updates per day (I have saved a lot of manuscripts before), and the quality is guaranteed (guaranteed to be novel and reasonable). Welcome to search and read! Grateful!

The whole mess of swallowing dates is over, I'm dizzy