Tokyo: Shuchiin Life Starting from One Person

The latest chapters are really frustrating. People and dogs can rush up and slap the protagonist. As long as the protagonist's weaknesses have been successfully attacked, they are all mute, and they start with sneak attacks without asking any questions. I believe that the protagonist is at fault, and I am quite convinced😓

Single and more than nothing? My rule is not to read the harem if the fandom is open. I hope the author will tell you in advance and screen the readers so that I don't waste time. Thank you.

It's too messy. I'm most annoyed when several worlds are strung together.

Too many worldviews have been stitched together, and the combat power has collapsed. The plot is nothing but fighting. It's not unreasonable for only 20 people to invest in 110,000 words. I want to spread out a big worldview, but I don't have enough writing skills to write it.

I feel like the protagonist is so abstract and twisted, like a combination of Zhang Huaiyi and Li Muxuan.

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Single or multiple? Take it all or trade stocks?

In the first chapter, I feel that the qualifications of this pig's trotters are too low. I have followed the Celestial Master for twelve years before reaching C level. It seems that I have not mastered the thunder method. But in the second chapter, it is said that I have mastered the golden light spell at the age of 5. The old celestial master admits that he has the same talent. Is this comparison too far? Is this pig's trotter really strong or fake? Please explain to Shennong 🙏🙏🙏

I want to add Kinomoto Sakura😍

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First of all, I would like to thank everyone for reading my book on the roadside. Some friends in the comment area said that the writing is poor. It is true that I still need to practice. To be honest, this book is too complicated and the ideas are really messed up on the paper. The rhythm is also very bad. I don't ask for anything from this book. The main thing is to practice writing and sum up experience and lessons, and then slowly try to write well later. There are indeed a lot of battles in writing. I also know this problem, and the reason for the battle is inexplicable to me. I want to change it from the beginning but feel unable to start. I I also understand the reason, which is that it is broken from the ground up. The next plot will be distributed reasonably, and I should also read the works of those light novel masters to learn the interaction logic between people in light novels. To be honest, the longest I have ever written before is only 60,000 words, and this time it is 120,000 words. It is a breakthrough for myself. Long stories are really difficult to control, and it is really difficult to update this every day. It took me almost an hour and a half to write these two thousand words, and I just relied on catching fish at work. It was almost 10 o'clock when I got home from get off work. If I don't sleep enough for eight hours and then work a 12-hour shift, I'll really be able to do it... I guess once I get good at writing, I'll be able to write much faster, like four thousand words an hour. There are also a few elder brothers who voted for me and I really deserve it. With this level and the amount of updates, I would scold other books myself. . .

The author should reorganize it. The sentences are not smooth and the writing is too weak.

The writing is good and the plot seems to flow smoothly without any problems. There is nothing uncomfortable about vomiting.

What a pity, I am the only one who is right! The protagonist shouldn't be extraordinary, but the Sharingan is given to the male protagonist of an anime? The supporting characters must have extraordinary talents! It should be obtained through the protagonist! ! !