God Rewards Those Who Work Hard, Starting from Hogwarts

When writing proficiency, don't just use n magic at full level. To learn a new magic, you have to add a little more proficiency once. It is very illogical 😡 Talent bonus, theoretical bonus, and analogy bonus are all normal for accelerating the creation, learning, and proficiency of new magic. It is very sick to be illogical in order to suppress your strength. Invincible is invincible, and that person is invincible. It is also necessary to consider the performance and difficulty of different levels of magic. Apart from how difficult it is for Harry to accurately summon a broom in one night, it would take several days and months for the protagonist to commit cheating 😅

The protagonist's name persuades him to quit, which is both unsophisticated and unconventional.

What we mean is that Harry Potter fan fiction has a style of ancient cool writing, for example: How can this not be shocking! A smell of dragon pride

This protagonist's name is a bit trivial

After reading Chapter 19, I feel like the author has never been to school. I have never seen a school where all grades are taught compulsory courses at the same time. You make it seem like Defense Against the Dark Arts only needs to be taught for one year. After all, the first year is completed, and the new students come and teach it again in the second year. You've even given up the exams and left only practice. If you do this, the magic world will be over sooner or later.

What I couldn't stand was when the protagonist praised the elves after dinner, and the house elves were particularly happy and said they were respected. Isn't this nonsense?

You started to feel weak at Voldemort's ancestral home. You had to let the opponent fight Avada Kedavra several times on you before you started to fight back.

The plot is okay and the writing is good, but the author is not familiar with the original work, so some of the plots are very embarrassing to watch, such as the defense badge that can prevent nearly a thousand young wizards from attacking at the same time. If it really has such defense power, Voldemort probably won't be able to break it even after coming for a while. Another example is that the author thinks that it takes two weeks to fully recover from a fracture in the wizarding world, and the male protagonist can even shock Madam Pomfrey by restoring a spell.

A pure giving nanny who only has one excuse for giving every time, just for the system's tasks? And it's the same mission. I don't understand it. I'm shocked. There are such saints these days. It's awesome.

It's already 4,202 years ago, and you're still writing a shocking story. Isn't it embarrassing?

How come you have become a pirate and don't use magic anymore? What's the use of learning it?

Never mind the banana people, the main characters have great names.

I can't stand it in the first chapter. Let me ask you, how many years did the Wolfsbane potion come out?

If you want to see teachers and students, the heroine Hermione. Male protagonist: Hermione, you don't want Harry to break school rules and Dumbledore find out, hehehehehe

It seems okay so far, but since they all have abilities similar to the system, why not set the system to arrange the identity corresponding to the world, but soul travel? After all, soul penetration is now a poisonous point, not too big or too small.

I can't understand what you're writing about. Can the world you write about gold and other things be popular among the public? Why don't you explain your world view clearly to the public? It was so painful to watch that I almost gave up.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing and plot are unbearable. The first thing I did during the time travel was to use a smartphone. I can understand that it was for completing tasks, but the performance of the participants was too exaggerated. I couldn't stand it until I reached Chapter 21. This kind of smoke-free plot is really enough. During the half-time action, champagne was opened, and everyone onlookers posted barrages. I haven't seen this kind of third-rate plot in Qidian for a long time.

No beginning or end, primary school students' composition test dialogue.

Harry Potter is too long. After reading more than 90 chapters, I haven't changed the world to find other novels about the universe. If a world is too long, it will make people feel bored. I read so many chapters in one go yesterday, and today I have no desire to read them.

It's been 98 years since Harry defeated Voldemort, and Google has it

All I can say is that the protagonist is not suitable for the role of a teacher and looks very funny.

Personally, I feel that the Harry Potter world is not suitable for the place where you were born if you want unlimited streaming. After all, once the style of Harry Potter's world is fixed in your mind, it will be difficult to integrate into the worlds you travel to later. The style of painting is too different.

This introduction is not good. Goldfinger doesn't even have the ability to break the world's limit. He's just a fool. Every time he practices to the world's limit, it's over.

All for you. , Just add the essence

The new world I traveled through was not very familiar and I had no sense of immersion.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you are at the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are 20 years old, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling mark. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates.

Well written I have read Chapter 50 so far, and the impression is a bit subtle Mainly because other HP fans will tell Lao Deng more or less when they deal with the hidden Horcruxes. But this is the case, and getting rid of Voldemort's Horcrux is not a big deal... (If you take the initiative to expose yourself to Lao Deng later, let's talk about it later) Then there is Snape, who has always felt that the protagonist has some bad intentions in entering the academy. According to the writing style of his peers, he usually directly exposes the matter of the hidden Horcrux. In the end, the protagonist has the attitude of, I don't care, there is no need to expose this little thing, time will prove everything. It looks good, but this mature approach makes me a little bit subtle.

I don't like the world of anime, so I watch it

When the Pirate King encounters the Deserter King, it is recommended to leave him alone 🙂

The idiom "God rewards those who work hard" is a Chinese term for it! Why do you think God rewards those who work hard when the entire story is based on foreign plots?