Traveling Through the World of Martial Arts Begins with Xiaoao

1. Linghu Chong did not say that he thought about the cliff sword move because Yue Buqun was a Qi Sect at that time and the sword moves used by Linghu Chong were from the Jian Sect. This was related to the orthodox position of the two Huashan Sword Qi Sects. When Ning Zhong was taking the test to improve Linghu Chong's martial arts. , Linghu Chong had no intention of using the sword sect moves, Yue Buqun directly made Hu Chong obsessed with martial arts and was not allowed to practice anymore. Even if Linghu Chong wanted to say that he had thought about the cliff sword move, he did not dare to say it. At this time, Linghu Chong had not learned the Dugu Nine Swords. 2. Linghu Chong never called Tian Boguang brother. Tian Boguang fell into Yilin's father's trap at that time. Tian Boguang would die if he didn't invite Linghu Chong to Huashan. So he shamelessly called Linghu Chong brother, but Linghu Chong did not recognize him. 3. Linghu Chong didn't owe Lin Pingzhi anything. On the contrary, Linghu Chong was extremely kind and righteous to Lin Pingzhi, and Lin Pingzhi was envious, jealous, and hateful towards Linghu Chong. Are the authors who are writing books now from Qidian not doing the most basic homework before writing a novel? If you don't rush, who will?

The writing is good, the ideas are good, and it's very enjoyable. I haven't seen such a comfortable martial arts novel in a long time. Do you have any similar novels? Can you recommend them?

Same as history! This comment section is full of lies! Don't believe it! There are so many martial arts dramas out there that choose an ugly heroine, why not have a single heroine! The other original heroines are so lacking in protagonists that they lead other men with red strings! Poisoned!

The author's starting point is not good. Linghu Chong was sorry for his master, sorry for Lao Yue and his wife, and sorry for several junior brothers, but he was not sorry for Lin Pingzhi. Whether in novels or movies, Linghu Chong was extremely kind to Lin Pingzhi, with only kindness and unwillingness to be bullied.

Why do you have to act like a retarded person and wait for someone to come knocking on your doorstep, and then meddle in other people's affairs and let them have a vendetta? And it's stained with shit. Could this be the legendary mentally retarded novel?

In the world of martial arts, the most stupid person is the one dressed in white, especially when he is fighting in the world. In Xianxia, ​​he is handsome in white, but in the martial arts world, others will think that this person is mentally ill. Do you want to talk about Hua Wuque and Hua Manlou? His two trips were so grand, and the way this book is written is so stupid. Tsing Yi and black clothes are pretty much the same.

In order to make it easier for you to delete, I wrote it in this post. Chapter 1, Linghu Chong saved Lin Pingzhi many times, and Lin Pingzhi also killed his junior sister. But he still agreed to take care of Lin Pingzhi. Linghu Chong later tied him up in the dungeon because Lin Pingzhi and Zuo Lengchan stood together and killed him and Ren Yingying. To be fair, Lin Pingzhi couldn't treat Linghu Chong like this, so he had to treat Lin Pingzhi as well, right? Later, I said that Linghu Chong was mean and ungrateful, I don't know where to start. Let's just talk about the Lin family. He saved Lin Zhennan and his wife from Mu Gaofeng. He also passed on his last words. He also risked his life to ward off evil spirits. I must have saved Lin Pingzhi many times. Is this called ungrateful? Inside Chapter 10. It's impossible for Lin Zhennan to watch it without practicing. Lin Pingzhi said that no one who saw it could help it. What's more, if Lin Zhennan knew about it, then he and his wife would die, and Lin Pingzhi would definitely take revenge. What if he was told that he committed suicide in the palace for revenge? If he had known, he would never have passed down his last words. Around Chapter 13, you didn't consider that Yue Buqun was also in Fuzhou. Lin Pingzhi, Zhuangtuozi and the Huashan faction knew about Yue Buqun after seeing him in the teahouse. In Chapter 15, the return trip to Yanlou is in Hengyang City, which is still some distance away from Hengshan City. Otherwise, it would be better to use Linghu Chong's wisdom and directly ask someone to inform Liu Zhengfeng.

Jin Yong's other protagonists suddenly blushed and shouted when they heard that someone was criticizing Linghu Chong for being criticized for being friends with gangsters. Shi Potian😤: Nonsense. If you kill less than 8 people a day, how can you be considered a bandit? (Ding Bu San Ding Bu Si will kill 7 people in one day) Yang Guo😤: Nonsense, killing someone just to steal a horse is considered a bandit? (The chefs and masters from all over the world nodded.) Guo Jing😤: If you insinuate Yang Kang, Dongxie, and Sister Rong, I will beat you to death. Then he started muttering something, saying that massacring the city of Khwarezm and befriending the leader of the water bandits does not affect my being a good person. Qiao Feng😤: You insulted Azi, Aguda, Hongji, give me a slap in the face. Zhang Wuji😤: What kind of rapist, killing innocent people indiscriminately, are you insinuating our Mingjiao?

The only person in the entire Swordsman who is truly unruly and unethical is Linghu Chong, not the Qingcheng Sect, the Songshan Sect and Yue Buqun. Whether the Qingcheng sect comes to pick up disciples or comes to destroy the sect, they are all justified. Linghu Chong of the Huashan faction had no position or reason to participate in this matter. The Songshan sect wiped out all of Liu Zhengfeng's family. There are witnesses and physical evidence, and Liu Zhengfeng himself admitted it. For what reason and position did Linghu Chong of the Huashan faction participate in this matter? When Linghu Chong was suspected of plotting too many evil swords to ward off evil spirits, he practiced the Dugu Nine Swords. First, no clarification was provided, and second, no explanation was given, and the incident was allowed to ferment. The reputation of Huashan School was ruined. After Liu Zhengfeng's family was tortured by Ming Zhengdian, he still made friends with the demon sect. This is a blatant provocation to the righteousness of the entire world. The most important thing is that he always used the name of Huashan School from beginning to end. But it is obvious that he will disguise himself later and change his name anonymously. If I didn't have a huge hatred towards Yue Buqun, I really wouldn't be able to do such a thing.

If you don't want to give the protagonist a high combat power, then don't write so many good things about the protagonist. If you give the protagonist skills and take advantage of heaven and earth treasures, the result will be a weak combat power. This will only highlight the pure waste of the protagonist in your novel There is no charm at all.

The old naughty boy is the most useless in gold novels! My uncle and my master shouted, he is not always busy when someone has something to do! I know how to play every day without thinking!

The author writes very well. Everyone has a different hero. I hope you can create your own hero dream! Come on!

With a small mouth and a few questions about my grandparents and relatives, I learned martial arts and became proficient in it 😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥. From a novice to just a few words, I became proficient in martial arts.

The copy of Yitian I watched first was completely on the Zhang Wuji route. 1️⃣Why are the six sects attacking Guangmingding? 2️⃣In the original book, Zhao Min leads a group of masters to cause trouble in the world, but in this book, it becomes Zhao Min's mother. 3️⃣Poison point: The six sects attacked Guangmingding. The protagonist and his group finally arrived and saw a bunch of his men dead. He huffed in anger. In the end, it was said that anyone who had killed someone would leave a finger behind and would seek revenge in the future. 4️⃣The protagonist has mastered the Nine Sun Magic Skills, the Great Shift of the Universe and other magic skills, but there are few who can match him. Then he meets Zhao Min's mother's old lama and the Kongjian Divine Monk, both of whom are tied.

To write about time travel, especially martial arts, you need to give Pigfoot a personality, at least some progress. Why is he still a young man after traveling for decades? Doesn't his experience increase? 😅

Funny, the scene where the pig's feet went to Mount Qingcheng was a big joke. It's really poisonous... When Yu Canghai led people to destroy Fuwei Escort Agency, where were those people in Qingcheng Mountain? Then Yu Canghai died, where were these people in Qingcheng Mountain? In the end, the pig's feet came to the door. These people introduced a few scapegoats and cleared everything up? And... Pig's feet actually approve of this? Toxic... Funny... Have you changed the person?

A rookie who doesn't practice his kung fu properly will go to fight Tian Boguang, go fight the Songshan sect, and risk his whole family's life to block Ruyi's grudges. He's just writing randomly.

I couldn't bear to see him getting married to Lan Fenghuang from the Five Poison Sect. Linghu Chong and Ren Yingying were together. Everyone thought he had become a demon. Later, the masters of the Five Sacred Mountains and the higher-ups were basically dead before he became the leader. Now that such a couple appears again, there is no way to play!

It's a different kind of pressure on the protagonist, and it's even disgusting. Can't watch it.

What the hell is this writing? The Swordsman chapter is well written, but then the story about Heaven and Dragon Slaying starts right after? The writing style doesn't feel like it belongs to the same person? Is it a studio work, co-written by several people?

Good. There is no problem with the character design, there is no pettishness, nor does she say one thing and do another, nor does she act as if she is the right person at the same time, and there is no inexplicable backlash to the heroine. The main character's talk is pretty good too, and it wasn't written like a kindergarten debate. Come on.

It's too natural to take it for granted, Zhong Nanshan is so big. I found the ancient tomb after just asking around. The most outrageous thing is the underwater secret passage. What is a secret passage? It's not like the tourist attractions put up a sign for you saying: The secret passage is here

You often break the fourth wall and you think you are humorous. I won't make it up every time. I just want to take the route of multiple female protagonists. Bad review and not recommended.

So right! ! ! ! Come on, author! One more shot!

This book is pretty good, the plot conflicts are all clever,

I'm saving it until there are fifty or sixty chapters or more than one hundred chapters before I read it. When reading martial arts novels, the emphasis is on gratification and grudges, with a higher moral level, and "the great chivalrous man serves the country and the people". I hope that this rhythm can be maintained. The good thing is that there are not so many brainless villains, the writing is smooth, and it is more comfortable to read or listen to.

No, who are you with every day? How can I continue reading like this?

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The plot, writing, and ideas are still okay. I read a book in the front row of Zhutianliu: xxx Evil Forces. I gave up before finishing the first story: the writing is noob and the plot is trivial. But the data is really good. I am also confused: Am I the minority?

By using Jin Yong to oppose Jin Yong, what is important is to report directly and reject moral kidnapping, so refreshing! Don't speak falsely to those seductresses and sluts, and praise women who are straightforward, kind, and don't twist around and play tricks. This tastes just right, I like it very much!