
Douluo Dragon King: I Am Creating a Golden World Behind the Scenes!
斗罗龙王:我在幕后造黄金大世!
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- Ongoing
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- 930k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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236Chapters
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Come on, keep writing well
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Watching Prison A recently, I suddenly realized that isn't the Sun and Moon Federation just an old beauty with a different skin? There are many clans, there are monopoly capitals, there are two political parties fighting each other (Shrek and non-Shrek), there are regional Brahmins (martial arts families from all over the country), there are trade union systems, there are environmental destruction and animal protection organizations, there are harboring cults, school bullying is rampant, extremist organizations, etc., There are too many, yes, absolutely right. Originally, I thought Shrek was a pure cancer, suppressing students, promoting weird values, brainwashing, exploiting, stealing information from the military, inciting students to engage in sabotage, and engaging in various movements. But the premise is that it is in a country like our home, but if it is a magical place like the United States, that cannot be said. It is said that the protagonist seems to have been brainwashed after joining Shrek. He is a completely different person. Could it be that he is young and ignorant and has illusions about society?
The author will later create a soul beast clone. It's better to have one full of Cthulhu style! Give Douluo some Cthulhu shock, and let the pseudo-god Douluo see what a real god is. For example this
The order of the chapters is a bit messed up. I deleted and reposted too quickly. Now the work is blocked, so I have to wait for a while 😭
For the clone
I hope I can have a female doppelgänger. How can a doppelganger tattoo not have a female doppelgänger? We can't be sexist.
I can't stand it. Originally, the behind-the-scenes story is a very good subject, and Douluo is also very popular, but I have to choose a mainstream subject for the starting point of Dou Sanxue. They are Dou Yi and Dou II, because as you get to the end, there is less and less substantive content to write. It can only be a background board, which is very boring. In addition, the author himself is good at water and cannot read it. This book is already like a river.
By the later stage, he had begun to make up clones out of thin air, which was not mentioned at all before.
Gu Yue and Na'er have no role at all, and so does Di Tian, a member of the soul beast clan. It is said to be a fanfic, but more like an original novel wrapped in a layer of Douluo shell.
Good product
Personally, I think it's very good-looking, and I hope it doesn't have a female protagonist. It would be difficult to write a story like this with a female protagonist. Finally, stable updates are very important. It is the first impression of reading novels. Seeing that you update from time to time, you have only updated a few pictures from February to now, and I am a little afraid to read them 😭
The recent macro narratives were probably written by AI, and the tone is so strange.
The first part was pretty normal, but from about 30 chapters onwards, I can't hold back the AI taste.
Update female clone
Can you update some female clones😢😢😢
In the golden age, don't these geniuses want to fight each other? 😠 The people around them don't compare their combat power, and they try to pull each other down 😅. When I saw the Soul Master Competition, I was looking forward to preparing how to write it, but it turned out that the fight didn't happen due to an accident.
The optimal solution to Dou San's clone style is to have his own martial soul. The clone martial soul is sun and moon plus Tianlong. One sun and moon, one Tianlong and an emerald swan. In the later stage, he will be reincarnated into a phoenix. The main body will follow the path of the Forging Master's true body sect. It is convenient to harvest resources and hide behind the scenes. It is also convenient for the Emerald Swan to go to Shrek. It is also convenient for Devil's Island to take this route. It is convenient in the early stage. There is nothing to say in grabbing it directly in the later stage. The sun and moon are mainly used to make ice and fire and absorb the star energy in the early stage to make up for the early stage. In the period of resource issues, it is also possible to go to the Tang Sect. If there is no Kung Fu, you can use Kung Fu. When the inner ghost cooperates with the main body to steal a wave of ice and fire, you can also have your own martial soul fusion skills to fight three characteristics. The Sky Destroying Dragon is mainly the Dragon Valley and the Yellow Dragon King, which can cooperate with the Phoenix to build the Devil's Island. Finally, the Huang Dragon King brings destruction, the Phoenix brings creation, and the sun and the moon are responsible for balance. Finally, the main body, the concept that is most suitable for the self, recycles all the above three. At that time, you can fight however you want.
I hope that the protagonist can say this to Sangou later, "You are too conceited. This is a golden world that is the only one in ancient times. In this world, all the outstanding people from all ages will awaken and live together for the same life. In this era, not even the dark god king can do anything." Do whatever you want. It's not an era where you want to launch a thousand-year plan and just be pure and pure. If you are a dragon, you can lie down for me. If you are a tiger, you can lie on your back. I want to show your purity in this life. Hum, I'm sorry. What awaits you will be a great confrontation between many outstanding people throughout the ages."
It's so dry... I feel like I'm reading an outline
What is written after the beginning of Chapter 33 🥵
The pace is too fast
The subject matter is pretty good, but there are basically no details.
Author, I saw the chapter about Makino's breakthrough, and I have some questions, Shouldn't Makino's four-character battle armor and god-level mecha have ultimate combat power? Why does he have ultimate combat power after he breaks through?
I thought I was behind the scandal, so I clicked in.
In fact, it is completely unnecessary to work at the grassroots level. This is an extraordinary world. If you really want to do some support, strength is everything. 😄 It's not worth wasting so much writing on it.
Clone
It is recommended to have a clone with the attribute of killing and death, because the battle with the abyss is already the mainstream, and there will be a series of battles after that. Having a clone with the attribute of killing and death can bring a wave of benefits (increased by the general trend). Martial spirit: Flower of the Other Shore/Netherworld Butterfly/Scythe of Death/Locust Tree/Reincarnation Disk (Heritage of Devil's Island), choose a martial spirit that can benefit from the next battle. If possible, you can try to find Huo Yuhao/Yilao's legacy and see if you can find the plane of the undead. ... You can have another pure space attribute clone and try to compete for the master of the plane (the clone has multiple choices, with enough trial and error) Clone martial soul: space/virtual plane/small world/fake world. Looks like a plane spirit, with enough affinity to try to snatch food from the tiger's mouth. ... You can also try to get a clone with light attributes. Although Poseidon has been a symbol of light in recent years, Poseidon is more of the sea. In theory, there is still a gap in the belief in light. Martial Spirit: Seraph/Eternal Sun (True Sun). You can get closer like the sun in the sky. After all, the predecessor of the Sun-Moon Federation had the Sun Martial Spirit. As a royal Martial Spirit, it has an innate foundation! And now in the battle of the abyss, there is a sun martial spirit that can restrain the abyss, which is absolutely beneficial and harmless. ... You can have another real blue silver grass Douluo clone 🙂 Martial spirit: real blue silver grass. Mainly focus on a grassroots, very low innate soul power, take the life route, extend lifespan, and slowly grind to a titled Douluo (you can come out later). The main theme is a taunt. Of course, the essence is to establish contact with Tang Wulin. If possible, do logistics and real-time monitoring 😜
Writing style
The writing style in the front is really not eye-catching, there is no writing at all and it is just an outline, but the later part is really enjoyable to read. It looks much better after detailed writing, which makes people want to continue to follow it.
Just talking about the Holy Spirit Cult, the Holy Spirit Cult has always been active in Dou San's original work. As a result, the senior federal officials written here are as ignorant as fools. Can't they even understand the original work when writing a fan?
Can the author arrange a female doppelganger?
The writing was okay, so that's how Tang Wulin was treated. Tang San's bloodline and so on were all removed, leaving only one original life martial spirit. Ah Yin and Tang Hao were killed. I feel that the behind-the-scenes writing was not very good. What I want to see is the kind of golden age where business is exaggerating, and geniuses don't look like geniuses.
Can you create a character who treats human life as trivial? It's too monotonous.
It's a pity that Douluo's most popular one is 123, and its popularity is gradually declining. It would be better if the timeline is Douluo 1 or 2.
The author would have given Tang San a backlash of faith to weaken him. His avatar acted as Tang Hao to cause chaos and then faked his death to reveal a lot of shocking black information about the Tang Shenwang's ten thousand year plan and the Tang family's plan to become gods. Everyone on the planet would know about it and make the people angry😡Faith backfired on Tang The God King caused his dual god realms to fall, and he was unable to become the talker of the Great God Circle. He was also unable to let other god realms merge into the Great God Circle to come to Douluo Continent. (Douluo: Yali broke off her engagement at the beginning and joined Shrek in the beginning.) In this book, the faith of the Tang God King directly backfired and the dual god realms were shattered.
Well, will the author modify the soul contract later?