LOL: I Really Have to Judge You Harshly

After reading the first 25 chapters, the writing is quite satisfactory. The advantage is that the details of the game are not wrong, but the disadvantage is that the aggressiveness needs to be improved. There is too much emphasis on the people around the target of the attack, and there are a few precise personal attacks, and the degree is not enough. At the same time, the scope of attack is a bit less. There are many things that a person cares about, not only family and dignity. If you want to scold me, I think I should scold them all. (Well, I just don't feel comfortable enough scolding, not even as happy as myself)

S13 Land of Judgment has a maximum of 1700 S14 Korean Server Master. …… …… I will send everyone my previous business card and record of pw's singles

After watching last night's game, you can definitely consider going to Europe and the United States. The LPL is so bad that it's useless to go to that team. In Europe and America for so many years, we have lost, lost, and never knelt down in games. Lpl kneels down for lck almost every year

Lpl has entered the cold winter from now on, basically there will be no big capital investment, and the all-China class has failed again.

I added it to my bookshelf a long time ago and forgot to delete it. I opened it today and remembered why I didn't read it. I only saw one picture. Let me briefly explain. First of all, I am an old GSL. My comments must be biased. The underlying logic of the book is wrong. First of all, you said that the protagonist's outspokenness almost offended Uzi. I think How can a player who knows how ldl is sinking can offend Uzi with his outspoken words? Just one thing, you are a spectator and you complain about Uzi. It is not an exaggeration and it is reasonable. You are a professional player playing in ldl. It is difficult to enter the LPL. Why are you complaining about Uzi? If the little straw bag stands up and connotates Song Yijin eating grass and milking the cows, will normal people support you little straw bag? If you get the system, you will use the power of others to liquidate Rambo. Suppose haha, you talk about other aspects, in the LPL environment, traffic is king, you can really let Uzi break up with you, the competition may not want you because you are not good, can you still have no food in the circle? What status does a Uzi really have? There's nothing you can do about it even if it's a clown without status.

You have a high score, but you can't write novels. The description of the competition part is blocked. The whole thing is not interesting except for the literary and fighting part. The protagonist of the systematic fun story can only pretend to be pitiful. How do you think the readers can have a sense of involvement?

I don't know when stains started to become the god of marketing in e-sports novels. Everyone can see that bin is the one. Stains are the marketing of all the champions in the S competition. Bin is directly based on bragging, and also uses the marketing of the year of retirement as a stepping stone. After watching this World Championship, it is all a marketing team, players never stick to the pot, and there is always a coaching staff problem. Whoever has more traffic will have no problem. I can only say that there is no lifting mechanism. It sucks.

No novel has a male protagonist with five crowns

It can be seen that Lee Sang Hyuk's laning strength is no longer as good as that of his left hand, but once the game enters the middle game and Lee Sang Hyuk's game IQ is online, he can immediately make a comeback in the middle game. This person is too exaggerated. A proper male protagonist of e-sports literature. He was famous for his laning in the early stages of his career. He was at the top of the world when he debuted (s3). He experienced setbacks (s4) and was demoted to the bench (s5). He was number one in the world (s6). He regretfully lost (s7) and failed in the Olympics (s8). He succeeded. Shake (s9) Almost retire (s10) Start again (s11) Regret again (s12) Return to the top (s13) Win consecutively again (s14) What a damn exaggeration, this person... Are we really not the audience in Lee Sang Hyuk's book?

Rt Most of the NPCs in this book are dark and have a gloomy mentality. They were written a little too hard to make the point. I don't believe that normal people are not all like this.

Speaking of Brother Ba, is it really open? I remember the official said it is not open.

The author gives a critical review of faker😊

He loses games every day, he loses even if he can't play in the lane with Scat, and he also loses if he plays an icon.

How to say it! I feel like the author is a bit heroic

1. The purpose of writing a book is to make readers enjoy reading it, not to make yourself enjoy writing it. The pacing of the story is distorted to the point where it's silly lol anchors and players who have nothing to do with the protagonist. Who doesn't know that they are stupid? There is no need for you, the author, to go back and forth. Just pull out the whip when you use the system. There is no need to spend a chapter or two writing these bad words when you have nothing to do. 2. When writing daily routines, there won't be a single point or hook for seven or eight days, and there won't even be any plot advancement. For example, in the past two days, I wrote that the protagonist designed a passerby to watch the game and then the reputation improved. What is the significance of this kind of plot? As long as the protagonist's system is still the sharp review system, the style review cannot be good. Writing this kind of plot is just a waste of words. 3. Updates should be made during competitions. Originally, there is not much space for competitions in LoL articles. I wrote one competition for four or five days. After reading the latter part, I forgot everything I wrote in the previous part. The plot was too interesting to follow.

After supporting the first decision, I will keep it and see if it becomes a eunuch recently. If so, delete it from the bookshelf. But to be honest with the author, you are a real-name online person who posts rank maps and big-level achievements. You are so easy to identify. Unless you don't plan to use this as your own gimmick in the next book, you should not be a eunuch. There are only so many lol readers. Many people with criminal records will remember you after the next book.

Your writing style of both wanting and wanting is really not suitable. Is your main line the competition, the daily routine, or the critical review? Maya and Bin are going back and forth in the water. The pacing of the last dozen chapters has been terrible. Where are you advancing the plot?

I would like to make a suggestion. Most of the people who come to watch lol are old players or players who have retired. If you start writing the basic ending from S11, it will be unfinished or you can't write it anymore. Generally, you start writing it from S5, but recently it is popular to start writing it from S7. Many people don't want to read it at all in S11.

Any competitive event is actually based on results!

Too literary and young, always thinking about doing something profound, boring

Lee Sang Hyuk is a truly systematic e-sports player. The other players are all A, B, C and D in his book. It feels like the system has given him a special attack effect on LPL. And his story is quite good, with setbacks, growth, injuries, and at the end of his career, he even changed his habits in order to continue on the field. Apart from the fact that he has no love, is this not a proper e-sports hero?

It's okay, just cut it. I will never read the author's books again. The credibility of this kind of author is like betting on a dog and promising that he will never bet again.

If you write for three days and don't write for two days, you will die as a eunuch.

I subscribed to more than 100 chapters, but found that updates were discontinued, so I gave up the book without further explanation.

"I finally waited for you, but fortunately I didn't give up."