Family Cultivation: Lin's Path to Immortality

If it were a full-length novel, I don't think this book would be too bad. I feel that the protagonist is still too young. He didn't want to clean up the battlefield immediately after the battle. Instead, he just sat down, while your clan brother was more cautious. In the next chapter, review the battle and write what you need to pay attention to in the future. Then write the spoils more carefully. The family story is more important after development. Group portraits are indispensable for the growth of the protagonist Cheng He and the family. After I finished it, I felt that there was no big problem. It was obvious that although I had lived for the second life, I was still like the new recruit Danzi and needed to grow up. I can only say that it would be nice if the follow-up could be written clearly. It is also a way of writing to set up mental alerts and what to pay attention to in the future. Let me mention it again, why are you writing about immortals and heroes? You have to start thousands of miles away. Only one Zifu occupies such a small territory. It feels like the scope of rule is similar to other novels about foundation building (only personal opinion)

The 400-mile island is only 200 kilometers, and starting from the middle is only 100 kilometers... It takes two and a half days to walk

Thanks for the tip and I wish the new book a great sale! !

Let's also follow the example of those big guys and create a supporting building. If you have any friends who want to make a guest appearance, you can leave a message below. You can be decent, villain, or neutral. The next few characters on Lin's side are "Zhaojing Chengyuan", and there are still many character names to be determined. If you have any ideas, you can leave a message and read it every day! !

If you have any opinions on the follow-up or existing plot, you can leave a message below, and I will watch them one by one in early summer~

This book is going through the signing process, fellow Taoists, hurry up and invest~

There are not too many family stories about Qidian. I have read more than a dozen of them. Some families are united, some are infighting, and some have no sense of existence. I don't know what you book friends think a real cultivation family should be like. You are welcome to leave a message for discussion.