Simultaneous Time Travel: I Only Rely on Myself to Become Stronger

It can be strengthened as much as possible, and the parallel world can be explained. But the protagonist can't be too weak, just don't overwhelm his fighting strength. Cheating in Age of Empires is the real way to play, and anyone who farms is disrespectful of single-player games.

I can only say two words, garbage.

Is the eldest brother so unsure of himself? At a time when you have absolute force, if you don't come up with your own rules and instead work in the hands of others, can people rest assured?

No, why did the King of Ocean and Water share it with you and revealed that it is Ice Escape instead of Water Escape? Even if someone has the authority over ice but is not the King of Polar Regions and Ice, they have said that the main authority over Ocean and Water must still be water. Why is it Ice Escape instead of Water Escape?

Writing about An Miaoyi in one chapter, the final conclusion is that she is close to Ye Fan?

In the first battle after Naruto shared it, did you deliberately cut it or strengthen the wave of Sanshou Fish? I feel that after one battle, more than 70% of the power was wasted. It was basically just throwing away bricks without any skills.

This emperor scared me. I thought that emperor scared me to death

When writing the protagonist of the Lotus Lantern, it is better not to have anything to do with Nezha. Whether it is from the perspective of deification or the adaptation of film and television dramas, Nezha's death is purely deserved. Nezha is set up to be an evil god. Nowadays, film and television novels basically keep the front and middle unchanged, and change the ending. You say he is pitiful, pitiful. What exactly is pitiful about him? You can't tell

Is the author deleting comments? Otherwise there are so few comments? ? ? ?

I think the writing in Armor World is still okay.

Is the source of chaos in the comments just a comment brush? He accounted for 36 of the total 63 comments? ? ?

Why do you have to skip writing? It's so annoying. Then can you write in an open book? For example, if you write about Qing Yu Nian, if you jump to Da Feng and watch the clock, you will open the book. If you jump to Qing Yu Nian, you will open Qing Yu Nian Volume 2 to distinguish.

It was really a wrong move to write about being a black tiger.

You just write fan fiction, why do you have to strengthen your opponents? Even if it is your original novel, a large number of people will leave.

I didn't read it at first, but I flipped through it today, and I'll hit you with "Little Japan". I'll eat it later even if it's 💩. I'll finish this book.

A world of scum mixed into a bunch of extraordinary worlds? The combat performance is too low and looks boring.

The battle scenes are a bit forced for the author

Shentu, not Shencha, don't write it randomly

I can only say that I have read too many Naruto fanfics, and it was very painful to suddenly see that the author did not match a large part of the details and forcibly modified the original work for the sake of the plot. Ninjutsu, character design, and combat power are all broken. Only suitable for beginners who have never been exposed to Naruto. I hope there can be progress in the future.

It is suggested that the author should not make the protagonist too invincible at the beginning of the next book. Other authors avoid the invincibility of the protagonist until the end of the book to suppress the combat power. You have to suppress the combat power at the beginning. The Eternal Kaleidoscope of World War II is still too super model and the Naruto has nothing to write. I don't know what else you can write. Just open a normal The Kaleidoscope is pretty good, and even though I can win against Hanzo, I still have to be wary of Orochimaru from World War II. Orochimaru gave him a look, and even in the Fourth Ninja War, Orochimaru, you don't need to be afraid of the Eternal Kaleidoscope. But there is still potential, but I won't read this book and can't stick with it. Good luck with the next book.

Although I read it in a hurry, I still congratulate the author. It can be seen that the author is very immature, but he has worked hard to write it. It is a bit messy, and some worlds are not finished, but it is not a big problem. Being able to write it like this, I feel that it is the best in the same genre. And I personally feel that the author is growing up, and the later writing is more comfortable to read than the previous one. Come on, author, write another book. I hope the next one will be better.

Xue Zhong and Jiang Ye are both good. I cast ten votes. Isn't this a bit of a bonus? 😁

Why do you have to write about those boring worlds that you have never heard of?

Is the author finished writing Journey to the Wild West and Journey to the Mythical West?

I remember there was still Dian Wei. Where did Dian Wei go? There seem to be several other generals, but I forgot their names.

It is true that the previous writing is not very good, but the Fengshen Bang made me pissed. The author read the Fengshen Romance several times to write it 🙂 The writing style is indeed getting better and better, and the more I read it, the more comfortable it is.

What's going on? Is it over, or is it unfinished? What does the author say?

It's all for you at the end of the month

Although it feels a bit unfinished, it can be regarded as a rare high-quality and complete work in the same genre. It's just a pity. I originally wanted to watch the author's masterpiece, and watch the protagonist step into the path and fruition under the attention of the powerful on the other side.

Has the opening been modified? I feel like I don't get along with Zhang Shuo.