Douluo: Starting from Jiuquvenglong

The previous article is well written, but I can see that you want to write a story without a female protagonist. This is also a good career-oriented male protagonist! But something suddenly went wrong, and a demonic calamity from an ancient Internet article suddenly appeared? ! Then came 26 Artifacts, and another original character that suddenly appeared. To be honest, I don't think there are so many people in Douyi who can adapt to the artifact. This is very poisonous! If you really want the protagonist to have any setbacks, you can write about other things instead of suddenly adding settings. There is another problem. You have had this problem before, that is, if you want to write about a person's changes, you have to spend a chapter writing about his experience and psychological process. To be honest, if a supporting character is an important supporting character, it is okay, but for some supporting characters that are not very important, you have to spend a chapter to write about it. Especially the latter problem is getting worse and worse, making me feel extremely poisonous. For example, the plot between Ning Rongrong and Oscar I saw was not a very important role. You still have to write about how they got engaged and how they showed off their affection! I know you want to enhance their plot but like showing affection for a chapter or two is too exaggerated!

I feel like my IQ is not high and my emotional intelligence is also low.

I almost thought this was a female channel. The author wanted to write about a protagonist who has a big heart and a long-term vision, and can stir up other people's nerves with a few words to achieve his own goals. But in fact, the story is about the decline of the protagonist, but ignores the differences in identity, status, and strength.

This novel is a pity. After reading a few chapters of Wuhun, the plot is okay. As for the setting of the protagonist, I am really speechless. He is just nosy. He gives advice to others inexplicably. There is no logic at all, and others believe it without any doubt.

In the early stage, it was poisonous. The main character talked a lot and talked loudly everywhere. Whenever you meet a character who appears in the original work, you need to say a few words to give guidance 😅

Two rings explode two bones, and the soul bone "heart" is attached to the outside? Guess why the second head bone called the soul "bone" can also absorb energy and evolve for many years? Isn't it a waste of time to attach the soul bone externally?

A six-year-old brat enlightens sixteen-year-old Feng Xiaotian on emotional issues. It's okay for you to enlighten me, but can you stop pretending to be inexplicable? Instructing Ning Rongrong's first soul ring to obtain a gem-like martial spirit. A sect that has been around for hundreds of years doesn't even know what the first soul ring is...    Summary: The author's writing skills are insufficient, and the transitions are stiff. Some descriptions of the situation could be added appropriately. There are also inexplicable pretentiousness, which is very entertaining. The content is okay, but you can have a drink, he will let you know what embarrassment is. If you feel uncomfortable, you can give up.

A bunch of secondary designs. I admire you very much. The second design is completely contradictory to the original work.

This protagonist is really hard to criticize. He is just looking for trouble. His whole family is dead, and he is the only one in the family. There is no point in trying to grab a throne. Anyway, he wants to become a god and go to the divine world. When the time comes, he has to give it to others. Is it necessary?

The protagonist is Der. He is nosy and has no purpose. His empathy is too strong. Please respect the fate of others.

Jiuqu Tenglong

He likes to teach others, is very arrogant, and is involved in personal matters. The author must have put himself into the protagonist when writing it.

I can't stand it anymore. After reading 20 chapters, I feel like the beginning is full of poisonous points 🤤. I heard that the writing at the end is very exciting, but I really can't stand it and I can't stand it anymore.

In the first three chapters, the protagonist is too much a virgin, and she is also suspected of giving away a daughter, so she arranged for Huo Wu to fall in love with Feng Xiaotian. What is the significance of this plot, will it help them?

In the early stage, I ran like a fool and told Tang Yuehua, "What's the benefit? Apart from grabbing the Sugar Buddha, I thought I was going to intercept Hu Xiaowu. Who knew that after Tang 3 left, Xiao Wu would still be his awesome one"

You can say that the protagonist has no brains, and what he said is beyond the cognition of a 6-year-old. You can say that he has brains, and he doesn't keep his mouth shut. He doesn't look like a reborn person at all. I think it's a bit naive to take it for granted.

Chapter 7 failed to survive, and always treated people as fools. The Qibao Glazed Sect has a heritage, not an individual. They have already decided which soul beasts to hunt. And even a casual person will not listen to the advice of strangers. To give a simple example, if I tell you to make money by selling cut cakes, will you really sell cut cakes?😅

Are you self-righteous, thinking that you have a titled Douluo, and dare to show up like this? Is it mentally retarded? You know clearly that Haotian Sect has 8 titled Douluo, but you still dare to fight directly, saying that you want Qian Renxue and Tang San to fight first, but you show off yourself. Can you learn from "Martial Soul Jade Scale Snake, I'm Madly Making Danzhu"? People have intelligence and hide silently behind the scenes.

After reading the comment section, what kind of emperor would he be without a heroine and no descendants? Are you crazy?

What kind of rubbish are you writing? You know how to meddle in your own business every day.

It was indeed a sudden inspiration, which made the contents of the fifth volume and the previous four volumes seem very abrupt without excess or foreshadowing. To be honest, I was very anxious about writing this book. The route taken by the protagonist destined that many original plots cannot be written. If you want to make the book longer, you can only write a lot of original plots. The two Douluo Sanjiang fanfics I published at the same time both collapsed, which somewhat affected my creative mentality. The fifth volume and the subsequent plots will not affect the finale I planned. I think it can be written and the impact will not be big. There are more things to write, and the number of updates every day can increase.

What is the significance of writing in detail about the Soul Master Competition? ? Over a hundred chapters are so boring that you can just skip it.

I won't talk about Feng Xiaotian earlier, but unfortunately his talent is normal. But Ning Rongrong, a 6-year-old auxiliary soul master, is too disgusting to deliberately murder her by stimulating her to absorb the super-aged top soul beast (Diamond Mammoth). Without considering the consequences of doing so

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. A six-year-old preached to someone who was 16 years old, and he also used provoking methods to make Ning Rongrong absorb the ultimate soul ring. Such malicious things are really not afraid of being killed by two Douluo the next day. It can be seen that he is a novice author.

After reading a few chapters, I didn't want to read anymore. I'll help you avoid the thunder. The protagonist is 6 years old, and the strongest one is a housekeeper who is over 80. You saved Feng Xiaotian, but you wanted to teach others a lesson, and you also had to argue with Ning Rongrong. Speaking of the West, the other thing is to go to Tang Yuehua to talk about Tang San and Tang Hao, to strengthen Tang Sanchun, and to find Ma Hongjun. It is useless to just plan here and there, and it will make all the foresight in the early stage useless. Can we move forward? If you practice diligently in the early stage, you can definitely go to Tiandou Royal Academy to contact Dugu Yanlingling to plan the immortal grass, recruit Dugu Bo as your backer, find an opportunity to steal the 100,000-year-old Blue Silver Emperor soul bone, and later on, you can completely treat King Lanling as the sixth soul ring. The Seven Soul Rings are going to jump into the faces of Tang Hao, Tangshan and Ning Fengzhi. If you were not the author, Sword Bone Douluo would come to your door on the second day, and if you knew about someone else, Tang Hao and Tang San, Tang Hao would smash you to death with a hammer, and you would be considered clean. Dancing so much

Summarizing the author's background and having a level 80 butler, this configuration is very suitable for Dou Yi's environment, because this setting can make readers more comfortable and allow the author to start with more complete descriptions or simpler descriptions, because in Dou Yi's environment, if you are alone, you will be dead and have no backer. Because this is a novel, your protagonist will definitely have the ability to absorb soul rings beyond levels. If you don't Describe the backer or the background that comes with it, then it becomes a specimen, (this is the identity and backer), (Martial Spirit Jiuqu Tenglong) The setting of this martial spirit including the parents is very clever, because in nature, banyan trees are generally entangled with vines. The combination of these two is very attractive to readers, and can create greater attraction and top-level martial arts, and the soul bone tree heart is attached to the opening. I don't know if these preludes are just an idea or what you think. It's an excellent prelude, but your shortcomings in some chats or the character of the protagonist are not generally large. To be precise, it is superfluous, because a six-year-old child talking to a 16-year-old person, although his development is relatively fast, is still only six years old, which will make the reader a little confused. Originally, in the early stage, you made such low-level mistakes, and you can directly dismiss half of them. Furthermore, when you met Ning Rongrong, the conversation was also low-level, so he I can see from the comments section that both storylines feel superfluous. However, the starting setting of your homepage is to become a king. I can still accept Feng Xiaotian's persuasion. Although the sentences are very disturbing, Ning Rongrong's part is also disgusting. Regardless of your idea, let him stay in the sect or practice harder. These two language arts, you wrote these two are disgusting.

Recommend the author of "Douluo: Mortals Beginning from Blue Silver Grass", don't delete it

Did the Golden Dragon King and Silver Dragon King just snap and die?

The main character is too daddy and talks too much. When I see an original character, I have to add a few lines. I am speechless.

Go and say hello to Qian Renxue? What are you thinking, kill all the other princes in the empire, and you, a little duke, are acting like this, while two titled Douluo are doing nothing for you?