I'm Really Not Song Qingshu

Compared to the book about Brother Dog traveling through Linghu Chong, this one is still a bit inferior. In the Linghu Chong book, Brother Gou's words are mainly sincere and will not be used to make jokes just for the sake of making fun of them. Instead, they have the flavor of the original work. Occasionally, a piece of nonsense comes out, and the readers think it is correct. There are too many words in this book, and there are many scenes that are not read and borrowed directly from the original work, which will lead to a strong sense of tearing apart the characters. If that book was on point, this one is a bit overdone. There is still a lot of room for improvement.

It feels not as good as that one, and this track is very niche, which tests the author's strength, and the character will collapse if he is not careful. Moreover, Shi Potian said that sometimes a child's heart is like a holy mother. In this era, it is no longer pleasing.

The writing is okay, but the food looks a bit ugly. The author pounced on me before I even took two bites after someone else made it.

This is the first time for the author to write a book. He came up with the idea of ​​writing a book because he had read the works of the guy next door and liked Brother Dog very much. ꒳ᵒ꒳ There are indeed some bad points in it, but I will try my best to improve it. Some readers previously said that the pace was too fast and the perspective was not focused on Brother Dog. Changes have been made in recent chapters. This book only writes about this world. The main author particularly likes the round Zhou Zhiruo (⁼̴̤̆ ꇴ ⁼̴̤̆), so it is all written according to the plot of the TV series. I hope you can give me some more suggestions.

There is a similar book called Shi Potian Travels Through Linghu Chong. It is very well written and was written earlier than you.

I just read a book about a bitch who traveled through time and became Linghu Chong.

Which Linghu Chong book is not on the shelves yet? This one is here.

There is no need to wear the Jin Yong style. The ancient dragon style is very good. On the contrary, it will be more interesting and more attractive to readers. It will give a sense of déjà vu as a husky blends into a pack of wolves.

Look at the dog brother next door in Huashan, and then look at your dog brother. He became invincible within a few days after soul piercing. Your tone of voice when you were invincible at the beginning was not right. 🙂 Read more of the original work and don't add your own thoughts and tone to the dog brother. That will only cause the character to collapse and the book to explode.

Waiting for Brother Gou to be reborn is worth it. Brother Gou has been quite busy recently, being reborn as Linghu Chong and Song Qingshu...

Qidian's exclusive dog brother's track has started

What's going on recently? Lu Mingfei came back from everywhere, Huo Yuhao made several kills in a row, and Shi Potian went everywhere

You copied too quickly

The protagonist gave me the feeling not of being mentally immature, but of being a fool 🙂

I gave up when Shi Potian was stabbed by Zhao Min. Even the Yitian Sword couldn't hurt Zhang Wuji. Brother Gou was sincere and didn't want to think about it. How could he be stabbed so easily? It's meaningless to write about it like this.

A bunch of people followed the trend and wrote about Brother Dog, but they ended up being eunuchs after just a few dozen chapters.

This dog brother is indeed not as interesting as the one written by the dog brother next door from Huashan. Please try to figure it out more, otherwise, if the character of the dog brother collapses, the book will collapse.

This is the second book I've seen where the main character is Shi Potian, Linghu Chong

Brother Gou, are you planning to open a circuit in the heavens?

I like it very much. Have you eaten yet? Update with me quickly.