Hong Kong Crossover: My Monthly Intelligence System

The first ten chapters are already out, and you're telling me what the point of your cheat system is? Aside from giving a name at the end of the first chapter, I haven't seen it even once since. 🙁 You might as well not write a cheat system at all.

The protagonist's cheat ability is a bit useless, and he's a bit too obsessed with romance.

It's watchable, but it's a bit cluttered, and the plot isn't blended together very smoothly.

It feels like it's going in circles, not clear at all.

After looking at a few pages, I became increasingly confused and couldn't understand what the intelligence system meant!

Author, if you like Amy Yip and Veronica Yip, I'll vote for you with my monthly tickets.

I suggest the author write about Hong Kong entertainment, romance, stamp collecting, and intelligence gathering—these would fit your premise perfectly.

The movie's story is a bit old; I vaguely remember it, but not much. It's difficult to create a self-guided experience like other fanfiction, where missing elements leaves you completely confused. There are too many movie characters and not enough explanation. The exciting moments aren't particularly prominent, especially the classic climaxes. For example, lines from "A Chinese Odyssey" and "A Better Tomorrow" featuring Mark Gor, like Gao Fei and Clams spitting white foam.

To be honest, it's a bit messy and doesn't have any highlights.

This is the person 😏