Wilderness Night Watchman

It's me in the red box↓

The money here is too valuable, especially for the protagonist, so Xiao Su basically does not need cultivation resources 😰

It would be better to polish the plot and character development. It is really a book with potential! ! !

The reasoning part in the middle and later stages of the book has a sense of God's vision, a bit of a drama, but the book is a good book, the writing is smooth and the plot is closely connected. The holes dug are basically filled in. It is rare. It can be seen that there is an outline and arrangement. It is enjoyable to read.

The plot is still very good, each character is vividly portrayed and has his own little story which is good. After reading the whole book, I didn't find any bad points. The ending was also very good, but the progress was a little faster. I thought I could write more.

As a cool novel, I automatically blocked all other flaws, but there was one point that I really couldn't stand and made me complain. ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ Why is there so little money given to the protagonist! ? Has the author never seen money? The protagonist has helped with so many things. What kind of SSS-level tasks are you talking about? Isn't it funny that the payment is 50 million 😰? Adding two extra zeros is considered a small amount 😂 How much does it cost to be the male lead's boyfriend? 400,000🥹Is this her strength? The analogy is equivalent to the fact that the daughter of the boss who has absolute control over hw sells it for less than the price of a top-of-the-range M9.

In Chapter 134, the national border post was attacked by hundreds of people, and then they didn't ask for any support? Even if it wasn't there at the beginning, it wouldn't be reported after the end? A bit outrageous

I have read part of it. The advantage is that the story is good, the rhythm is good, and the writing is also good. The biggest problem is that the situation at home and abroad is different.

The old-fashioned scary ones, sometimes the high-level officials are targeting him, and there are also classic police beauties, ancient martial arts beauties, hidden dragon beauties, 🙂

Except for the harem part, the plot is still watchable, but the harem content is really a bit nauseating. It seems like a woman goes into heat when she sees the protagonist, and the protagonist wants to have sex with everyone who comes.

To be honest, I might as well rename it "Urban Detective: My Cheats Can See Through". When I first read it, I thought it was about cultivating immortals, but then the style changed into a purely urban writing style, with tasks, cheats to solve cases, and flirting with girls. Although the writing is beautiful, I feel that the layout is too low, with such strong cheating results in the game life.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a purely story-based novel. Nowadays, the novels have some extraordinary elements and are full of settings, data, training and upgrading, and pretending to be a slap in the face. They have no story at all and are all setting-injection articles. Finally, I have found another one that suits my appetite. Come on.

I finally understand why harem stories are not popular anymore. It turns out that the people who loved reading harem stories earlier have all gotten married and are tired of women.

Many novels have a big common problem. That is, many plots have a relationship with women, involving this woman and that woman. What kind of routine is behind it, you can understand it at a glance

Why did the author think of giving the protagonist such a bad name, Lin Xiaosu? It's as disgusting as that NPC Xu Xiaoshou.

What kind of weak name is this protagonist? Why not just call him Lin Su? It must be called Lin Xiaosu

I saw Qianlong abandoning the book after rejecting him and refusing to let him in. I really couldn't stand it anymore. It was too blunt. It felt like it was just creating an environment for the protagonist to learn skills. If everyone was like the protagonist, would this institution still be the strongest? Talents are given up directly? Will there be any talents left? Is it still a confidential agency? Is this counter-espionage? An organization let the protagonist go based on this alone, and the talented people are no longer needed, and the highest organization? Anyway, I gave up the book, mainly because I couldn't stand it anymore.

Fa Xiao is beautiful, the stunning woman lying in the coffin, the official came to a stunning beauty, the national mysterious organization: Qianlong. This is only three chapters. It's a visual sense that the soldier king protected the school beauty 20 years ago. This is a lot of drama. The starting point is really useless.

Hydra, a villain organization, appears throughout the book, which is tiring.

There are very few comments. Is there any Shen Nong?

Damn, air and space fighter jets are almost going to space. Damn, are you still fighting alone and using swordsmanship😢

The number of words in this book is very good. Second, there are too many beauties and the writing is very good. Third, extraordinary understanding, the writing is too ordinary. If you steal an immortal skill, you need to learn some marksmanship, driving skills, and language knowledge. If you learn some martial arts, you can't do it at the beginning and you have to learn it again. Taoism is even worse. You can even learn it from a farmer with scraps. Once the protagonist steals an immortal skill, you have to learn it again. The same goes for opening the secret realm of the human body. The author is in martial arts, and Taoism overwhelms the protagonist. Immortal magic assists in boiling water. For water pressure magic is to pressure this novel. Stealing wisdom? Because the title of the book on water pressure is outrageous, it is free of charge. Off topic essay

Brothers and sisters, here comes another journey of snow, moon, wind and flowers!

There are just too many female characters. Everyone is a little ambiguous with the male protagonist

Am I reading a mystery novel? What the hell is this?

I read The Night Watcher in the Blue Sky before and it was very good and in line with my taste. This time the author has published a new book. I will continue to read it. Hehe

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I read more than 60 chapters in one go, just one word: OK

Can the 12 monthly passes this month be refined?

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