From Huo Yuanjia to Godhood by Grinding Proficiency

After reading the introduction of this book, I knew it was not good. The world level fluctuates high and low!

The skill levels of this book are: (Beginner, Proficient, Small Success, Dacheng, Perfection, Peak, Ultimate Shortcut), as long as there are only the first five, there is still the possibility of success, but it is a pity that this is no different from the perfection followed by the Dzogchen, the half-step peak Dzogchen.

The castrated protagonist is very honest and strictly abides by the laws of the Qing Dynasty, just like an old-fashioned man.

I won't mention the author's incorrect views. The most important thing is that he doesn't understand the world at all! The conflict between Huo Yuanjia and Qin Xiong is inevitable, because the root cause lies with Huo Yuanjia. Huo Yuanjia has won many games in the ring, and he has accepted all kinds of apprentices, including a lot of gangsters and scumbags. It is impossible for these apprentices not to cause trouble. Even if they are not with Qin Xiong, they will also conflict with other people. The author simply doesn't understand how shameful it was to be cuckolded in the old society. Not to mention beating Huo Yuanjia's apprentice half to death, even to death, Huo Yuanjia had no shame to jump out and speak for his apprentice. Jianghu people value etiquette and Taoism. If Huo Yuanjia knew that his apprentice had done this, he would immediately tie up his apprentice and send him to Qin Xiong's house to plead guilty, and from then on he would be weak in front of Qin Xiong. This is Jianghu.

A low-level martial arts world in the late Qing Dynasty is so obscene, and you still write a fart high-level martial arts world. If you practice low-level martial arts with a broken iron cloth shirt, you will be seven or eight times as strong as the human body. If your body is used as a bullet, you are not practicing martial arts, you are bragging.

Just like the title, if you see this, it's enough. The combat power behind has collapsed. The world we go to later is written in a mess. You can just say that the protagonist goes to pick up girls, have a harem, and experience the laws of different worlds. That's fine, and you can make do with it. The result is that the protagonist looks like a grandfather, a dog licker, and a holy mother. The three major poisonous points make people speechless. The author is an old author, but he still makes such mistakes and doesn't want to make money? The whole book itself is a bit awkward emotionally. If you want to start a harem, you have to accept everything all the way, but in the end, it's a mess. And in terms of combat power, either you start with an invincible flow from the beginning, or you start step by step, from low to high. The result is that as soon as you learn to walk, you think about running and studying flying, which is a mess.

You stole Uncle Jiu's skills in Renjia Town and still dare to stay in Renjia Town, you are awesome!

Author, can you post some pictures in the novel, such as Huo Cuiting, Tie Yan, Bai Yinghong, and those characters who are not female characters but occupy a large role: Huo Yuanjia, Huang Feihong, Qin Xiong, Zhen Sanhuan, Huang Wenfa, etc. At the same time, when the protagonist goes to other worlds, he will also post character pictures in this way. Therefore, can he post character pictures in the novel like this in every world where the protagonist goes?

Is Chapter 150 written smoothly? Do you think it's too annoying to have too much money and too many people watching? Or do you want to filter readers again?

Walking around the astronomical world, the first interface is okay. It crashes when I change the map! Commonly known as "stepping too big to break the egg". If you don't have that kind of writing style, don't write about astronomy.