From Huo Yuanjia to Godhood by Grinding Proficiency

You can tell this book is no good just by reading the synopsis; the world level fluctuates wildly!

The skill levels in this book are: (Beginner, Proficient, Minor Success, Major Success, Perfection, Pinnacle, Near-Mastery). If it only had the first five, it might have been a hit. Unfortunately, this is superfluous; it's no different from adding "Great Perfection" after "Perfect," or "Half-Step to Peak Great Perfection."

The castrated protagonist is very honest and strictly abides by the laws of the Qing Dynasty, like an old-fashioned scumbag.

Leaving aside the author's warped values, the most important thing is that he completely misunderstands the martial arts world! The conflict between Huo Yuanjia and Qin Xiong was inevitable because the root of the problem lay with Huo Yuanjia. Huo Yuanjia won many matches in the arena, which made him arrogant. He took in any kind of disciple, including a bunch of hooligans and scoundrels.

You fantasize about a low-brow martial arts world from the late Qing Dynasty like that, and you still dare to write about a high-brow martial arts world? If a low-brow martial artist trains in some crappy Iron Shirt skill and thinks they have seven or eight times the strength of a human body, that they can be bulletproof, then you're not practicing martial arts, you're just bragging.

As the title suggests, you can stop here; the power levels have already collapsed. The worlds they go to later are poorly written. You could say the protagonist goes to pick up girls, builds a harem, and experiences the laws of different worlds, and that's watchable, maybe. The result? The protagonist acts like a sycophantic old man, a lapdog, and a saint. These three major flaws are baffling.

You stole Uncle Jiu's martial arts manual in Renjia Town and still dared to stay there? You're something else!

Author, could you please include some pictures in the novel, such as Huo Cuiting, Tie Yan, Bai Yinghong, and those characters who are not female but have a lot of screen time: Huo Yuanjia, Huang Feihong, Qin Xiong, Zhen Sanhuan, Huang Wenfa, etc. Also, could you include character pictures in the novel for each world the protagonist goes to?

Did you get carried away with writing 150 chapters? Did you feel overwhelmed by the sheer amount of money and the large number of readers? Or did you want to further filter your readers?

The "Wandering Through the Heavens" game is mostly fine on the first screen. It crashes as soon as you switch maps! It's like taking too big a step and ending up with a sore spot. If you don't have the writing skills and the right approach, don't write about "Wandering Through the Heavens."