Begin with Huo Yuanjia to Gain Proficiency and Become a God

After reading the introduction of this book, I knew it was not good. The world level fluctuates high and low!

The skill levels of this book are: (Beginner, Proficient, Small Success, Dacheng, Perfection, Peak, Ultimate Shortcut), as long as there are only the first five, there is still the possibility of success, but it is a pity that this is no different from the perfection followed by the Dzogchen, the half-step peak Dzogchen.

The castrated protagonist is very honest and strictly abides by the laws of the Qing Dynasty, just like an old-fashioned man.

I won't mention the author's incorrect views. The most important thing is that he doesn't understand the world at all! The conflict between Huo Yuanjia and Qin Xiong is inevitable, because the root cause lies with Huo Yuanjia. Huo Yuanjia has won many games in the ring, and he has accepted all kinds of apprentices, including a lot of gangsters and scumbags. It is impossible for these apprentices not to cause trouble. Even if they are not with Qin Xiong, they will also conflict with other people. The author simply doesn't understand how shameful it was to be cuckolded in the old society. Not to mention beating Huo Yuanjia's apprentice half to death, even to death, Huo Yuanjia had no shame to jump out and speak for his apprentice. Jianghu people value etiquette and Taoism. If Huo Yuanjia knew that his apprentice had done this, he would immediately tie up his apprentice and send him to Qin Xiong's house to plead guilty, and from then on he would be weak in front of Qin Xiong. This is Jianghu.

A low-level martial arts world in the late Qing Dynasty is so obscene, and you still write a fart high-level martial arts world. If you practice low-level martial arts with a broken iron cloth shirt, you will be seven or eight times as strong as the human body. If your body is used as a bullet, you are not practicing martial arts, you are bragging.

Just like the title, if you see this, it's enough. The combat power behind has collapsed. The world we go to later is written in a mess. You can just say that the protagonist goes to pick up girls, have a harem, and experience the laws of different worlds. That's fine, and you can make do with it. The result is that the protagonist looks like a grandfather, a dog licker, and a holy mother. The three major poisonous points make people speechless. The author is an old author, but he still makes such mistakes and doesn't want to make money? The whole book itself is a bit awkward emotionally. If you want to start a harem, you have to accept everything all the way, but in the end, it's a mess. And in terms of combat power, either you start with an invincible flow from the beginning, or you start step by step, from low to high. The result is that as soon as you learn to walk, you think about running and studying flying, which is a mess.

You stole Uncle Jiu's skills in Renjia Town and still dare to stay in Renjia Town, you are awesome!

Author, can you post some pictures in the novel, such as Huo Cuiting, Tie Yan, Bai Yinghong, and those characters who are not female characters but occupy a large role: Huo Yuanjia, Huang Feihong, Qin Xiong, Zhen Sanhuan, Huang Wenfa, etc. At the same time, when the protagonist goes to other worlds, he will also post character pictures in this way. Therefore, can he post character pictures in the novel like this in every world where the protagonist goes?

Is Chapter 150 written smoothly? Do you think it's too annoying to have too much money and too many people watching? Or do you want to filter readers again?

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​? Can the protagonist study some technologies and genetic medicines in the technological world? If he travels to the technological world, he will not be so embarrassed. The technology of the technological world will help the protagonist to enlightenment Also, can the protagonist's realm be precipitated and improved too fast? Although it is very exciting, it will not look good later. While the realm is low now, go to some middle and low-level worlds to gain experience and refine your mind. Stones from other mountains can be used to attack jade. I like to watch interesting worlds. The above are my personal suggestions and opinions for reference only

Walking around the astronomical world, the first interface is okay. It crashes when I change the map! Commonly known as "stepping too big to break the egg". If you don't have that kind of writing style, don't write about astronomy.

Doesn't the author even know about the dealer's commission? No matter who wins, the banker has a commission ratio of 1% to 10%. If there is an upset banker, he will lose everything. Is there a fool to be the banker?

Forget it about the front, if the rest of the world is full of actors' faces, it would be very poisonous, and I don't think those actors are very beautiful. In Jin Yong's novels, Xiao Longnu and Huang Rong are considered to be the top performers in the beauty industry, but I don't think their actors are so beautiful. They are not as good as descriptions in words, giving readers some room for imagination.

This novel has both good and bad qualities. Let me see if it is good or bad.

The first story is really not that good. In the movie, Huo Yuanjia's troublemaker is clearly his apprentice. To solve future troubles, first kill his apprentices, then get rid of all the bad thoughts and leave the good ones behind. Just think about how the Kuomintang lost. It's because of the pile of rubbish he has.

I only saw more than a hundred chapters... The rest of the battle power was broken down by flipping through the table of contents. The progress was too fast. Many interesting plots just wrote a framework and then jumped to the next world. It was quite fun to watch at first, but I felt relieved after having to stay in the world of Jueling for 50 years. I have never seen the mortals cultivating immortals and the like. 😂Legend of Sword and Fairy, etc., I skipped them without any sense of immersion. The best ones start at the end of the period. The more the better in this new world, it depends on whether it can be written well and whether the characters can be brought to life. . .

A Chinese Ghost Story starts directly from the second season, Xiaoqian is no longer needed, and there is only one female protagonist in each of the previous two worlds, and the missing girls will not be included.

It's really rubbish. When we get to the eternal world, everything else will just become a commonplace.

Do you also want to write about Pangu playing basketball?

Garbage

🙂 The first 130 chapters of this book are interesting, but the rest of the book is written by Chunchun Studio

If you are successful in martial arts, why don't you deal with the pawnshop owner?

It feels a bit strange, but anyone who interferes with the protagonist even if he says something unpleasant must be killed; the protagonist has the ability and saves one person. It's the Holy Mother. If we filter according to this standard, do the remaining people still have basic morals? The world is full of ghosts, directly filled with Cthulhu, weird and demonic.

Taking advantage of the treasure trove of gangsters, I would like to recommend the new book "I Engaged in Criminal Investigation in Ancient Times: Beauties Are All Gangsters", which is about martial arts detectives.

Han Li can hold the Sky Palm Bottle, which is awesome.

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In fact, it is not about gradual growth and upgrading in a step-by-step manner. Each copy has combat power growth. Interesting copy and interesting plot are the real attractions. From the growth of the protagonist in the first world, we can tell that it is an invincible novel. The first world is invincible by force, and the second world is invincible by supernatural powers. From here you can either go to Hong Kong to see ghosts, read fortune tellers, read Feng Shui, catch ghosts, rescue people, etc., All kinds of masterful demeanor, all kinds of pretense to pick up girls. For example, if you show Feng Shui to the rich and become their honored guests, everyone will support you and please you. As long as the writing is better, it will be more enjoyable. Another example is the trick in the first commandment, which is incomprehensible to ordinary people, but is easy for the protagonist. He can also show off in various ways to save people. If you don't want to write these, you can also write some modern urban feminist dramas, all kinds of plots that destroy the three views. Let the protagonist break their dignity forcefully and let them know that they cannot have both. Reshape the correct three views. If she is stubborn, she will destroy everything. Interspersed with some such dungeons, it would be better than infinite upgrades to fight monsters. I think so!