Dragon Clan: I, Lu Mingfei, the Great Magician!

I think there is no conflict between Lily and marriage. Koji can marry Rei and then Eri.

The author has ruined himself. There is nothing wrong with introducing the setting of Coronzon, but why do you have to choose the most outrageous and unacceptable method... God damn pontine surgery can still work (not to mention there is a hidden story behind it, this plot was already completely broken when it appeared)

Not because he stayed in Academy City for so long. He hasn't even had a physical examination, and he can still be controlled by pontine splitting surgery. Dude, you're kidding me.

Why are you here when a female channel posts a male channel?

It's a very interesting idea. Let's change the title of the book. This one has no special features at the moment. It might as well be Lu Mingfei Returns from the Magic Forbidden. This kind of formulaic title can at least attract some fans of the Magic Forbidden or Double Chef book.

Xiami: Why do I feel like something is missing ( )

Nianghua Lu Mingfei and Nianghua Chu Zihang are both the kind of characters who are not out of place no matter whether they are married alone or not.

It's so evil. Can we still see the Magic Ban in 2024?

It can only be said that there is a reason why the forbidden theme is not popular.

The heroine is really religious and has religious beliefs. This feels a bit strange, as the protagonist of the novel. The experience and abilities obtained in the forbidden world are very powerful if they are only used as a plug-in + character creation, but the protagonist's true belief in God is equivalent to adding an existence above the protagonist's head that is always higher than the protagonist. This is quite difficult for a male video online novel, especially since it is not important to the plot at all. Without this setting, it will not affect a hair, but adding it will make people uncomfortable.

Good guy, I've read too many Warhammer articles recently, and my brain automatically breaks sentences, "Lu Mingfei, the Great Demon, the Mage"

Lu Mingfei's character of the royal sister is quite interesting The protagonist is very powerful, can act cute and coquettish, and sometimes has a motherly and sometimes royal sister temperament. In fact, it looks very much like the character of the dimensional witch Ichihara Yuko

Sexual transformation Mingfei... Teacher Daiya?

I feel that the plot is a bit broken. How should I put it? It feels like some plots that should be in the later stage have been put in the front and spewed out at once In addition, there are too many things that do not fit the style of the painting.

Alas, can the modal particles be optimized? How many Chinese people speak with "oh"? "That's right" "Actually, it's Xx" according to the conversation habits of Chinese people, it's a bit like mental illness. This type of modal particles in light novels are completely leftover from online translation, and serious publishers will remove them when they localize them.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you read the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously formed, and the voices of praise became louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both inside and outside. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave dazzling traces. Updating may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates. So, don't stop, update update update update

Can you change the scene where Bangzisheng and Ling were caught? The characters are completely broken and extremely poisonous. Obviously they have been handled very well before. It is impossible not to see this poisonous point.

I think it's quite unreasonable. The original article said that Zero's bloodline was replaced by Lu Mingze to the next generation level, so he was captured so easily? Of course, the above is just my personal opinion, and I don't mean anything against others. I'm just raising my own questions.

By the way, this is related to A Certain Magical Index, will Kamijou make a cameo? It's closely related to magic and dragons. I feel like I can make an appearance, and as long as he's around, basically no one will die.

I don't think this person is Lu Mingfei

Do chapters 98 to 118 have any significance?

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Does it look good🤓

The writing in the first two chapters is pretty good and edible. Which CP is it? Or harem

You are indeed a fan with great ideas. Good luck to the author.

Is there a predecessor to this book? It feels like there is a lot of interspersed content.

The protagonist of an Internet novel in Simplified Chinese is actually a Christian. I wonder if you, the author, are making history. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore. Bye👋