Douluo: I, Huo Yuhao, Am Not Cheating

Warning before reading: The world view of this book should be a follow-up to the comic version of Douluo Yi, and can be used as a parallel world after the development of the King's Road plot. (Probably~shhhhh) Huo Gua's martial spirit also has the necessary magical modifications, but currently (Chapter 20) there is no front-end ice attribute of the second martial spirit, and there is no Electrolux. (Wow! Huo Gua was actually cut) The Tang Sect is still in decline, but the mentality of the current sect leader Tang Ya is much better than in the original work. Beibei's character has also changed. He has been fooling around with Xu Sanshi for too long and has become a bit mean, but it doesn't hurt! After all, good brothers are meant to be used as traps 🤓 Shrek assumed the Wuhun Palace's obligation to help civilians awaken for free, and also established three civilian academies, Lanba, Haotian, and Jiubao, and selected students from the three academies to become Shrek's outer academy students. I have to say that this change is very pleasing, at least it is much better than the Shrek in most fics. Final comment: (probably) The development of the King's Way has a bright future, and you can take a look at it, unless the eunuch or the author obtains the power of the magnetic field (goes crazy)

The plot from Dai Huabin to Zhou Yi has too much nonsense during the battle, and this part is too long. After the 2-3 chapters of the fight with Dai, 4-5 chapters of Zhou Yi's are enough! This part doesn't look very good.

Looking at the feedback from book friends, it seems that many people don't like Tang Wutong. Here is a post, I want to listen carefully to everyone's opinions. Let's see if we need to cut off Tang Wutong's line. If the number of likes exceeds one-fifth of the number of readers, I will probably delete it. The clues related to Tang Wutong will gradually fade away.

Can the heroine have a senior sister? A gentle and caring senior sister would be the best ()

When is the time to let the protagonist recognize the reality? Stop worrying about this and calculating. The world line has been cut off and you still don't want to give up and see the world with the arrogance of a time traveler. The natives are not stupid, let alone stupid. Tang San wanted to make a plan, but he still hadn't figured out what he would do or whether he would do it as he originally planned. The fear was just because the person involved didn't have the confidence and strength. It didn't matter if the time traveler didn't die. Find your own direction. As long as you have talent, opportunities, luck and connections, it is not a problem. Whether you want to be a dog or not is not a matter of your own choice. Summary: When will the author arrange an opportunity to make up for the defects in character and mentality? It makes me feel uncomfortable╯╰

How can I put it, this book is well written so far, but it does lack a bit of appeal in several aspects, such as martial arts. The first attraction of Douluo should be the various martial spirits and various soul skills. However, this book first establishes that there is only one martial spirit, which is equivalent to 9 less soul skills compared with twin martial arts. Secondly, the main character's biggest ally, Electrolux, is gone. This means that there is one less martial spirit and one less system. The main character's current multi-element affinity is a god-level talent in the Holy Demon Continent. Without the plot of the divine seal, there is less sense of expectation. Again, martial souls and soul skills are always different. Even if you have 10 or 20 soul rings with soul skills, in my opinion, no martial soul brings as much pleasure to people. What martial souls bring is uncertainty, that is, no one knows what the next skill is and what the martial soul can evolve into? What are the disadvantages? What to add? This gambler-like mentality cannot be compared to the fixed skills brought by the soul ring, because the improvement of the martial soul brings substantial strength and has no upper limit, but the soul skill has an upper limit. Even if it is a god-level soul skill, its highest level is the god level, and the martial soul is uncertain. Then, there is Spirit Eye. Unlike other martial arts, it is possible for the weak to defeat the strong. If its mental power is higher than others, others will definitely be unable to defeat it. If its mental power is lower than others, it is basically useless. It does not have the passionate feeling of other protagonists. Therefore, the author arranged for the protagonist to practice swordsmanship. It is good, but it is not a martial soul, so it does not feel that refreshing. In Douluo, if it is not a martial soul, there is always a feeling that it is not one's own, it is just an external force, so it is not very satisfying. To be honest, the author might as well arrange for the protagonist to obtain a martial spirit, or arrange for the protagonist to meet Electrolux, and then go to the Holy Demon Continent to play. After all, Electrolux died too suddenly in the original work, and Huo Yuhao did not resurrect Electrolux, the undead one. Magic is useless in Huo Yuhao's hands. It's a waste. It's heartbreaking to see. Now the protagonist has control over multiple elements. Not to mention the light undead magic, all types of magic can be used. It is simply the talent that Electrolux wants most (a mad scientist who can try anything). These are only my personal opinions. The author should not abandon logic just for the sake of some pleasure. The biggest failure of fan fiction is the lack of logic. Monthly tickets are given

Douluo's ecological zone is alive again, which is gratifying. I am very curious about Tang San's position in this book (the author please do not disclose it) Obviously, the master in this book is undoubtedly a time traveler. The historical plot in Chapter 1 (2) also reveals that Tang San also invited the master to ascend to the God Realm. Tang San is no longer the original feudal miser, but has changed (this can be seen from the partial spread of Xuantian Kung in the Tang Sect). The calculations of the past are no longer real calculations. This can be seen from the fact that Tang Xiaoqi no longer divides his soul Secondly, what kind of attitude and status does the first match and the second match play? This Shrek is no longer bound by the glory of ten thousand years, but due to the high moral ground, it is impossible to only send random disciples every time, just as a trial. I am very curious about what role the sun and the moon play. It is impossible for the sun and the moon to start a war. The fighting power of the Douluo Three Kingdoms in this article is not the same as that of the sun and the moon. In addition, the Douluo Three Kingdoms and Shrek are already not on the same page. The political and economic structure has changed greatly compared to the original work. This work also takes into account the phenomenon of brain drain, which is rare. Referring to Shrek's style, there may be a group of international friends. There may be many more people like Xu Tianzhen in Sun and Moon. After all, it has become a real lighthouse now. There is also a question of becoming a god that Douluo literature cannot avoid. Whether it is to inherit the god's position and wisdom (from the previous master) or to create one's own god's position (emphasis on unintentional insertion) remains to be revealed by the author. I don't hope that if I really create my own god, it will be as bloody as Peerless Light, purely relying on cheats. Douluo's self-created god and the divine seal's god-like death are similar. The same is true for Douluo Yi and his two former gods, the old Poseidon and the Angel God. It is impossible for the old Poseidon to protect the ocean in the first place in order to become a god, and it is impossible for the angel god to protect humans in order to become a god. They all grew up unintentionally. Yun Ming from Douluo Three is obsessed with becoming a god, but he is not valued by the lower class people. There are even a lot of people who hate him, so how can he succeed in becoming a god?

The writing is still a bit weak. In fact, it is a very good idea to make the whole environment better and normal, but the description and characterization of the characters are a bit strange. The first volume chose the most thankless way to deal with Zhou Yi. It can be written well or badly. It is normal for her to become better when the overall environment is good. Of course, keeping her the same as the original and then torturing her can also make readers happy. However, it took a lot of time to portray her as a complicated mad woman who sacrificed her cultivation future for the academy, became a psychopath, hates geniuses, but is also a bit mean-spirited. In the end, she sacrificed herself to eliminate the evil soul master. However, it did not promote the plot and the growth of the protagonist, and it made people uncomfortable to watch. Then there is the part near the end of the second volume. I understand it is to tease the protagonist, but the writing makes it uncomfortable to read. I want to use this plot to create an image of the protagonist who would rather break than bend, but there is still a problem with the writing strength, and the writing is very awkward. I haven't read the third volume yet, so I won't make a review, as I may not have the same problem again, but after reading the second volume at noon, I really can't stand it anymore, so I'll just recuperate for now. I can only say that I hope the writing gets better and better, and I'll see how it goes after a while.

Why does it feel like this protagonist doesn't look like the protagonist? It is written like a group portrait plot, everyone is the protagonist, and Huo Yuhao becomes a supporting role. Subverting the plot of Douluo, this development is very creative... But it does not have an eye-catching description. How to say it? It didn't write the plot that most readers want to see. This book is destined to have a relatively small audience.

Later, the Snow Emperor and the Ice Emperor will not be cleansed and then taken away by the protagonist. That would be too uncomfortable. They almost died. Later, the Ice and Snow Emperor obeyed the orders of the Silver Dragon King and taught the protagonist some experience. Then the protagonist directly forgives and completely puts aside the grudge. This plot is really unacceptable.

Speaking of which, the second martial soul Tianmeng gave me is gone, so what can I do to make up for the lack of the second martial soul? It turns out that Tang San couldn't defeat such a big enemy. He couldn't have lowered his configuration and was able to defeat him, right?

My name is Huo Yuhao. I thought that after traveling through time, I would be able to lie down and become a god. If my biggest problem hadn't been lost, I almost believed it.

As the title states, it can actually be made public as of this writing. Tang Wutong in the book is actually Xiao Qi who has not yet split her soul. The reason why Wang Donger's name is not used is to express that she is not the daughter of the God King, but the little princess of the Haotian Sect, a high-end version of Ning Tian. Here, we specifically solicit opinions from book friends. Should the Tang Wutong line be cut off? If you have any comments, you can leave a message below. If you think it needs to be retained, just give it a like.

It doesn't matter if you kill the second martial soul, but if you kill Yi Lao, Tang San will be beaten to death.

Too much ink has been wasted on Zhou Yi 😅 I don't see the need to perfect this character.

The author has improved the original worldview of the third young master of the Tang family, using the Douyi comic timeline. The Shrek Academy in the novel is much better than the academy in the original work.

The fighting force was too strong. Level 25 became level 1. The martial soul had become stronger, but it didn't show it. It was still weak. He couldn't defeat the Slaughter Dragon Clan and could only pretend to be strong. He was almost beaten to death by Tang Gao. He could only be said to be strong. But the feeling of frustration of being reduced in level has always been there.

The author's many second creations are quite good, but the author should describe more about the differences between Tang San's generation and the original work when the protagonist reads the school history, and occasionally mention that Tang San is Mu's version. Nowadays, we read novels at a fast pace. If you don't explain clearly, you will only get more people to complain in the comment area, and if you don't even have Electrolux, there will be more people complaining about how to fight against Tang San.

I read most of it for free, but to be honest I didn't understand it 😥

Personally, I feel that the first volume is very good, the second volume is good, and the third volume is okay. After the third volume, I said I was going to Sun and Moon and stopped reading. The author of the first volume presents a different Douluo, the righteous Shrek, a reasonable world view, and Ye Qinghui. When it comes to the protagonist's cheating, I really don't like the Silver Dragon King, Ice Emperor and Snow Emperor's sexy moves. It's uncomfortable to watch. It's just a cheat, and I wrote so many chapters. After cheating, taking off directly and crushing all kinds of things, it feels boring. There is no conscientiousness and step-by-step steadiness of the weak period.

Although the author's writing is good. The plot is also pretty good. But it makes me feel like I'm not watching Douluo Dalu💀. Why is this?

After reading three volumes, I felt like something was wrong. When I looked at the table of contents, it turned out to be a bad eunuch.

The main body design of this book is good, but the writing in the front is high and low. I wonder if I should just wait for your next book. The writing will be more mature for me to read more comfortably.

Are Ice Emperor and Snow Emperor the heroines? In the article, I keep posting when the protagonist is using a sword. If I don't close it, it would feel a bit awkward.

Just kidding, the Tang San of this universe wouldn't be the Sha Antian Tang San next door, right?😁

Are there any Douluo fans who prefer comics? Please recommend.

The warm atmosphere and solid connections are also refreshing. It is really fun to lead everyone to make progress together. It's just that this kind of pleasure is slower and less obvious than when you cheat yourself. But it's really pretty

The selfish ghost character Zhou Yi created by the author is really uncomfortable to look at. I know this is the need of the plot, and the character creation is okay, but understanding is understanding, and the uncomfortable feeling will not change. I would like to post a complaint and give the author some advice. I would like to make a suggestion, if you change the image of the characters in the original work, please consider adding a filter to the original character if you have read the original work. I originally hated the character Zhou Yi in the original work, but it turns out that the fanfic has a lot of disgusting scenes with her, which would be uncomfortable.

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