Rebirth of the Mysterious: The Ghost Doctor

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The author's writing is okay, but his imagination is not big enough. Since there are doctors, how can there be no hospital? I didn't see if there is a ghost hospital in the original work, but the author can write it.

The first part was written very well, but the second part was written too hastily. The protagonist's power increased too quickly, and the second part was written too hastily.

All the women related to the hero are dead, the policewoman, Zhao Shengnan, Xianzi

Can an ordinary weapon, a scalpel, cut off a ghost's hand?

Think carefully about the next book and write it slowly. Don't be in a hurry. You probably haven't signed a contract for this book and are in a hurry. Finish it as soon as possible. I think newbies write fan fiction and then write some of their own ideas. Lao Fo's first Liaozhai Daisheng was a fan fiction and it started to contain his own things. In fact, many of Lao Fo's writing styles are not very good, but they are well-conceived and novel, and everyone can tolerate those poisonous points. What follows is his mysterious recovery. , It can also be seen that the emotions and character interactions he wrote were not very good, but it was still a big hit. After Tianqing, to be honest, I personally felt that the writing was not very good, especially in the beginning, which felt a bit toxic, but everyone continued to read it. I say so much to tell you that you must have your own ideas, and then add your own ideas to fandom or other novels that are more tolerant. When the ideas are mature, you can write your own novels.

The role of Xianzi feels very abrupt. She is dead and alive again, and there is no sense of the horror of a mysterious resurrection.

I don't think the main character's partner should be an adult like a liaison officer. No matter how you look at it, it's awkward. It always feels weird. Moreover, I can't tell that the main character has that kind of pressure to survive. No matter which fanfic, he is either seeking to live and become stronger and solve supernatural resuscitation, or he is just stupid and cool. I can't see it at all in this center now.

It feels okay. Still have to observe and observe. Update speed. How can such a little bit be enough? .