Xiuxian: I Can See the Outcome of the Incident

They are all multiple-choice questions, and I get bored just listening to them. What is the meaning of time traveler? Where has the knowledge of the nine-year compulsory education gone? Without the integration of modern knowledge, time travel will lose its meaning.

The golden finger is very interesting, but the plot is really boring. It is obvious that this golden finger is equivalent to the time of the provincial version I originally thought that when dealing with Gu Yue's soul body, after testing that the existing methods could not cause damage, Liu Xu would go to the market to test whether everything could cause damage. Otherwise, he would not buy a bunch of talismans, elixirs, and formations. We can do R&D with raw materials, just write a recipe and try to make it, you can make it unlimited times, and come up with low-level props that can hurt the soul body, such as frightening talismans, crazy magic pills, and reverse five-element soul locking array The resulting plot is that each other vowed not to take action in the secret realm. It is clear that the other party knows to ambush Liu Xu with the sword array, but Liu Xu himself stupidly uses the talisman and seal to hit people.

Height 168 and weight 48. How much does your sister want to fight with a gay?

The starting point is to be the dog of a beautiful woman. If the woman is replaced by a man, at least the protagonist will not be a dog licker.

The most important thing about a book is its story. This book is currently unavailable. They are all carried away by Goldfinger. Let's take modern society as an example and we will understand. Normal people study, study, work, get married and have children after graduation. Right. You are not just going to pick up a pot in the east of the village today, a pot in the west tomorrow, a piece of iron in the south the day after tomorrow, and a gold ring in the north in the next few days. It's completely illogical. Goldfinger takes this away and says what it is. No need for logic, nothing to gain. There is no storyline, fragmented, here and there. The most important thing is not to write a story, but to tell. Personal opinions do not represent others. Come on.

This is my first novel, and it may not be perfect enough. Please leave comments. I will read it carefully and learn and improve as much as possible. Thank you! I also ask all readers to read the latest chapter after reading it to encourage my writing confidence. Thank you!

Brothers, just follow your own outline and main line, or you can ask for advice from Zhen Wen Changsheng. Xuxu often comes up with outlines and detailed outlines. Now that Wan has made it, keep up the good work, brother! 😊

I hope this is a mortal with a weak golden finger. Of course, it would be better if the plot and background forces are written clearly. The exercises, elixirs, spells, exercises, talismans, etc. Should be simplified as much as possible, such as the first to fifth levels, upper, middle and lower grades. Prices should be reasonable. For high-priced items, there should be more words for spells and elixirs, such as the fourth-level low-grade cultivation elixir: Yunlong Nine Purple Dan, the fourth-level low-grade talisman: One Qi Qiankun Talisman, etc. Magic weapons, spiritual weapons, and magic weapons correspond to Qi training to golden elixir. This is better, that's all.

The poisonous spot is more poisonous than a thunder snake.

This ability is a reserve of omniscience. Later, I will find some exercises to strengthen my thoughts. I can think and calculate thirty-six thousand trillion thoughts in one breath. I can know everything about a person in an instant. I can modify it with my thoughts and create a skill. Like Dr. Chen, I can use a little force to break the earth and pull down the moon. Learn curse spells to change a person's fortune, control cause and effect, and influence the whole body, just like the story of a horseshoe, influencing destiny! 🤭🤭

Why is it that even if the finished book is not on the shelves, it can be listed in the daily guide? I didn't quite believe it before when people said it was a poison guide.

The start is extremely poisonous, so don't come here if you take my advice.

Brother, was he called autistic by these readers? In fact, this is really not important. Some readers can't stand it, so there must be others who can't stand it. Personally, I think it's pretty good. Don't worry about these people. If it's a full-time job, the results are indeed not very good, but if it's a part-time job, it doesn't need to be too much. This book can also be used as a writing practice. I have never written a novel before, but Xuxu worked for several years to save money and continued writing. Now it has tens of thousands of orders. If brothers really love writing novels, don't worry about these people. If it is for life, then don't put all your energy here now. You can put writing and other things up first. In short, brother, think about it yourself! 😊

In the first four chapters, the heroine died from a poisonous attack, and a woman was forcibly assigned to the male protagonist. First, it was written that the female protagonist would leave directly if she pretended to be stupid, and then she would be killed if she refused to recruit in exchange for resources. Then, it was written that the female protagonist recruited the male protagonist with the purpose of letting the male protagonist do odd jobs. As you can see from the first article, the heroine does not ask for resources and does not kill people indiscriminately. She is even a little cautious. Then it is immediately written that the male protagonist will be killed. Is he killed because he refuses to recruit? When the heroine sees the hero pretending to be stupid, she immediately leaves. How can she be so stingy? Because of the need for resources, the reason is the same as above. I can't understand how big the funnel is at the beginning. The heroine is a cultivator. If she wants a handyman, shouldn't she just find one at random? It can only be said that the male and female protagonists are forced to be together. It's better to change it. The female protagonist thinks that the male protagonist may be a demon slayer, but she is afraid that she will kill the wrong good guy, so she plans to take a closer look. Now that you are careful, you have good people, and you have a reason to observe closely. Isn't this better than recruiting someone by force?

The current plot is okay! 😊

Give the author a big hug, it's very well written.