Martial Spirit Skeleton, Boned into Susanoo in Douluo

During Dou Yi, because they had to set off Tang San's strong character, there were very few spiritual soul masters, and even spiritually offensive soul skills were very rare. Unless you have a skull, all soul attack moves can cross one or even two realms to cause damage to the opponent. Because no one knows the defensive soul skills. The protagonist's skill has a soul attack, which is his most buggy part. Even if his normal attack is blocked, his soul is still under attack. And mental power and soul power are two different systems. Tang San used soul power to defeat Qian Renxue's attack, and before he died, he directly killed Bibi Dong with a mental shock and seriously injured her. {"NickName":"Book Friends 20241016164927267","UserId":456483768} Hurry up and change it. You made the mental attack too weak. With the protagonist's foundation, he can completely compete with the Soul Saint head-on. It can be seen that attacks on the spiritual level are almost worthless in Dou Yi. According to this scumbag's skills, coupled with real damage, clairvoyance, and the ability to teleport at will, even if he fights Soul Saint head-on, the probability of killing him at first sight is higher than 99%.

There is a problem, the protagonist's will-o'-wisp is actually too buggy

The author's writing is really good, short and easy to understand. I recommend a novel of the same type. Please save it and take a look. It's really too busy now

@Xue has a belly of three pounds. I just came here. There is a problem with a noun in the introduction. Complete Susanoo→Third form - Representative: Itachi Complete Susanoo→Fifth form - Representative: Madara Don't be confused by wrong translations.

The author of another Douluo fanfic openly boasts in the introduction that he is the only Douluo fanfic from Qidian that has been to Sanjiang. It is very valuable and it is true that it makes people laugh out loud 😊

It's so boring. The protagonist doesn't fight for this or grab for anything. He runs away when trouble comes and retreats when he sees someone. It's just like a running account... I came here because of the title of this book and thought the protagonist could be as crazy as Erzhuzi 😒

It's very bland. The author can't design a reasonable conflict. As a result, at level 50, there isn't even a memorable battle. It's just a waste of time.

I have to complain about Yu Xiaogang. If an ordinary person awakens to level 5, it is not impossible for him to even break through the Soul Emperor and Soul Saint. As for Yu Xiaogang, he couldn't even break through level 30. If it weren't for his white-eyed wolf Lao Qin, he would have died long ago when he met someone in his 60s. Not to mention level 60, if you meet him at level 50 and offend someone, you will have to worry about him. His martial soul is obviously a golden dragon, but he turns into a farting pig.

The author thinks it is very reasonable. He uses a lot of nonsense to explain why this result happened, whether it is opportunity, fairy grass, etc., And then he will comment on why it is like this. Who cares about the green-scaled snake turning into a python and turning into a dragon? He has been writing a lot of explanations and all kinds of foreshadowing that will be buried in the future. It is not pleasant to watch at all, and it is not pleasant to grasp. The plot has no ups and downs, like a triple jump. A few pictures have completed the plot and advanced it, and then wrote a few pictures that the author thought were a lot of daily why why why why.

Damn it, Chapter 116 is too poisonous. The previous minor problems can be tolerated, but this latest chapter is extremely poisonous. Making up excuses for conspiracy theories has no basic logic. Black for the sake of being black.

Does the author sell directly to the studio after putting it on the shelves?🙂

The plot of fan-created content should not be watery, the writing should be more precise, and the content should be written with practical content. Of course, you can feel free to do it before it is put on the shelves. It is pleasing to the eye if it is neat and refreshing. 90% Of fan-made content is dead, especially Douluo 😁 (because there is basically nothing to write except the original content. The protagonist must do it when he comes up with his ideas, and don't drag it out 🤫. There are also big principles, don't explain it. 😁 If you don't write practical content, no one will read it, and parallel imports will be disliked by everyone). The content of the original work can be expanded (water). Finally, the two routes are black/ignored. Remember to optimize the original character description. I feel like there is something missing in the knowledge exchange you wrote. It is not good to accumulate too much of this type 😁. A good fan is a fan who adds his own content on the basis of maintaining the original characters without violating it. In addition, it is abstract 🙂

The quality dropped significantly after it was put on the shelves. It should be said that problems started from the period before it was put on the shelves.

It overemphasizes that the protagonist is a living dead, mainly because it is unnecessary, and the writing does not look like a living dead. Also, it overemphasizes that the martial spirit is disabled. There is no need to keep emphasizing this.

After the hundredth chapter, the plot is full of poison 🙂 I almost had brain congestion after watching it.

Why hasn't this been taken off the shelves yet? It makes me upset.

After it was released, it completely collapsed when Dugu Bo attacked Xiao Wu because the author didn't know how to continue writing or he didn't want to write. Xiao Wu itself is a trouble and the soul ring does not match the protagonist's martial soul. It is easy to kill yourself. It is better to develop properly and get a suitable hundred thousand year soul ring. There is no way. It is not a twin martial soul. If you don't follow the extreme flow, you will be beaten if you encounter a twin martial soul.

Randomly create a few opponents and make grudges, then have some battles, such as offending nobles or being hunted by the three upper sects, and slowly develop and fight over the years. The author's protagonist is so good, he still maintains a relationship with Tang San even after being offended to death. It was normal to maintain a relationship when he was a child, but when he has grown up, it is almost time to cause trouble. If the plot is not good at this time, it will not be possible to write. The author has already felt that his writing has dried up after chapter 50.

I haven't written dozens of chapters about a battle. What kind of treasure is best suited to the word count? Sometimes I can't write about a protagonist who doesn't even have to be hunted down, or a villain who doesn't even come out to slap the protagonist in the face. You can create a few dandy princes to come out and write a few chapters for you, but then you will be hunted by the whole country, and you can continue to fight. Anyway, you will be hunted wherever you go in Douluo Continent.

Tang San didn't even dare to speak out, and he still had to remain superficial friends. Why are you such a coward practicing cultivation? You are just submissive. Even if you have strength, you are still a otaku and a loser.

There are too many dozens of world power systems in a novel, and if you change the map and you don't know the experience and start over, even Xiaozhi knows how to change the map and refresh the points, which looks very confusing.

With just a skeleton, he can fight beyond the third level. If he has a divine weapon, he can even threaten the Super Douluo. After all, a single hit from the Ten Fist Sword will seal the character. The protagonist can absorb a soul beast with the nature of a broken jade, and can evolve infinitely without having to go through so much trouble. The ability to make wishes is a soul skill. You can use your own soul power to make a wish. For example, if you increase the life of your soul ring to 1,000 years, all your soul power will be drained away.

Madara is for the nine-tailed chakra. You have turned into a soul ring to return the beast's difficulty, and directly chopped it with a giant. Could it be that the lack of the beast below will reduce the power, and there is no added strength at all. The beast's difficulty is lonely.

The competition pit will be surrounded by a lot of people. It is impossible for Tang Hao to take it away by himself. There will definitely be a lot of level 89 soul masters with limited lifespans who will come out to grab soul bones. If they break through level 90, there will also be Blue Lightning Yuan Zhen. The competition will be a mess by then. It is probably more awesome than the war in One Piece.

The author's novels rarely have these, and the plug-ins are a bit too weak. Nowadays, many novels are afraid of eunuchs. You can create a system to go through it, and create dozens of chapters in a world, so that the eunuchs can't get up.

Kill an emperor every now and then to destroy a city, or kill all the three sects. If you have the strength, of course you want the whole world to be dominated by the strength of the protagonist. Destroying the titled Douluo is actually a good thing, allowing their soul power to return to the world. Love the Immortal Lord

Just like Qin Shi Mingyue, Liusand Organization, it is best not to take refuge in Wuhun Palace in fan fiction, otherwise it will feel difficult to write. After all, there are only a few people on Tang San's side. If the second generation Hammer King and Tang San Immortal Grass are cut off by you, the seven monsters will be gone. It would be good if the author could write that the Haotian Sect comes out to hammer you wildly. The seven titled Douluo can help the author form a group with some monsters and give the protagonist five or six battle stories. The main reason is that the author cannot write many words in one battle, and the author cannot survive. Normally, a small battle can be one-on-one for a few chapters, but for large-scale battles and sieges, it is not too difficult to write ten chapters.

"Douluo: Mortals Beginning with Blue Silver Grass", mortal flow, blue silver grass, innate level two, silent development, no brainless slap in the face

MD ran to open the Blood Chakra Eye Beast's Difficulty

"Douluo: Martial Spirit Bones, Bones of Susan"