Montana Rancher

After reading the first few chapters, there is basically no description of the characters, almost no description of the relationships between the characters, and no description of the environment. Some basic conditions of the ranch and the background of the story are not explained It seemed a bit anxious at the beginning, and the pace was too fast.

Remove some foreign references, which are very unfriendly to domestic readers, and describe more about the ranch. For example, I know the farm is big, but how big is it and where is it located? I don't know how to structure it, how many buildings there are, how many animals and plants it can accommodate, and what products are currently available. It would be a hundred times better if it was introduced in detail at the beginning to give readers a deep impression. The plot is a bit slow, and the focus should be on developing the ranch, with a little social interaction, instead of writing a lot of foreign jokes, and the gags of the three brothers. It can be seen that the author has a high level of understanding of American culture, but few readers like to read something that is inexplicable and incomprehensible. Most Chinese people have never been to the United States. This style is good, but it narrows the readership and narrows the readership. Also, in the first few chapters, the character creation is very abrupt. It can be seen that the author's description of the three brothers and Wei's description are not good enough and give people a chaotic feeling. However, there is a slight improvement in the later chapters, but it still needs to be improved. The meaning of online articles needs to be easy to understand, rather than relying on readers to consider each word. At least that's what I think.

The style of this book is a bit unfriendly to new readers, because there are many jokes that I can't understand at all, and the language is a bit confusing to me.

To be honest, this kind of plot is not very good. Most people read this book because they want to read about life on the ranch. But most of the plot has nothing to do with the ranch. There is also a lot of love and love in the middle. When a small star comes, there will be no ranch plot at all. Let's cut it as soon as possible.

Foreign ranch articles were written by veteran authors in the past. It's been a long time since I read new foreign ranch articles!

This book does not do well because its sovereignty is unclear. The ranch belongs to the three brothers, not to the protagonist, who is not the absolute controller. What readers want to see is the protagonist controlling the development of the ranch, not the three brothers whose sovereignty is unclear.

I actually really like this kind of subject, but I was disgusted by the little star who was suspected to be the heroine and turned me away.

The largest ranch in Montana belongs to the Yellowstone family. You are drifting away.

After reading 50 chapters, I felt there was no focus. I wonder if the author has an outline. First of all, the protagonist is reborn. The previous life has basically no impact on this life, tastes, habits, etc. It is no different from the beginning of the story about the protagonist on an American farm who gets a system when he is 21 years old. Secondly, there is a female singer who has been criticized by readers. Maybe the author is more concerned about it, but this depends too much on the readers. For example, I have never heard of her. My impression is just average. If more space is devoted to describing her, I will be a bit unhappy. Here I would like to ask what is the author's positioning for this character? The heroine? Female supporting role? Or just a passerby? Then, the functions of this system are a bit too many and complicated, which distracts the energy of the protagonist and the author too much. If this system was written by an author who is relatively mature in writing farming articles, it would have great scalability and rich content. But for new authors, it's a bit uncertain. The last thing is the tone of the dialogue in the article, and the jokes in the article. Well, I can't get the point that the author wants to express at all. The author can take a look at the golden fishing ground for reference. But it is the first book after all, keep writing, it will get better and better.

I really can't stand the setting of binding the game and space.

The ranch actually does not belong to one person.

The writing was okay, but the plot was a bit torn. Not only did I just get a girlfriend, but Todd's wedding was about to end, and she didn't show up, there was another Todd's wedding that didn't start until how many days ago, and the timeline and plot were a bit torn apart.

After reading Chapter 5, I really don't know what the author wants to write.

This book is really slow to pick up. I jumped to more than 50 chapters before I saw that the protagonist's seeds were not even planted. (There have been so many jumps, and the protagonist has not yet developed) The main reason is that the main line is not clear, and all kinds of miscellaneous writing are written. The number of words increases, but the plot does not advance. After looking at the table of contents, it has reached more than 100 chapters. The control funds should only be tens of thousands. The development of the system is particularly poor.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I still don't know what the story line is about. The content is written here and there, very scattered.

How should I put it? Some readers say that there is no goal in the east and west, but it is very true. Real life is not about rushing forward towards a goal. Life is a peaceful flowing stream. It is normal to have some surprises occasionally.