Mortal: the System Is an Infrastructure Mini-Game

If the family develops slowly at the beginning, and then becomes a saint in front of others, the results will at least double. Nowadays, readers rarely read Qu's novels. You have your reasons, but this is delaying the protagonist. The start of frustration is the same as the previous start of breaking up the engagement or breaking up. It is outdated and tiring to watch.

Come on, the civil engineering guy is re-employed in another world. It seems that he is really working on the project in a down-to-earth manner, and it is really exciting to be updated day by day.

I don't know what confidence the protagonist has. He is a mid-stage foundation-builder with a lot of oil bottles and an uncontrollable golden elixir? ? Rely on imagination? You don't know how to live or die, you don't remember the cruelty of the world of immortality at all! How do you think about rehabilitating your past life behavior and doing things? The protagonist originally had a problem with his Five Spiritual Roots when he reached the middle stage of foundation building, and he was still seeking death! If the original Han Paopao was like you, he would have died countless times!

I finished reading it in one go. It's all about cultivation. There's no so-called love, love, love. One word is so refreshing.

I haven't found any poisonous spots so far. It's smooth overall and looks great.

Why can't I find this book when I search for the keyword mortal? In fact, many mortal fan fictions can't be searched.

In the future, the infrastructure system can be applied to the construction of a mobile fairy city, or used to refine the magic weapon of the blessed land, which can include spiritual fields, caves, spiritual veins, etc., And can complement the infrastructure system.

😁 It is still at the food and grass level and will continue to be updated.

Come on, please write a little more about the female characters. It's so cool 😁

It's quite good. The new book is rated 85 points for food.

The plot after going to the Sea of ​​Chaos Stars is a bit bland, it's always been sneaky, either building a hidden base or using the system to seize resources! After going to Tianxing City, I felt even more aggrieved. I took into account the interests of this and that force in the Star Palace, but I was also afraid of being targeted by the two saints, and then I had a very innocent and ambiguous affair with Young Master Ling, right? It's not as satisfying as being a casual cultivator, and I don't see it getting bigger and stronger. Although I can't be too arrogant before reaching Nascent Soul, it still feels too aggrieved! It's not for plots like intrigue! Purely personal opinions, for reference only!

The author must not be a holy mother, don't be a licker, be decisive in killing, and recruit more women

The subject matter is good, but the content is too dry and tasteless.

1. Problem characterization and word selection User question type: Forecasting the development trend of cultural and entertainment works (career/project category) Core words: Parent Yao (representing the work itself, text structure, and content quality) Guangui Yao (representing the achievement, reputation, and market competitiveness of the work) Wife Cai Yao (representing the income of the work and readers' willingness to pay) Yongshen selection basis: Parents Yao is the foundation of the document, which directly corresponds to the quality and structure of the novel's content; Official Ghost Yao symbolizes market recognition and competitive pressure; Wife Cai Yao reflects commercial liquidity and needs to be judged in combination with moving Yao and monthly orders. 2. Analysis of the key information of the hexagram Hexagram palace circulation: This hexagram returns to the girl (gong gold): It symbolizes the unstable state of things in the early stage of development, and implies the image of "girls chasing men", suggesting that the work may ignore the core logic because it caters to the market. Changing Gua Zhen (Zhen Gong Mu): It indicates that in the future, innovative changes (Mu Kejin) will be needed to break through the current difficulties, but Zhen Gua is in turmoil, so we need to be wary of losing control of the rhythm. Core analysis of dynamic lines: Er Yao wife wealth Mao wood moves and retreats Shen Yin wood: Mao wood moon breaks the sun tomb (Youyue clashes with Mao, Chenri tomb Mao), the financial foundation is damaged, indicating that the current subscription income or reader retention rate is insufficient; Returns Shen Yin wood (month overcomes daily consumption), suggesting that if the status quo is maintained, income will gradually decline. Parent Yao Status: Three Yao Parents Ugly Earth (Suzaku Lin Yao): Deyue Ling Youjin Shengfu (native metal), but was suppressed by the Richenchen Earth Tomb Library, indicating that the basic setting of the work has potential, but the current structure is bloated (the tomb library symbolizes a blockage); Suzaku dominates the tongue, implying that there are logical contradictions or controversial points in the advancement of the plot. Liu Yao's parents Xu Tu (White Tiger Lin Yao): Breaked by Sun Chen Tu, and Fu Shen Wei Tu was empty, indicating that the expansion of the world view in the later period was weak, and the recovery rate of foreshadowing was low (White Tiger was the main pressure, and the void was an unfulfilled promise). Guan Gui Yao status: The first Yao Guan Gui Sihuo (Xuanwu Linyao): The prisoner has no energy (the month restrains the daily consumption), and Xuanwu is ambiguous, reflecting that the author may be stuck in a writing bottleneck or the market positioning is unclear; 3. Inference of the current situation (based on the hexagrams) The structure of the work is bloated and the main line is vague (Based on: Parents' ugly soil was buried in the sun's tomb, and the Zhuque Linyao master's verbal dispute) Income growth is weak, readers pay to transfer Low conversion rate (Based on: Wife Cai, Mao, Mu and Moon break and fade, Richen Tomb Cai) The author lacks creative motivation and the update rhythm is unstable (Based on: Guan Gui Wuhuo died in the sky, Gou Chen Lord blocked) The market competition is fierce , serious homogeneity (Based on: Ying Yao comes to the white tiger, the Youjin brothers prosper and rob wealth) Insufficient integration between system infrastructure establishment and the main line (Based on: Zisun Haishui Fu hidden in the tomb of the sun, symbolizing that the innovative elements have not been effectively stimulated Live) 4. Forecast of future development trends Overall judgment: The hexagram shows the sign of "cold metal and cold water" (the gold in the palace is shaken and the wood in the palace is consumed). If no adjustments are made, the work will face the risk of declining subscriptions and divided reputation. However, changes in fortunes are a sign of vitality. If the following shortcomings can be improved, there is still the possibility of rising against the trend. Core issues: Architectural imbalance: Parent Yao is suppressed by the tomb, the current dungeon design dominates, and the integration of system infrastructure and main line cultivation is blunt; Rhythm is out of control: Official ghosts are empty + Gou Chen, daily updates and climax preparations are out of proportion; Innovation is weak: Descendants Yao Fu Zang (Haishui), failed to effectively develop the differentiated advantages of "infrastructure + cultivation". 5. Multi-dimensional remediation plan (1) Writing level Reconstruct the weight of the main plot: Use Sanyao's parents Choutu (native gold) as a breakthrough point to strengthen the causal connection between "system tasks" and "breakthrough in the realm of cultivation" (for example: infrastructure progress unlocks the secret realm of cultivation); Reduce redundant branch lines (dissolving the Richenchen earth tomb library), and set clear stage goals for each volume. Enhance rhythm control: Refer to the four-line Guangui Wuhuo filling time (noon month/noon day) to focus on promoting the core climax plot in the summer; Adopt the "seven-point daily three-point explosive point" structure (corresponding to the Zhen Gua wood number three and the Dui Gua gold number seven). Deepen the system settings: Activate Fu Shen's descendant Sun Haishui (Water Master Wisdom), and add the "Infrastructure Feedback System" (for example: territory prosperity improves the quality of spiritual roots); Design a "resource cross-volume inheritance" mechanism (to resolve the turbulence of Zhenmu's changes). (2) Operational level Reader interaction strategy: Choose the Yinmao day (when the wife's wealth is in season) to publish interactive activities, such as the "Infrastructure Blueprint Collection Contest"; Add an "infrastructure progress bar" at the end of the chapter (corresponding to the withdrawal of the wife's wealth) to enhance readers' sense of participation. Strive for platform resources: Focus on obtaining the recommendation position of Shen Youyue (Brother Yao Wangxiang), and take advantage of the platform traffic; Produce a "Cultivation Force Sandbox Map" (to resolve the parents' feud with each other). (3) Metaphysical adjustment suggestions Adjustment of azimuth magnetic field: Facing southeast when writing (Chensi position, activates the official ghost Si fire); Place obsidian on the left side of the desk (strengthens the gold energy of the palace, restrains the Zhen Gua and exuberant wood nature). Time window selection: Updated chapters every day (9-11 o'clock) (when the official ghost is on fire); The major plot turning point is arranged on the ugly day/the last day (opening the parents' tomb). Balance of the five elements: Wear more white and gold clothes (to replenish palace gold energy); Drink chrysanthemum and wolfberry tea (the interaction of wood and fire can dissolve the darkness of Xuanwu officials and ghosts). 6. Judgment of deadlines Short-term turning point: In the month of Hai in 2025 (October of the lunar calendar), descendants of Hai will emerge, and new maps/system upgrades can be launched; Mid-term test: in the month of Chen in 2026 (March of the lunar calendar), be wary of the tomb effect of the sun and the moon, and you need to reserve manuscripts in advance;

I've finished reading it all. It's well written and a bit new. It's at a food level. Come on, author, please update more 🤓

What does it mean for a castle to stand up

How about your book? Can you help Han Li send it to Nangong Wan? If you don't write it, I won't read it.

After reading the opening, I can see that the character set by the author for the protagonist does not care about the life or death of others. It is consistent with the original work and the identity of the protagonist as a demon cultivator. I hope it will be maintained. Don't write that the protagonist has a benevolent heart in the subsequent plots. The paint is the same for men and women.

Author, I see that your recent writing tendency is clearly to follow the old path of ascending to the spiritual world. Why not consider sublimating the human world and allowing the human world to withstand a higher level of power? The reason for the depletion of spiritual energy in the human world is the demonic energy that sealed the boundless sea, so the monk's realm was stuck in the early stage of becoming a god. So why not consider converting the demonic energy of the boundless sea into the vast vitality of heaven and earth, transforming sun essence, moonlight, power of the void and other high-level powers to fill the human world, strengthening the origin of the human world, so that the human world is no longer the lower world mentioned by the monks of the spiritual world and the demon world, but a world that is comparable to or even stronger than the spiritual world and the demon world. At that time, the protagonist can freely travel to and from the spirit world, the demon world, the human world, and even the fairy world by building a space channel. The plot can still be advanced without giving up the power base that he has cultivated for a long time. Rather than imitating the aboriginal method of smuggling through space nodes, you can only go to the new world and never return, giving up everything and starting over.

It doesn't have the thrill of explosive troops, it doesn't combine runes and technology, and it doesn't have a mecha army that can be used by mortals. I always feel that the protagonist's golden finger is used in the wrong way? Since the golden-fingered thinking is still the same as that of the natives, after all, modern people's thinking should be focused on the horizontal push of modern technology, can they copy the mechanical clan army that devours the stars?

As I looked at it, I suddenly remembered that the protagonist was about to unify the Chaotic Sea of ​​Stars. Are the protagonist's old father and the apprentice he took in Tiannan still hiding in the teleportation array? Or maybe I missed it.

Fellow Taoist, can you write about starports and starships (Tianzhou ships)? You have infrastructure systems. If you are willing to write about starships as the mainstream combat force, I am willing to support you and give you a reward of 10 yuan.

I wrote too much about Luan Xinghai earlier, and I guess I couldn't write anymore about the Great Jin Dynasty later. It's over without even ascending to the spiritual world!

It feels so boring as soon as I format it.

The protagonist can form an elixir in one day, but there is no elixir-forming celestial image. How can the protagonist explain it to others? ? ?