Lord Survival: Start with a Tactical Backpack

What a great work with some positive energy. After reading too many books about people who are selfish and kill the Holy Mother first at the beginning, I usually just give up the book! What did society tell them to do?

Overall, it doesn't seem to have any major bad points. It's not the kind of intrigue, it's the type where everyone works together to fight the apocalypse, where you provide the pot and I provide the ingredients to cook a big pot of rice. The protagonist doesn't have any particularly powerful golden fingers. It's the kind of plot where I work for everyone and everyone works for me. It's pretty good.

I felt a bit uncomfortable after watching it. The protagonist didn't meet a single bad person or enemy throughout the whole process. It was all about a utopian feeling of helping the protagonist unconditionally. It was too unreal. Moreover, the author's writing of the data was a bit messy and I couldn't tell the difference between the protagonist and other people. It was also very refreshing.

There is no surprise or surprise, the writing is mediocre, there is nothing serious about it, but there is nothing outstanding about it. It is tasteless. It can be seen that it is indeed a new author. The routines and writing are relatively stiff, but it does not have the bad habits of a bunch of old authors. The details of fully exploring the rules are quite surprising, such as quickly finding ways to dig holes to put large pieces of materials into bags, or trying to put all items into bag cards to strengthen bugs. This is a bit of ingenuity and one of the sources of fun. In addition, the atmosphere among survivors is also unexpectedly united. Material information is shared, and no one appears to stir up trouble. It feels much more comfortable. As for the shortcomings, it is obviously a lack of experience. For example, the narration of the system uses quotation marks instead of [ ]. As a result, I did not notice the "three strengthening" setting at all when I read it. When it came up later, it felt inexplicable. In addition, the writing is too dry, and I can't arouse the interest in reading. The early collection activities of a single perspective and a single character really have no desire to read. Why do many readers criticize the chat function but the old author basically writes it? It's because it needs to be adjusted. Writing this, let's talk about the three types of cool points in Survival Lord novels (excluding stallion harem, I personally accept multiple women, but the character arc needs to be written well, and being sentimental is never allowed), which are exploring the unknown, teamwork, and utilizing rules. Exploring the unknown is partial to personal adventure, teamwork is partial to force formation, and the use of rules is rather special, requiring a relatively complete worldview. In this type of article, the log cabin touches on all four interesting points and is relatively balanced. Although it is a bit unfinished in the later period, the results are at least good. To be honest, I really liked it in the early stage, and it was at the level of food+. To be honest, I still don't know what kind of novel I want to write. Could it be a pure survival mode of fundamentalism? If I want to write a survival lord novel from a personal perspective in the early stage, there is no doubt that it is either the use of rules to block bugs or the exploration of personal growth. In short, the most important thing is [finding ways to grow up quickly], but it is still relatively weak now, and it has always been a bit overwhelming for the protagonist and the rhythm. Later, when you switch to team or confrontation writing, the perspectives become more diverse, and the number of characters increases, which also tests your writing skills. Rating Hay+/Grain-, the author has potential, but this book can only be considered mediocre.

The author gives you some advice. When you talk to others, write who you are talking to first. For example, the protagonist opens the chat group @XXXX "Have you eaten today?" Instead of "Have you eaten?" The protagonist opens the chat group@ If you make the conversation longer, will the reader be confused? It didn't make sense, it was very awkward, and I had to think about who the protagonist was talking to. You always write out the dialogue first, and then add who you are speaking to at the end. Sometimes you don't even write who you are speaking to. It just feels weird. Very uncomfortable.

It's so rare for the author to be able to maintain this achievement for so long.

To be honest, this book should not be called Lord Survival, it should be called Wilderness Survival. Lord, Lord, what do you call a Lord if you are alone throughout the entire territory? Isn't this just the player's wilderness survival?

Gathering both food and guns, I will be the emperor in troubled times.

Don't miss it if you pass by 😁

After reading it, the writing is better than 99% of other people's writing. The author writes very carefully and it is not a template work.

There is currently no lord, only survival

So it was well written, but suddenly he started killing people. What kind of copy can't be written? Write this? What's the point? Feed the big ones well.

I think it's okay, but there are not many people watching.

There are significant differences in functions, thermal efficiency and applicable scenarios between fireplaces and fire pits and fire walls. The specific comparison is as follows: 1. Core conclusion The thermal efficiency of fire pits and fire walls is much higher than that of fireplaces, and is especially suitable for use in cold areas, while fireplaces are more used as decorative or ceremonial equipment. 2. Detailed comparison Thermal efficiency and practicality Fire pit fire wall: Through centralized combustion and heat exchange design, the heat transfer through the furnace wall is more efficient, which can effectively increase the indoor temperature and is suitable for long-term use in severe cold areas. Fireplace: Due to serious heat loss (about 30%-40%), traditional fireplaces have extremely low actual heating efficiency, often require a large amount of fuel, and can easily cause indoor overheating. Energy Consumption and Cost The fire pit fire wall reduces fuel waste by optimizing the flue and combustion design; the fireplace loses heat quickly, has low fuel utilization rate, and has higher long-term use costs. Function Positioning Fire pit and fire wall: It has both heating and cooking functions. Some designs can be combined with the fire pit to achieve efficient heat energy utilization. Fireplace: In the early days, it was used for cooking and heating. In modern times, it is more used as a symbol of decoration or holiday rituals (such as Christmas and Halloween), and its actual function has been weakened. Applicable Scenarios Fire pits and fire walls are suitable for cold areas or scenes that require high thermal efficiency; fireplaces are mostly used for small residences or for decorative purposes, and there are obvious disadvantages when used in cold areas. 3. Suggestions If you need efficient heating, give priority to a fire pit and fire wall; if you are pursuing decoration or a sense of ceremony, you can combine it with a traditional fireplace design, but you need to pay attention to its low thermal efficiency.

First? The author's writing is pretty good, but your reading and traffic are so low that I don't even dare to support it. Come on, author, but don't be a eunuch.

This is the zombie game setting, author, you can refer to it

Keep your word, and why don't you have a storyteller in your listening book? Can you do it

Human beings are never strong, but can use tools and work together. Hunting alone with a tool that no one can take advantage of is a recipe for death. Tigers are so good at hunting, they will not get injured and fight to the death. Sometimes it's real, sometimes it's gamified, and it makes people watch.

It's 2025 and there's still someone named Lin Fan! Does the author pay for the naming fee? As soon as I saw the name of the protagonist, I felt like I was reading a novel from 2010! At that time, the names of the protagonists were basically Lin Fan, Zhang Fan, Chen Fan, Chen Feng, Lin Feng, Chu Feng, etc.

Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I would like to ask when the next one will be 🙂

Come on

The initial settings are too obscure and complicated. Except for strong men, it is basically impossible to survive. Without the cutting tools and transportation tools at hand, it is difficult to get wood and stones in 12 hours, let alone women, who do not have that physical strength. At the beginning, all the clothes are taken off. What does the author want to express? Can men be shameless and women run around naked? You also have to fight monsters, and those who have never been a soldier will die.

The author has been playing recently. Do you like to synthesize fantasy beasts? ?

The protagonist's conditions start very well.

Nowadays, I really don't like Harem Stallion when reading novels. These books remove the number of words about Harem Stallion, and the practical content is even less than 1/3.

What is Goldfinger in this novel? Is it a purely physical time-travel adventure without the golden finger?