Fox Demon: Two Realms Gate, Behind the Gate Is a Person Under

Why do you insist on restraining spirits and sending generals to obey spirits? This is not shown in Under One Person, but in Nine-Nine Eighty-One, eating spirits will be disgusted by the spirits, and you can no longer control the spirits.

The combat power is not equal. The combat power of the top demon fox can reach the mainland level. With one person, the strongest Lao Tianshi may not be able to withstand a missile bombing. And both worlds have an urgent problem that needs to be solved, immortality. It is still simple for the top cultivators in the one-person world to live one or two hundred years, but in the demon fox world, it is really rare to live for more than a hundred years. 😏

When I saw Tunling, I knew that this book was not good and it was not on the right track.

The first ten chapters were handled well. Wasn't Feng Shayan really trying to force her wits? Anyway, I don't understand, who gave her the confidence to have a temper with the supplier Chunchun's lower body controls the brain, this kind of description of forcibly having a temper, just feels disgusting When I think about the future, the protagonist will feel sick to the Wang family because of the world meeting, and leave

It's so funny, it's the first time I see Yun Wuyun, who regards this huge pit as a treasure, Yun Wuyun understands it, and sees the thing next door that was written out of a fever?

Wasn't Feng Tianyang's method of subduing spirits specially designed to trick the Wang family?

Cloud? Have you never read the author? To obey the spirit is to turn a person into a general. After obeying the spirit, the whole person becomes mottled in all aspects. The spirit-killing general is to control the spirit body. Let's make a ghost general.

Even if you are just following the trend, why don't you go and understand the original work and analyze the plot? There is nothing wrong with adding a little bit of your own understanding to fan works, but your understanding must be in place at least! With just a few chapters, you made it feel like each chapter was a novel. You only wrote a few chapters before you started to be inconsistent? ! The person who had just made a deal with his father and was supposed to respect him, but in the blink of an eye, he ignored his wishes and dragged him back to school? ? ? Even if she has known her for a while, she shouldn't be like this. After all, she just wrote about her change in attitude, and then suddenly changed back. What you wrote earlier is like writing in vain. The protagonist is also that cute. Is the fox demon who lives with him day and night in another world ugly? Can't hold on even if you just brush the edge?

So long ago, the Dragon King's son-in-law even showed up and slapped him in the face.

There was assassin Wu Liuqi in the front, and there was another assassin in the back. It was clear that their combat power was unequal. How to write this? Lowering the combat power of the main world?

You can write less, but the protagonist's strength must have a clear reference object, and there must be a clear line for the protagonist's strength advancement. Also, the inspiration of the two cultivation systems of the fox demon and the human being does not need to be expressed in the early stage, but its specialness must be shown in the later stage, so that this specialness can be truly reflected in strength. Finally, what kind of strength can you do at what level?

At first glance, it looks like a studio article, and the author doesn't say anything about it.