Starting from Perak

What if we don't mention the content? Can't you understand the segmentation? Readers are turned away after clicking on the first page

🤪Good looking

Update!

The writing is quite innovative, but you moved the plot too quickly...

The content is not bad, I suggest that the first page should be divided into the following paragraphs

This chapter of Buddha's Twins goes by so fast, how much more do you have left to write 😅

The writing is quite interesting and worth reading.

The content is good, but it's not divided into sections and I'm not used to it 😥

The new one is very good! Refreshing! What are you going to do if you don't travel through time?

Update, author. Except for the lack of paragraphs in the first chapter, there are no big problems. The writing is pretty good.

Come on, come on, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go.

Come on 👍👍👍

There is hope here. It's best not to dig a hole or fill it with oaths. At the lowest level, just put a lid on it. Come on, come on, come on.

In the latest chapter, the bus is out of control. The number displayed on the bus is the number of ghosts, not the number of ghost masters. If it shows 4, it means 4 ghosts, not none. I suggest the author change it.

Your writing is terrible. You can write novels in a difficult situation, but what the hell are you writing about? ? ?