After Being Reborn, I Became Tokyo's Devoted Lover

Mouth! It's the reincarnation of the Great Power, everyone, hurry up!

Who said this novel is pornographic? This novel is great.

If you see the familiar green tea gold coins popping up in Japan, you will know who it is. I have read two of your books, this is the third one... Brother, your writing is actually good, but some parts are boring. The interaction and story between the protagonist and the unique women are well written, but the relationship with Green Tea is completely boring. They are talking about those women who use money to make transactions. To be honest, they are just like Ji. Can there be less low-level green tea plots, including the female colleague in this chapter. The moment she had a relationship with the protagonist, I knew the character was gone. This character has no soul and is just as boring as the policewoman in the previous book. But on the contrary, The Female Boss is quite interesting and worth subscribing to watch. It is currently known that the protagonist must be rich and powerful if he has the system, but this is not a commercial novel or a period drama. Then what is the point of getting readers to subscribe after you put it on the shelf? Why do readers pay to watch? The answer is obvious! Female character! Then you can't expect some prostitute characters to increase your subscription, right? For example, don't viewers always watch the anchor just to see him kill wild monsters? Write important roles well! Create the main characters well! You can't remember the money-trading character even after it's over. Now, during the free period, the protagonist can appear as a tool character in the scene when he starts from scratch. But it would be disgusting for readers to come out and steal the show after paying for it. Now let's look at the main characters: female boss, neighbor, aunt, and possible female congressman in the back... As for the green tea money transaction roles of female doctors and female colleagues... Haha

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Every time I see Japanese people trapped in debt due to serious illness, I feel weird.

Is my mother's friend still a virgin at 40? Doesn't this turn the protagonist into a painting? 🤣

Why does it feel like no one in the harem can be controlled... They are all bombs on the verge of exploding.

Please brothers, let me no longer be alone!

It's so wide, this book is so delicious, if it were to be broken, it would eat the author's soul 😃

Nearly 600,000 words have been written, so it should be getting better and better. Why is the protagonist still like a headless fly? That broken system reward is so worthless. I won't say what kind of physique and charm bonus cards you get. I just like to get some consumption doubling cards. What makes me speechless the most is the hourly wage card. It has no meaning at all. It can neither be realized quickly nor play a role in the development of the plot. It can also easily lead to economic collapse! Writing a Japanese light novel is the same as a city god novel!