Naruto: Starting with the Twin Kamui Kaleidoscopes

The duration of the double divine power should be more than 5 minutes, and the speed of virtualization and long-range divine power should be faster.

Fugaku was cowardly but stabbed his subordinate 😰, 🙂 Uchiha was killed by the Uchiha clan leader. If you write more details, I won't go into details. There are many other minor issues.

It's too 6. The main character is as dumb as a melon. He has two Kamui and is so useless as a sidekick. He needs to use Susanoo. Danzo sends out so many people for a magatama. It's hard to see.

There are many mistakes and omissions. Hinata Yayoi is a boy and a girl, and Tsune Ueda is one of the few people in Uchiha who doesn't know how to perform genjutsu? , Did you publish it without proofreading at all? No wonder there are only a few comments on dozens of chapters.

You talk too much. I'm just a passerby. Didn't you watch Naruto? Knowing that it was Danzo who was still asking questions, he somehow managed to become a chuunin with the strength of the elite Jounin of the Hyuga branch. Did you bring in the habit of Obito's birth? You have to explain it to others every time you make a move.

If you want to read this book, read Chapter 11☞15 first. If you can accept it, read it from the beginning. If you can't accept it, just like me, this book is a piece of shit!

The kaleidoscope abilities of many fan protagonists are really unworthy of Kamui. The only thing that can compare with the blurring of space is time.

You still have to practice. You can't eat this bowl of rice at your current level.

Double Kamui, the hang-up is big, the dissatisfaction with the world triggers, and even playing house with Genbu, Gendanzo plays ninja games, it's me who stopped eating beef a long time ago.

I'm afraid the author has never watched Naruto.

The hook is too strong, and the novel then forces a balance of power. With the kaleidoscope, the shadow's combat power is destined to be at the peak of the shadow level. It can basically be pushed horizontally during the three wars. The only flaw is the short battery life. The most important thing to do is to hide the identity and try to trigger missions and improve their strength. If they are willing to fight in a melee, they can just fight and reap the benefits. The protagonist jumps out to cause trouble when he is not fully capable of protecting himself. Moreover, even if Madara is not dead, Black Zetsu can still monitor in the dark. Is the protagonist going to die? I really don't know how to write the word "death". You can obviously be the sixth child in the dark, but you have to jump out and wait for others to attack you in the dark. How big a head is this?

Fugaku was killed, was he given a small amount of compensation as a result, or was he killed in a team battle in full view of everyone? In addition, when I was dealing with foreign enemies, I was stabbed in the back in a team battle.

The flow of water needs to be improved

Nowadays, Naruto is written like a template, so if we can't do something different and travel through time without causing trouble, what's the difference between it and the original?

Why does Mao always want to do Eight Gate Dunjia?

After reading it, I understand. The male protagonist is a fool and can't understand anything.