After Clearing the Level, It Was Optimized and I Joined the Fenglingyueying Sect.

After reading the introduction, I suspect that the author is Yu, because it is too nine.

The plot is okay, but the main problem is that the levels and strengths of the various characters that appear are so vague. I saw Chapter 47. What is the current level of the protagonist, what things he has, and his specific strength (plus props, including regular and explosive). I don't know at all, including the levels and strengths of other characters, and I feel that the plot is too fast.

This routine feels a bit old 🙂

I have a question, that is the final boss of the first chapter version. Is it not picked up? Didn't pick it up?

It seems interesting, cool article?

Nice writing! Love to read and write more!

I got stuck in writing, so I want to tell you my heartfelt words for readers of my novel It is the first time for a newcomer to write a novel, and it is still on the shelves no matter what the results are. Because the signing was too fast, there was no early writing, but I was afraid of breaking the rhythm, so I wrote all the way with the main line in mind, so many readers reported that the early pace was too fast. , The narrative is unclear, resulting in a messy plot I fully agree with your criticisms on this point. I have also tried to modify the previous article and add some guiding words to try to smooth out the mess. However, my ability is limited and there is really no way to change the early plot to be nearly satisfactory without affecting the overall plot framework. So we can only turn the previous mistakes into experience to write the subsequent plot well. The overall outline of this novel is actually that the protagonist wants to pass the game in his own way after coming to this game world. Then he interacts with people and things in this world and gradually grows up. Newcomers can experience the feeling of pleasure through their grades. Obviously, I am very poor. But I still have to finish writing this novel. No matter what the results are, completing a novel is the biggest goal for me. The Remaining Catastrophe features different enemies, game modes, and a new story. But I don't want to make the protagonist an invincible person who sweeps the world too early. It's too difficult to write an invincible article, and now how can you play after being invincible until disaster comes? I just want to shape him into a person who accidentally gets a golden finger and plays according to his own wishes, and is unwilling to become someone else's pawn. I also have many shortcomings, such as character description, setting introduction, narrative rhythm, etc. I am also working hard to correct them and tell the novel story well. I am very grateful to the readers who read my novels. Regardless of whether they have finished it or not, or whether they like it or not, at least the words I typed are read by others, which is an encouragement to me. Finally, thank you. Having said that, I continued to code.

When I read Chapter 28, I kept mentioning Li Qiankun's trophies, but the protagonist didn't even touch the body. Why? Is it impossible?

The story is pretty good, but the start is a bit rushed.

I thought it was quite interesting when I first watched it But once you clear the level, your level will be reset Isn't this just another map-changing routine

The author gives a realm setting It's a bit confusing.