Do You Deserve to Be a Wizard Without Publishing Papers? !

The brainless killers who pursue chaotic evil can be turned off by themselves. This is a new socialist occasion for neutrality and good! ! ! As a farming novel, the world view is okay. It's good to become bigger and stronger step by step and create greater glory. The plot has some flaws (after all, it is an online novel, so you can't change the word count. The beginning is quite confusing and I hope it will be changed in the future. The overall shortcomings are not concealed. The characters in it all have their own personalities and images, and they are not rigid tools. I hope you can be productive, and I will stock up on the recommendation votes first.

First decide on a title, then write an outline, and then AI generates it. This is an old trick used by some veteran authors to make money by using their reputation, and it is also the best choice for some novices who cannot write essays who want to make this money. In short, there are no typos, the sentences are fluent, and the storyline is definitely liked by some people, but it just doesn't make it enjoyable to read. It has skin but no bones. You can watch it but it is not recommended. Some books will tell you what they're about after reading the title, the introduction, and the chapter names. At most, you can just read the beginning and end. After all, you need to know the name of the protagonist.

Thesis papers in military academies have always been kept confidential, because these results will eventually become your spells. Who would be willing to make them public? And it doesn't matter whether you graduate from a wizarding academies or not. You have learned the knowledge and can use the corresponding magic. It doesn't matter whether you have the certificate or not. Does not having the certificate affect your ability to release magic or start a business? Just like those African students in the Shijiazhuang Military Academy, they will issue graduation certificates to others after graduation. It's okay if you don't send them. They will command the army as if they returned to their own country. In reality, you can't just pick up the world of personal force. Like the early Qidian novels, there are some vindictive schools in them. Just think about it and you will know that you are funny? This thing. It's not that they rush to accept you if you have talent, but that you must prove your loyalty first before you can enter these schools. In reality, they are the National Defense University. You don't think that you can get in by just applying. After you enter, you will perform well and you will dream of becoming a general.

First of all, this has to be my favorite new book recently. The author said that the results of the first order were not satisfactory. From the perspective of one of the readers, help the author analyze the reasons and find a way out. For reference only, it is considered a bad idea and a crooked idea. 1. It was not released at the explosive point of the plot. The author's rhythm control skills are very good, but I think the release time can be more explosive, such as the second outbreak of the epidemic before, and everyone fell ill one after another. The first order results will be better. But it's a pity that the time has passed, so saying this is just an afterthought. 2. Review rhythm processing The book's poisonous points and reasonableness have been mentioned too much in the comment area, and the author also said some in his acceptance speech. Although I don't seem to have a problem, it's hard to explain. If the author really wants to change this part, it will take a lot of effort, and it is easy to be constrained by the limitations when writing. Wouldn't it be better if I put some statements at the front of this book, or modified the introduction of the work, to attract some truly relevant readers? The author can also try to use more brainpower to deduce, check the information, and find some ways to arouse emotions and make sense. I recommend b site Crazy Lab, which has some doomsday survival techniques. 3. Publicity issue According to sharing, the author's book only has 4,000 receipts. In my opinion, it seems a little low, maybe 10,000 receipts? (But I am not a green onion) I think the author can try to get some publicity, such as some fantasy writer groups asking for some chapter recommendations, going to book club groups to ask everyone to promote themselves, etc. You can also try to ask the editor for a recommendation, but it may be difficult to tell based on the first order data. 4. Plot issues The author's recent main plot, doing church work, is not very exciting or tense. The author may want to take advantage of the stable period of the plot to slowly introduce some settings related to the extraordinary, and to have a small conflict with the church to make adjustments. But this opponent is not a better opponent. First of all, the opponent is not strong enough. To put it bluntly, he is a novice among the novices in the church. The god standing behind him is relatively huge. The opponent's low skill level is somewhat out of proportion to the amount of ink on his body. Then the opponent's personality is a bit thin. The church still looks like a passerby and villain, doing no good things and getting involved in bad things. What are their rituals like? Is there a confessional in the church, are there pews and kneeling chairs for people of high status? Is there a way to wake up in the morning and pray? Do the townspeople pray before every meal to thank God for the food? Is there a choir in town? Are there any relatives related to the pastor? What is their world view? Has anyone slipped a little bit of rice between their fingers to maintain stability? Has the grass-roots team done anything that made people laugh? The current impression the church gives me as a reader is that of a feudal landlord who has mastered a small amount of supernatural power and uses the flag of faith to act as a demon. Secondly, the opponents inside look amazing. All the moves he knows can be broken one by one by the protagonist. At present, it seems that the only difference is between the protagonist winning steadily and winning the game, and there is no challenge. To sum up, for me as a reader, the plot of the protagonist is very bland, relatively watery, and not challenging to the opponent. There is no feeling like it is neither broken nor established at the beginning. 5. Attractiveness I briefly analyzed the interesting points of this book, namely: farming, world view, and protagonist. Farming is the process of accumulation of strength. A way to steadily collect resources and technology. This pleasure of watching assets gradually grow is what makes farming stories so interesting. In order to prevent this stimulation from weakening, I think a good farming process cycle is: technological breakthrough - expanded application - quantitative change and qualitative change - breakthrough of difficulties - mad dog comes out of the cage - digestion of benefits. Then do a loop again. In this aspect, I think the author wrote it very well. My little suggestion is that there are already many side characters describing the new situation in the territory from the perspective of supporting characters. I think it is time to try to give readers a direct sense of control. For example, a meeting is held to report all the results of the protagonist's work, such as school students, population, living standards, various occupations, etc. It just so happens that the protagonist left a lot of tail when he did this before. World view, including the extraordinary system, the position of science and industry in the world, the protagonist's plot, some foreshadowing, geographical location, etc. At present, it has only been slightly unlocked, but I think we might as well speed it up a little bit. The protagonist's progress is similar every time, for example, one paper changes to a spell. This may start to sound a bit repetitive to readers. For example, it will be more effective to switch from learning the second level one spell to learning the first level two spell. The protagonist is exactly the character and charm of the protagonist, and how he will choose in the plot when he is in trouble. I think the author of this piece didn't do a very good job. Because the author here is a kind of pile-up. The character of the protagonist is so perfect, a natural leader, 996 Holy Body, decisive, he has been discouraged, but he has bounced back. To put it bluntly, he is a saint protagonist. But I think this is not good. The image of the protagonist is too positive, so perfect that it lacks a sense of reality, and I can't stand it. For example, if he finished a lot of work one day, then he gave himself a day off, slept for 20 hours, and stayed in bed for a while when he woke up. This is obviously a supplement to the protagonist's image and can make people feel more friendly. In other novels, this kind of shortcoming may be taken over by characters such as harems or heroines, but this book does not yet have a heroine. Finally, I don't expect the kidnapping author to write as I say, or I'm very satisfied with the current output of this book. All of the above are just suggestions and not requirements. I also saw that many authors became discouraged due to single-machine writing, so I wrote some words to encourage the authors to work harder.

To be honest, it would be better not to add this system I even suspect that this system does not exist originally, but it is forced to be added by the author like an editor. This system has no effect. To be precise, it has a negative effect. Its existence makes the hero's character even lower and the plot logic more confusing. It has no strength and no benefit. It only adds humor. Let me explain, the world view of this book is a bit idealistic + scientific argumentation. Magic is essentially establishing a "self-cognition environment" in one's own brain. There are two situations that will cause magic to fail and be contaminated. One is "common cognition has been occupied by gods and is contaminated", and the other is "the difference between cognition and scientific argumentation is too large." What the male protagonist does is to work in depth and write papers (bacteria, ultrasound) that have not been observed in other worlds, and he will directly obtain the corresponding magic. Based on this setting, the male protagonist built a small room in his head, equipped with a computer and an astronomical telescope. At this point, the setting of this book is awesome. An absolutely rational computer is used to intercept divine pollution, and an astronomical telescope is used to obtain observations beyond all. The small room seems to be larger than everything. If you delete the system and place the obtained things in reality (such as the laboratory left by the escaped baron and the godly servant), test the paper on the computer and then rewrite it on paper in reality, and add Gaia certification and Alaya's world consciousness stamping link, the male protagonist's quality will be infinitely improved. It was not like now, as if he had a great brain, but the key nodes were solely supported by the system. It gave people the impression of a stock market god with wisdom, courage, and unparalleled strategy. However, when the perspective changed, it turned out that the comeback was also caused by kowtow to loans. It was both inexplicable and lowered the impression. The only result was humorous. . .

No, buddy, you're not going crazy because you can't hold back your graduate thesis, are you?

You thought you were building a school, opening a school, and becoming a wizard principal, but you came here to save the world. Schools are described in several places throughout the article, but you have never been to a school provided by the system. What on earth are you writing about? I wrote that being a wizard comes with a price, but I posted the whole story about Pig's Feet. Is there any price at all? I'm just too lazy to say it, don't use your brain and just watch it casually

It's too crude. Since a paper can become a basic theory of magic in the current world, then at least you have to do an experiment and show it to the world, right? ! Can it just be imagined? Green magic?

I feel that the title of the book does not match the content, and the introduction does not match the content either.

To be honest, the setting is pretty good, but the plot is mediocre. It's like a magic shell. It's actually a farming novel in which the protagonist travels through the Middle Ages and uses knowledge. The plot is also quite old-fashioned. I feel that the protagonist is also average. The first-order results are average, which is normal.

A parody of the Arcane Throne

As the title states, if you don't like to read the system text, you can run away.

Damn it, was this written by AI? 😰

Delete the part about the 30-plus chapters where the protagonist's youthful illness broke out. The youthful illness broke out inexplicably, and the church was determined to be the enemy. Then at the climax, I was given a test of betting on who would be the leader and the new magic. I know the author wants to suppress the whole story first and then advance it, but the pace is too slow and not exciting at all. I just feel like the mother-in-law who wrote it.

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This kind of text is embarrassing to read. The main thing is that you may not even be able to write an introduction, so you just have to brag.

Systematic writing is neither rational nor common sense. In the third paper of the paper, it was found that the Black Death forced people to gather in infected areas in order to have a fake plot. How many people could survive the high death rate of the Black Death? You don't even have common sense, do you have any brains for the paper? Isn't it all forced explanation by the system?

See the first place where magic kills bacteria. The Epidemic Prevention Festival is quite fascinating, and the mystery of pollution also makes people want to explore. It's just that the generation and use of this magic are so unscientific that it's embarrassing. Some people have complained that the system cheat can directly convert papers into techniques. The problem is that the swan bottle experiment can only prove that there are factors in the air that cause decay, right? At most, it can be transformed into an 'air quality detection technique'. Do you have the ability to knock out all the inventions of microscopy and antibiotics? Then, for a person who is sick and will die within a few minutes, the direct cause of his death is that the body tissues destroyed by bacteria and toxins produced by bacteria can no longer maintain various functions required for survival. At this time, killing the germs can only stop the destruction. To bring the person back, a major regeneration spell is needed. Please give the author some extra science. It's really poisonous to see unscientific plots in scientific victory articles. . .

The author's language organization skills are really poor. In the first few chapters, there are many perspectives that are constantly changing. Dialogues begin without explaining things clearly. In the dialogues, it is not clear who is saying what. He uses commas instead of colons, and flashbacks are used to interject the narrative. I can only say that the author may have great ideas, but if you can't even write a good composition, how can you write a good novel? I think many people think that the reason why the book is so well written is because of the author's poor language expression ability! There is no problem in understanding, but it is uncomfortable to watch and causes brain pain and dyslexia, which is already a reason not to watch it.

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It's a pity that the update has been discontinued, this is my favorite type. . .