The Dark World Is King

It's ok to write, but are you the one who eats raw potatoes?

First of all, the first chapter feels good, the story is told very clearly, and it is obvious that the author is quite capable. But starting from the second chapter, the world view was suddenly thrown too far, and the characters appeared in confusion. There was not enough background, and it failed to leave an impression on people. The characters were not well developed. At least consider the readers when writing and explain clearly! Secondly, what is the main line of the story? After watching it, I felt like I didn't take in anything. What is it trying to say? Cause? Go through? Result? Background? Figure? Follow-up development? What role does it play in the plot? In addition, the most important point is that I did not find any point that could attract readers, nor did I have any sense of involvement. Feel better? Suspense? Expect? Personal thoughts, don't comment if you don't like it.

Collected it. After reading it, I realized that I still need to practice more. I don't know if it's because the prehistoric novel is too difficult to write.