Do You Know That Sheng Xiaolang Is Reading the Book Every Day?

Brother, I really recommend you to cut it off. There is not much reasonable place in the plot arrangement and so on. You can't fill this big hole at all, and you can't round it out. If you are not round at all, just forget about stretching your hips.

I haven't read the novel, but based on the timeline of the TV series, from the beginning of the story when Minglan was eight to the end of the story, Minglan is estimated to be no more than 22 years old. In ancient times, women got married when they were 16 years old. In TV dramas, it is estimated that the older ones are 18, which means that Minglan is married and the protagonist is only 10 years old. In the finale, the Queen Mother changes the subject and the protagonist is only 14 years old. Do you know why you are writing this? Even when prodigies were respected in ancient times, when Yan Shu was born as a Jinshi at the age of 14, he was arranged to go to the secret pavilion to continue his studies for three years. The plot reached a key point, such as when the palace changed, the protagonist was not even 10 years old. The protagonist could not become a Jinshi at the age of eight and become the prime minister at fourteen! I guess no one saw it. There is no market for this type of book where an eleven or twelve-year-old child gives advice and a bunch of people who have been in high and low positions for decades follow their advice.

Just finished chasing it, let me make a suggestion. Brother, you won't be able to write later. It's obvious from the first thirty chapters that you don't know how to write about family feuds and family feuds. The writing is too crude. Goldfinger killed more than thirty people at the age of five. Important nodes are all in one go. You don't know the logic of leaving a five-year-old child for postpartum marriage. Will adults listen to you?

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I like to read and write well. When writing a book, you must have your own world. If you can write a good book, don't worry about the comments. If you can't get results by writing one book, just summarize it and then write ten books. After becoming famous, it's just a little bit of trouble. As your protagonist, you should follow the obscene development style. In the later stage, the prince is a good branch line.

Don't worry about what other people say, just write. I like to watch

If you are interested, you can check out "Knowledge: From the Beginning of the Taizu Dynasty". It's also quite good, but it's a little slow to get into the plot, but it's really good.