The Red Mansion Begins with Jin Yiwei

You arrange for a jealous, petty and bitter girl like Daiyu to be the queen? Do you want to end your dynasty forever?

It was a very awkward book to read, especially the portrayal of the protagonist. I've read a lot of Red Mansion novels. Some of the protagonists did more bad things than the protagonist in this book, but they didn't make me feel sick as much as the protagonist in this book. It's really just a feeling of disgust that gradually accumulates from small things one by one.

I advise you to finish writing the extra story about King Honglouxiang

Baoyu, do you want to accept it? It feels like it will be very pleasant to come from the back. Once everything is fine, you can still fall in love and have a romantic relationship.

So far, the overall writing of the book is quite good, but the description of the battle is not good. It is a bit exaggerated for the protagonist to chop people into pieces in battle. Why not kill them with one knife? It takes at least 2 knives to chop them into pieces. It is time-consuming and laborious, and the knife can easily break. It gives me the feeling that the protagonist is not a martial arts master, but a reckless man with great power but no fighting skills or sanity.

My personal suggestion is that since you have not joined the Jia family, I suggest you write some original characters. Most of the popular Red Mansions books have original heroines and enriched plots. Don't lock up the Jia family, otherwise you will be suspected of being a dog licker. After all, you, the author, can't write a courtyard drama, so expand your horizons and learn how to count romantic figures.

The plot is too slow, and the more I watch it, the more it looks like a female video. . .

Daiyu can be the main wife. As the daughter of a businessman, Baochai would be a high-ranking wife unless a high-ranking official recognized her as his daughter.

We already have the Yuan Chun, Welcome the Spring, and Explore the Spring, but why is there missing the Xichun?

The writing is very good, but the gold finger given is not enough. The strength of the force alone is not enough to reach the point of being defeated by ten thousand enemies. This kind of force is enough to protect oneself.

The Japanese pirates at the beginning were really dramatic, and with all the dialogue, I thought I was watching an anti-Japanese drama?

The writing was good in the early stage, but in the middle stage, I feel like I have sold my account.

I'm so happy to lose. I hope it can be compared to the book by Xiang Wang. I like Sister Bao very much. The author also understands her and the portrayal of her is also very successful. I hope that Sister Bao's role will still be important in this book.

It's a bit depressing, I'll wait for the inventory and look back together.

I think this book is very well written, and Lin Daiyu's portrayal is also very good. Lin Daiyu's growth and changes are all related to the plot of the story. Reading it makes people feel that this growth and change is also traceable, and she has become the protagonist's virtuous wife. I have finished reading this book. I also watched most of the original King Xiang, but I never watched it again after I saw that King Xiang married Xue Baochai. I thought it was ridiculous at the time. Even if the emperor and queen loved King Xiang very much, it was impossible for his legitimate son to marry a merchant girl. I found it difficult to justify and reconcile myself. But I think this book with Daiyu as the heroine is very good👍. I hope the author will continue to work hard and create better works 🌹

In order to collect Xiangling, I adjusted the timeline

Finding books to read depends on your luck. There was a comment in other Red Mansions comment area that mentioned the King of Red Mansions. I browsed the comment area and felt that I had the appetite to read the author's new book. Then I read the comments and introduction of the new book before slowly getting into it.

The plot is just too draggy. . . Also, the author's Feng Lazi is gone. What a pity, a failure! !

There are some problems with the books that can be exempted. There is no progress at all in the first few hundred chapters and the plot is dragging.

There are too many Red Mansions novels in which Sister Lin is the heroine of the palace. The author's writing in this one is a bit lame. It would be better to take a more eccentric approach and write a Baochai novel like King Xiang. The character creation of King Xiang is still very good 😍

Someone else is writing about ancient zombies. Please open a book. I don't know about other websites. You are definitely the first person to write it at Qidian. You are like the Chinese comic that had no box office before. You want to make it, but you won't make it until the Chinese comic has the box office now.

Can you write original fiction for the next book? I must order all of them

I have to be strong in my life and get the title of fan by myself.

Isn't the shrimp porridge finished yet? 😐

Dream of Red Mansions requires a dynasty background to slowly understand it

It's free and limited, it's pretty good, it suits my taste, I like to read cool articles, but it's a pity that I missed a few 😍

I still like to watch plots like The Prince

I felt that the book was good-looking since I Became the King, but it was useless to vote for me there. I came here to give you a few monthly votes. I hope the writer will continue to work hard!

Lao Ni has already won the championship, but you are slower than him 🙂