War Paradise!

After reading the previous chapters, the only thing that makes me unhappy is that you can casually say to people: "I am from War Paradise and so on." Every time I see you say this, I always feel like my head is being pressed to the ground and rubbed 😳 Then you can just say that you are a time traveler. [It's just my personal opinion, nothing else, I just want to complain about it]

I can't understand you. The content is good, the rhythm is okay, and the graphics are good. Why cast a character who is incomprehensible and keep saying it's for your own good? If you don't explain the cause and effect of this person quickly, no one will want to see the pit you buried. Anyway, I don't want to watch it. Let's talk about it next time if we meet again.

It's a very nice, unlimited sci-fi war novel. It's the first time I've seen it. Will there be Warhammer and Master Chief in the future?

The new dungeon is okay at the front, but there is a lot more writing on the plot at the end. The plot about the father and daughter raised my blood pressure more than the progress of the plot (¯¯crimin). I didn't expect that people would come to read the paradise article and there is such a plot.

It's not bad, but some plots about blood pressure can be omitted (¯¯crimin), which really affects the viewing experience.

It's a pity that it's not updated. The previous dungeon was well written. The new dungeon chose a police and criminal world, which seemed uncomfortable, and the words "war" didn't get beaten up very much. What a pity

I feel like all the Paradise series are awesome, Battle Paradise and Samsara Paradise. I hope this one will be the same.

Overall, the new copy is not as interesting as the previous one.

I'm not sure how much of Warhammer's cesspit stuff has been incorporated into the author's world view. 😰 Also, the author, are you serious about the protagonist's performance in Chapter 60? You have already written that he is the leader, and the previous copy was pretty good. Why do you end up with a plot like this, a leader who can't even stay calm? This paradise is not like other worldviews with strong rules and power. The protagonist seems to have lost his mind and is not afraid of attacking others and causing problems?

Come on, you have to think carefully about the subject of your next book.

The road is long and long, I will search up and down, and encourage each other😁