Mysterious Resurrection: Wives and Concubines

Mysterious revival? ? ? Groups of wives and concubines? ? ? Ghost? ? ? Is there a combination of these two and three tags? ? ?

Yang Jian's early character, if you give him your heart, he won't believe it, so give him a book in human skin in return of Brother Wang. 😰

Very, very outrageous. Super headline. Please don't write this title.

The writing is really bad, full of mistakes and omissions

I can't read a little of the nanny article. Can't I write it without licking it? 🤐

The idea is good, but the writing is terrible! Not very logical either! The four ghosts of the Wang family were written so poorly! The first generation of the Wang family can farm Ghost Lake alone, plus the other three. If Xiao Wang can operate it well, he can be regarded as the first person under the Seven Elders! And I don't understand this ghost marriage. The bride is just a wedding dress at this time, and there is no puzzle piece. How can marrying the bride break the curse of the Wang family? There is no beginning or end, the author didn't make it clear at all!

It is obvious that the author has his own ideas, but his writing power is limited and he cannot write them out. It looked so cloudy and foggy. I sit and know, but I can't change it. I can only fight for my life to eliminate it. If I press it again and again, I will probably die. Such a shame! ! !

The idea is good, but not that exciting. Then there are some mistakes... For example, when Yang Jian hanged himself, he was just a ghost and died, not an alien, nor a god...

It's a bit messy to write, I have some ideas, but you can't write it fluently, and the strength is hard to tell at a glance. I really don't want to wish for the mysterious realm, but I also want to overpower the protagonist's strength. It's boring.

When the child is born, his father will die. Even if he is not dead, he will still die without the protection of ghosts. Don't tell me why there are no ghosts. Because after the child is born, the supernatural power will be transferred. I am speechless. I want to marry more wives. Try giving birth to one. Wang Chaling does not want his assistant to get pregnant and give birth to a child because, once the child is born, his supernatural power will be transferred.

I think the author still needs to take another look at Mysterious Resurrection. After reading two or three chapters, a lot of the settings are wrong. For example, the curse of the Wang family is related to children and has nothing to do with marriage. The description of some characters' personalities is not consistent with the original work. Moreover, the protagonist's personality is not as good as Wang Chaling in the original work. When others plot against the protagonist, they fall into the trap, which makes me speechless.

Make no mistake. The king who controls a fierce ghost can reach the peak of competition. Have you become stronger or weaker by doing this? Is an incomplete mummy bride useful? In the later stage, He Yuelian's ghost painting was completely useless against Yang Jian. If you are married to the same person, how is it different from yourself? Isn't the direction of Wang's development to develop into an alien while ensuring his own immortality, and then add family members to live eternal life? As long as you live forever and don't have children, you are invincible. Everyone in his family is not weak, right?

The idea is good, but the writing skills are not good, it doesn't seem to have any feeling at all, the writing is flowing, and there is something wrong with the background of your design, and the aura is out. You have completely changed the topic. What you are writing is a fanfic about a mysterious resurrection. It is not your own creation.

Good guy, you can no longer use the direct family portrait ability, the wishing ghost is gone, and the salesman still thinks that you have lost money to make up for it!

If you're not a good author, don't write anything that's too mysterious. Your logic and writing don't make sense. I've only read a few chapters and I don't understand what you're going to write.

The king's generation is almost on the same level as the seventh elder. If you want to break the situation with a wedding dress, are you still dreaming?

Why is the strongest ghost in Wishing Ghost missing? Is it an abridged version? I just got it and couldn't get past one chapter, so I said without thinking that there are no ghosts anymore.

But does anyone know where this monthly pass comes from? I always wanted to vote when I was reading but couldn't 😁😁😁😁😁😁

Author, let me give you a suggestion: revise the first few chapters! It won't be a problem if I delete it, it's really a show, there is little content, and the content is vague and confusing. It is enough to write the storyline in the main text. No explanation, no explanation, no introduction. Just describe more scenes and describe more ghosts. You have included too many personal items. It looks like a commentary on a mysterious recovery rather than a full-length novel.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

The most bizarre "family portrait" in the whole article suppresses all dissatisfaction, and if you still dissatisfy, you will become the bride 🪖🪖

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