Simultaneous Travel: Dominate the Heavens, Dark Blue Adds Points!

A really big thing is written into four or five chapters with all kinds of sick sentences.

In this period of time, the Eternal Eye + Immortal Body + Divine Power, isn't it a horizontal push to defeat Konoha? What else are you planning? Shouldn't it be that I don't eat beef? What about democracy and freedom? Wouldn't it be better to just intimidate Susanoo Kyuubi and drive Gundam?

The first few feel average, but what about the last one? Do you want to print the sword manual to ward off evil spirits? ? Vadasi, I just love watching this! Struggling in pain and suffering!

Just like a Japanese village, how many people are there in a large village? How many people does a family have? The most important direction of their development is their personal ability, so they are either rookies pecking at each other or people with extremely low abilities who are bragging. In fact, it is just like that. This ninja is an exploiting type. People with potential have already exhausted their potential after being injured a few times and over-refined. They also advocate blood.

The protagonist can rescue Uchiha Hikari. Not only increase your strength but also gain freedom points

One sentence can explain something clearly. The character says it once, thinks about it once, the obedient people agree with it, and thinks about it again. After it spreads, other characters are shocked again. What is the significance of this writing? Is water word count cheating money? The more I listen to the book, the more strange it becomes. What is this?

If you are a fan of comics, don't write about martial arts. I also hate bad guys and the like. They are neither laid-back nor powerful. Every time, there is rat poop in the pot of porridge, which is annoying. I'm also curious whether it's just me, but it's really difficult. Too many novels like to use some kind of martial arts. One-punch superman doesn't have to learn any bullshit martial arts. I really can't understand this horse riding.

It's getting more and more ridiculous, and I can't decide anymore. I took a quick look at the latest chapter. In a world like pirates where force belongs to oneself, the five old stars of the Celestial Dragons whose status and strength are the most inferior to one person will be troubled by the pressure from the Celestial Dragons? Is it true that all Tianlong people are children with Down syndrome, and are the likes of the Knights of God and the Five Old Stars rare in a century? …

I've read about a hundred chapters so far, and it's obvious that the author has completely started to miss the word count after it's released. My suggestion is that you don't have to read the table of contents to get a rough idea of ​​the plot. I'm too lazy to read it anyway, so just do whatever you want.

It's really bad. The character said a narration and analyzed it, and passers-by listened and made up their minds. They read hundreds of words but condensed it into one sentence. There is no point at all. The key is to listen to the book. Just a piece of nonsense can be recited three times from three perspectives. The more I listen, the more annoying it is. It is comparable to chanting scriptures. , The writing of the fighting is also bad, it can be said that there is no fighting, just lose a skill and it is over. I listened to a lot of nonsense and expected the climax, but the main film was completed in three sentences, which is tasteless. In other words, the protagonist's upgrade is relatively fast, which is interesting, but if you can't pretend to upgrade quickly, what's the point?

Doing this? It's time to write about other worlds in the climax. As a TV show. Shuangwen also makes a point of stopping.

Damn, I ordered too much again, it's all hydrology.

Miao, the writing style is terrible, the plot is also terrible, and there is no outline. It's just endless chatter. If you were a real person, I can only say that junior high school students are better than you, and the AI ​​fed by the studio can write better than you The dialogues between the characters in the article are just like the turn-based dialogues given by Naomo to Muli. One sentence brings out countless narrations.

It's too watery. I'm listening to a book. It's too wordy. It makes me uncomfortable. I almost want to make you a eunuch

It was okay at first, but after the paid chapters, there was more and more nonsense, and it was all nonsense. I have already started to watch it, it is full of character dialogue and various back and forth analysis. Logically speaking, there is so much nonsense, the plot should be stuck! As a result, the plot was not stuck, and it passed in just a few sentences. Can't you distinguish the key points? Is it okay to enrich your nonsense into a plot?

The transition is so fast that it can persuade a wave of retreat.

Before, he said that he was not a pirate so there was no need to design a pirate flag, and told Hancock and the others not to call themselves pirates. How could he identify with pirates from the bottom of his heart after retreating?

It's too watery, forget about typos, and there are confusing sentences and meaningless repetitions. If you just write it and give it to AI and let AI check or modify the fallacies for you, it won't be so bad.

Don't be too irritated, don't be too irritated. I write about nonsense over and over again.

Looking at the title of the book, I came to see Deep Blue with a little bit of Zhutianliu, but I can only say that it has nothing to do with it.

Stop by an inch? Why not finish writing Naruto? At least survive the night of genocide before moving to other worlds 😅

I gave up after seeing that the detective couldn't be extraordinary after adding some points.

It's awesome. It's 1.23 Million words and it covers 4 worlds, and it's not very attractive.

Fortunately 😅 I have raised a eunuch. Like👍

You are awesome. You have written more than 150 chapters in Conan World and you haven't changed the time yet.