The Elegance of the Dream of the Red Chamber

From a personal point of view, they all have an excellent start, each has its own characteristics, and the level is much better than the previous batches of Red Mansions. However, there are too many Red Mansions that are lost to everyone after writing hundreds of thousands of words. After all, Yuanzi Opera tests the author's skills. Bypassing Yuanzi Opera, whether it is about imperial examinations or military plots, is too easy to make dramas, and will lead to a large number of plots that do not contain Red Mansions characters, and the motivation to pursue books will naturally decrease. The current book, The Scumbag Next Door, is worth waiting for. Not only is the author's writing skills on the line, but he is not a serious author in any way. The Red Mansion is inherently vulgar, but anyone who really can't think of writing about The Red Mansion in an elegant and fresh way is really a bit upside down.

It was okay at the beginning, the writing was excellent, and the scene in the garden was just okay... But suddenly there was a flood, and it was for the country and the people Have you forgotten that the protagonist is 10 years old, has no official position, and has no teacher to support him? The garden hasn't been finished yet Thought it was grass jelly, but it turned out to be hay

The title of your book is "The Third Master of the Ring of Red Mansions". It will absorb twice as much.

It's a vulgar stereotype. The protagonist first sells novels, is appreciated by nobles, and then takes the imperial examination. It is estimated that some princess and princess will appear later. What's even more routine is that the protagonist is hated by everyone and everyone wants to kick him. Is it interesting to write like this? All the elders hated him and suppressed him desperately when they saw his potential. Just like those protagonists in fantasy who have a halo of ridicule, the elders spent all day thinking about suppressing the protagonist. . . . . . It's okay to say that Mrs. Wang suppresses the protagonist, but it's nonsense to say that Jia Mu is afraid that a promising person will overshadow Baoyu. The title has nothing to do with the protagonist, and a bastard will be separated when he grows up. These elders were at best indifferent and indifferent, and they had just started studying, as if they all knew that the protagonist would definitely have a future, but the protagonist himself did not have that much confidence. The vulgar Red Mansion fans are all elders who want the protagonist to die, but the golden hairpins all like the protagonist and are speechless! Fanfics should also have something of their own, they all follow fixed routines to simply and crudely attract hatred and then slap them in the face.

Personally, I feel that choosing Jia Huan is a failure. Although he is a concubine, he appears a lot in the original work. Although his status is not good, he is much better than Jia Cong and his like. Can you avoid Mrs. Wang or Mrs. Jia? You can never escape from the shackles of feudal ethics. It is best to write a side story when writing Red Mansions, and you must be in the fifth server. Otherwise, how can you get the twelve hairpins? How to cut off from Rong Ning's Second Mansion?

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave dazzling traces.

Is the imperial examination useful? Even if you are a genius, even if you are admitted to the first place at the age of 15, how much power can you have and how much influence can you have on the court? The Jia family will still be destroyed.

Very red house! The courtyard drama is also good. Many names and words in the book are quite interesting. Zhang Guan, the words are consistent, are they consistent? Shen Jun, the words are Duanping, they are all in line with the scholars at that time. As for the poem, it is a matter of opinion. But next time the author can avoid such controversial poems. Some readers directly criticize it, which still affects the mood. Haha, the author needs a strong heart. Come on, I am waiting for your thousand chapters!

It's just that the number of words tends to be too long, although the advantage is that it's easy to make money with literature. Refer to the movie next door, "Wan Tian Qing", which has so many words. . I have to say that the book must have obvious advantages, but if someone can learn from each other's strong points, I really won't mention it. For example, this book, Qin Keqing will definitely accept it depending on the situation, but if it is written normally, there will definitely be readers who criticize the protagonist for being both cool and independent. , People will feel that it is the right thing to not accept it. This is the way it is written. . I feel that each golden hairpin can take up too much space and make people remember it forever. I can't imagine how many words and energy it takes to write it. .

Why do you have to write about Red Mansions with Jia Cong (Jia Huan)? Lin Daiyu entered the government at the age of six, died at the age of seventeen, and then the Jia family was confiscated. This means that you have to conquer everyone in the Jia family within ten years, and then get a title on the gold list, and then climb to at least the third rank. Not to mention whether you can pass the exam, just because of the exam time, you may not be out of the novice village and then you will be banned, and the younger you are, the less you can do. In this case, you might as well cultivate hybrid rice, but here comes the problem again. You are small, have neither money nor people, and can't leave the house. So what do you do? Even if you do it, how do you hand it over, who does it go to, and who gets the credit?