Ice and Fire: White Death

Since the entire book has nothing to do with dragons, let's not make dragons the protagonist.

After being convinced, the weak protagonists still have no sense of existence. The son of the protagonist's first rider is stronger than the protagonist. A human being is still unable to use magic when his magic power is at its lowest period. However, he is so powerful that he can no longer stand it.

As mentioned, run as early as possible. It was going well in the past, but in the fourth volume, something suddenly happened and forced me to return to the original plot. Forcibly destroying characters in order to advance the plot (the key is the original plot) The most disgusting thing is that the author looks like I admit my mistake, but I won't change it. I think what I wrote is right, but I just want to feed you shit. ... A week ago, I was stuck reading this book every day. It was also the first book I ever subscribed to for a recharge. I originally thought that I had found a high-quality food and grass, and I was already imagining the joy after the follow-up development was completed, but the sudden appearance of Akaishi caught me off guard. When there were signs of returning to the original work, I said it might just be a false alarm and I would wait for another chapter or two. I watched it today, gun... If you haven't watched it or are planning to watch it, run away

After reading Chapter 30, the protagonist's scenes are too few. Rather than saying that the dragon is the protagonist, it's better to say that the protagonist is a camera that breathes fire when needed.

I cried to death. The first half of this book was really good, but something was wrong after the prince turned into a dragon and died. The plot after Shenyin is not attractive. It just seems that the witch doesn't know what to say and Rhaegar is even more clownish, and there is also the tool man "Savior". . . Do you really want the protagonist to paddle like this? I know that the author has no time, and the original intention of this book is to use love to generate electricity, but I really watched a book that went from good to boring to uncomfortable and angry. I can only say that the author should come on. 😭 Update, the dragon hatched, I am interested in watching it again, I will evaluate it later. Since January 6, 2024, the list of immortals has been overwhelming. Either continue writing and die suddenly, or the plot will start again. 2024.1.7 Is broken, I'm starting to get stressed, I'm writing high-spirited things again, I'm showing a tendency not to change, and I'm starting to get scared. 2024.1.8 The plot is dull, but I started to get scared. After all, the first part of this novel is like eating a KFC sundae. It tastes good, sweet and delicious. The middle part of this novel is like you suddenly took a spoonful while eating the sundae and found that there was a lump of sand hidden in the sundae, and your tongue was scratched. Although it was distressing, it bled and I still wanted to eat it. Then I started to be worried. This is the situation I am in now. 2024.1.11 The new plot has finally begun to advance, but I can't comment. It feels like a transitional chapter. Children, this is a brief history. 2024.1.13 Mixed flavors, it's over. The ending is unsatisfactory, but at least I don't have to eat history anymore. If you must read it, just read it from Chapter 1 to Chapter 96, and then watch the ending. Don't read the part about eating history.

Looking at the bright side, this may be the author who knows the "Mad King" and Rhaegar best in the entire Qidian.

To be honest, I didn't quite understand it. As a fan, it was too abstract to forcefully turn back all the premises that led to the Usurper War in the original work. If you write a plot where the remaining members of the Long family who have the right to inherit the family fight after Long leaves, it will be more acceptable than this direction. This latest chapter gives me the feeling that whether there is a dragon or not, the result will be the same. So I'm here to spend money to read the original work? It would be better if Prince Blackfire took Rhaegar to fight, but Blackfire died in the war. Rhaegar came to power but lost the Dragon family's greatest combat power, the dragon and his grandfather, which attracted the prying eyes of the siblings who had lost their rights as heirs. The oppressed city-states overseas took them to fight. It would have been better to be forced to fight another overseas war, which greatly damaged the strength of the Long family, or, more cruelly, to have Lei Jia die directly on the battlefield, leading to the Usurper War, and in the end, Lei Jia's orthodox heir was wiped out and only the illegitimate son was left.

Brother, uncle! The characters in your book are good, the writing is good, and the plot is also good. I also know that you want to write an if line about the Targaryen family and dragons after the Dance with Dragons. But since the title of the book is based on dragons, let's have more dragons! I dare say that at least half of the people who came in to see it came to see the dragon. As a result, the dragon in your book seemed dead (sorry, exaggerated). I often waited for you for three to five days, and after reading three to five chapters, nothing happened to the dragon! Please! Brother! Your book is really good, otherwise I wouldn't read a chapter every day. But please write more about your protagonist, the dragon. Really, you update it every day, which makes me constipated. In the end, the dragon I miss so much has been waiting for a week without even showing his face. Who can bear this!

It's so stupid. The protagonist has changed so much. To forcefully return to the track of the original work and let the stag sit on the Iron Throne. Forget it, the protagonist has no sense of humanity. He doesn't even have the sense of power. What's the difference between him and the clay Bodhisattva?

It's very interesting to have a dragon as the protagonist. You don't need to care about human machinations. You just need to fly as you like. The last dragon in the world is a myth sung by the world.

Respect to the author and the Mad King! 🤭

The daily magic power supply does not overlap with the rider's magic power supply. The highest of the two is used. Ancient blood is required to open the dungeon. The mall has it, but the price is set so high that I can't afford it during the day. I can only support Jon. Will I have to exclaim that the magic power given by Jon is much higher than that of the previous riders? . The strongest in history, and will always be the strongest and immortal in the future, Daytime will eventually fulfill the name of Jon's savior Up to now, the author loves Jon so much that he might as well give him the system. Daytime is a reasonable plug-in for Jon in Game of Thrones.

Game of Thrones is popular in China because of dragons, but abroad it is due to its machinations and British-American aristocratic gameplay. The focus is completely different. Your book is now about 300,000 words long. The main character, excluding the appearance of the system, does not exceed 10,000 to 20,000 words. It is far from being in line with the writing style of domestic power game IPs. There is already a book on the story-telling method of the group characters in Game of Thrones. In the end, Sibuang spent so much effort and managed to get a score of several hundred orders. It is currently the best score for this type of IP. You caught the domestic favorite point at the beginning: dragon, the bigger, the stronger. It's a pity that you only have 100,000 words and you won't be given a role. If there is no protagonist in a book about group portraits, what is the group portraits about? That's called double, three male and female protagonists. It's also because you are the only Game of Thrones fanfic who can transform into a dragon and can still read it. Otherwise, just delete it and start trolling. Who can give you advice? It's up to you to change it or not. Anyway, I estimate that 80% of paying readers are like me. They subscribe by reading the chapter name.

The water in Essos is super deep, and all kinds of gods are everywhere. After the volcano erupted, the Long family ran to the west with their eyes closed, not daring to stop for a moment. They were scared to death, and the Dragon King's forces who stayed in the east did not end well. You start fighting eastward without caring about anything. Author, your way of writing is a bit too taken for granted. This is not a Game of Thrones, this is the way of writing a general hegemony novel. The way you write it is as outrageous as if you traveled to Warhammer and prepared to bring a large number of soldiers to expand the territory in the Chaos Demon Realm.

Author, I won't scold you, come on and rewrite. I came up with a less abrupt twist: after leaving Targaryen, the White Death traveled to another timeline without the White Death. He could also help Dragon Mother and let her be a rider. No one knew that the terror of the White Death would not be ignored.

It is recommended that the author give a unified reply on how to deal with it next. After all, it is outrageous that this usurper war can be fought. Not to mention so many branches of the Wang family, the remaining power of the protagonist Long, who has only disappeared for more than ten years, is enough to deter other families. The forced creation of this kind of plot is undoubtedly intentional💩. I don't know if it is to pave the way for the follow-up, but sometimes readers really do it because the plot does not fit. My blood pressure is so high. The last time I saw a similar plot was a story about how Robert's son was forcibly depraved by the author when he had a huge advantage, so that he reconquered the Seven Kingdoms starting from Dragonstone. I forgot the title of the book, but the early writing was really good until I started eating. Although I tried to make some plot modifications to restore the reputation, I basically kept getting scolded, and finally entered the palace. This book is really well written. I hope the author can speed up the update of this plot and at least give it a perfect ending.

It was good until Chapter 44, but after Chapter 44, the protagonist became a clown and the dead Jaehaerys became a god.

I suggest you don't read it if you haven't seen it. The author of the literary youth is a master, and everyone is awake and I am drunk alone. Everyone is scolding and still doesn't change. I am fighting against the whole world by myself, right? There is no logic in forcing the original work into a new chapter. An author like you is suitable to go to a female channel to write articles about tyrants and sit at the same table with little fairies. The author does not understand Western feudalism at all. Nobility is not a comparison. The reason why there are so many thousand-year-old nobles in the West is because everyone abides by the unspoken rules. The simplest One point is that if a noble only has illegitimate children and his fiefdom passes away, even if it is given to a collateral line, there will be no illegitimate children. What's more, the deer family that does not have dragon blood now sits on the Iron Throne. This guy has not read the original work. James killed the king because the mad king wanted to burn the city and kill them all.

I feel like the writing is wrong. With Bai Tian as the protagonist, there is no need to describe the great achievements of Targaryen. You can completely write a story about the evolution and growth of the White Dragon King, who carelessly gave trivial gifts to his mortal relatives but changed the world.

With more than 100 pictures of authors, I don't even understand what you are writing. I feel that the content you write has completely deviated from the readership. Readers want to see the protagonist appear more, but you choose not to let the protagonist appear. You are just working against the readers. There is one thing I don't understand about the author. Did you write this novel to earn royalties or purely because of your personal hobby?

I feel like I'm in a good mood again

After the White Death God left, the plot took a turn for the worse, and in the end it was completely unfinished. If it had ended well, it could have become a masterpiece.

Author, please start a new book.

The front is fine, but there is no need to look at the back.

If you open another Game of Thrones, the main character will still start with a dragon, but the writing method should not be based on the writing method of this novel. Let the main character show more face, don't make any group portraits, what you write must be based on what the readers like.

Are there any other Game of Thrones stories about Jackie Chan?

If you haven't read the extras, you might as well start a new book.

Although it's short, it's much better than many Game of Thrones stories that I can't stand watching.

Hahahahahaha, 280,000 words is still a group portrait,

Why are you generating electricity? Open the next book, this book will be a god in the early stage, and then the world will collapse. .