The Substitute Messenger Who Traveled Through the World from the Ultimate Emerald

I feel that the subject matter is quite good, but the connection and rationalization in the first few chapters are not that good. From being pointed at a gun to being allowed to become a new trainer, it should be written more rationally.

Newcomers just honestly write about popular themes. You can see that they have written a lot of things in a mess, including Western fantasy mixed with Eastern fantasy. What are the names? Also, in terms of content, what exactly are you going to write? There's no way to teach you, you just write nonsense in a mess. You haven't even figured out the nature of Internet articles, so you just write Internet articles? If you like Western fantasy, you can just write a fanfic like Hogwarts Reborn. Everyone is familiar with this genre, Goldfinger, and the stories are all ready-made. First, read how those fanfics are written and imitate them, step by step, and don't write anything nondescript. Delete this trash quickly and stop it. The most important thing for students is time. Take a good look at the core outline of your favorite works. Oh, forget it, your writing level is not even up to this point. It is too deep for you. First, learn how to write the story of the novel smoothly and coherently. Don't have too many settings, foreshadowing, and supporting characters A, B, C, and D at the beginning. You cannot handle it at your level. I will give you a guide. You should first find a novel of the type you want to write, find one with good grades, follow his story line, change the settings, and then copy it to see if you can understand it.