Lord of Silver Keys

Non-toxic, guaranteed writing, stable updates, worth a look! After the mystery, the sequence potion system is also considered a big hit. In terms of plot, the context is clear. The protagonist Feikop has been burdened with an unknown curse since traveling through time, and is looking for a way to return to his hometown and save himself. He accidentally joins a newspaper company and becomes involved in a struggle between mysterious organizations. The connections between the plots are natural and in-depth step by step... In terms of characterization, the protagonist goes from ignorance and immaturity to maturity. It does not happen overnight, or characters like Long Aotian grow up gradually like Xiao Ke. The protagonist group and the major churches are all positive characters so far, so there is no need to worry about intrigues and intrigues, and the character portrayal is considered flesh-and-blood. Of course, some parts are unclear and can be discussed. In some of the plots I watched, several tasks were completed quite easily. Among them, stealing a safe and giving it directly to the employer was a bit too rough 😰. Then stealing a clay pot and going to a hotel to catch cultists left many clues and the identity was easily exposed. Of course it could also be a novice mission. What I mean is that the author has good writing skills and has also carefully polished the chapters. If the description of some dungeon tasks is more specific and one or two characters such as Ince Zangwill and Amon are created, it may be more popular. In short, I wish the author to write better and better!

Contained objects have levels that are much easier to understand. For example, level C represents levels 1 to 3, level B represents levels 4 to 6, and level A represents levels 7 to 9 of demigod level. S level represents god level. The next thing to consider is whether the use of C-level containment objects can affect people at the intermediate level of levels 4 to 6️⃣. Should we set up a low-level containment object that will have a greatly reduced effect on people at a higher level, while the same level will function normally, and high-level equipment will have extraordinary effects on people at a lower level to reflect the importance of level. After all, if you become a level 4 person and become more powerful, the negative cost of using level 1 to 3 contained objects will also be reduced. It is difficult for an adult to hurt an adult wearing armor with a knife. A child holding a pistol can directly threaten adults with a higher power level than himself. In many cases, the rigor of details is quite important. Sometimes, instead of writing it out directly, it would be better to describe it from the side through some combat details. It seems that these are not mentioned in Secret, which pays attention to the diversified combat methods of equipment. However, its equipment system is slightly different from yours. It is made with extraordinary special effects to represent abilities and is also an exclusive skill for the same profession. Of course, this is just my personal opinion about the future based on this book. After all, I haven't read your setting, or I have participated in it and I don't know your thoughts very well (I won't call you here, after all, I am over 30). Or your own original settings and ideas will be better. But again, rigorous details and popular understanding can easily make a book or work impressive.

Just like the title, I hope you all like the stories and characters in the book

Even if one reads or listens to the book carefully, it is difficult to distinguish the levels of Star Yao, Fire Yao, Water Yao, and Earth Yao. Because they don't have much hierarchical communication in reality. It is better to add a first-order and a second-order in front of these. . For example, a first-level Xingyao investigator, a second-level Huoyao useless person. Wouldn't this be better? When you mention information about a person, we can clearly tell whether this person is stronger or weaker than the protagonist. For example, the clone that appeared last time may be Pharaoh Mu Yao Black. If there is a fourth-level prefix, we can clearly feel his power. We have always understood from the book the plot of his easy escape from the official force. I don't know if other readers have this confusion. You can also ask other people for details, but I feel it might be better to have a prefix. This not only allows readers to clearly distinguish them, but also retains your original characteristic settings.

The first volume is indeed well written, and it deserves recognition for a new author. However, the Western fantasy genre is relatively niche, and its audience is not as broad and large as the fairy tale genre. And you don't have any senior fans. It will be difficult to get started so you can consider other popular Western fantasy themes if you have free time. Or promote your book in the discussion forum of secret fans. The second is to try to facilitate or recommend to a moderately popular anchor team to achieve the production and promotion of a live book, especially the traffic of the Himalayan section is good. This will be a little helpful in the middle and later stages of the book and your subsequent writing. The third is that while accepting other people's suggestions, you should still follow your own heart and write what you want to write. This will help you stay committed to finishing the book.

New book various data single digit or 0. But looking at the background, there is a big guy who comments every day from 9-22. 9-25 There are 10 comments in a single day. Thanks for the support, I will add another chapter. Thanks

The flow is a bit low, but you must persist

This arakkoa?

Thank you all for your support! ! Choosing a map is an experiment, and every book is different. You can only vote by text. Each floor counts as one vote. The deadline is tentatively at 24:00 on January 1st. (In order to conceive the plot) The choice will greatly affect the story and the direction of the characters Map 1: The southern continent is dominated by the Kingdom of Salem Reasons for selection: 1. The last investigation mission "Black Pharaoh" requested by Catherine has a certain connection with Salem, and Philip wants revenge! 2. Salem has the "Investigator" path to Extraordinary, which is convenient for promotion Main secret line: This choice is Kraft Medical Center-Rast Medical Center-Blood-Healing Church. It will be somewhat related to the story of "Bloodborne", and the background of the story is dark Map 2: Elville, North of the Western Continent, Northern Continent Reason for selection: 1. Eckhart's request: "Lovers in Time" (to be written) 2. Escort the Phantom and Elf siblings home 3. Temporarily avoid the limelight Main hidden lines: 1. The story behind the elves 2. The story behind the Phantom clan 3. The world of alien species + pirates begin to intervene

Let me tell you my point of view. A good Western fantasy, supernatural and mysterious novel should have a rich world view, such as a clear logical history, the characterization of small characters, money and its purchasing power, different local customs and food. It is mysterious enough but needs to be revealed step by step. These are the foundations of a world. In addition, there must be a rigorous extraordinary system, (such as the promotion of various abilities, the law of extraordinary immortality, the law of mutual attraction of the same sequence) and the equipment system (you can consider that magical items like the Lord of Mysteries have time, and the negative effects and use costs of sealed objects with powerful abilities are greater. The production and use of one-time equipment "talismans"). In addition, there is a money system, such as the exchange of information knowledge and extraordinary materials and items. In the later stage, money can easily collapse. Be sure to pay attention to this measurement. In addition, the protagonist must first be on the side of justice, but he must not be too holy in his actions. He must have a good grasp of justice and kindness, and must have IQ and decisiveness in killing. As for the heroine, it's enough to have one, but it's okay to not have one, as you can shape the quality of the other supporting women. There can be multiple partners. It's also good to create a funny pet or character, which can have a good effect, or one or two noble people. As long as the principle of equal exchange must be pursued. In terms of plot, you can first be involved in the extraordinary world, and then step into the extraordinary step by step and unveil the veil. Let the protagonist gradually grow up through events with a sense of suspense and mystery. Occasionally, in order to strengthen yourself, it is necessary to take risks and go to ruins (that is, download a dungeon). Try to turn the tide as much as possible. But you must also pay attention to a certain degree, and you cannot blindly write cool articles. The fighting should not be too boring, and don't be pretentious. It should be reasonably written so that the protagonist uses his own abilities and brains instead of relying on external things to jump through the ranks. Finally, the name of each person in this theme is very important. It should not be too difficult to remember. Or you can connect the character's occupation with the name, making it easy for people to associate. He may not be able to remember the person's name, but when he mentions what he does, he will remember it. These are just my personal opinions and not guidance or suggestions.

Is the rhythm still very slow, and does it still have that overly warm and erotic atmosphere?

The story is good. Worth updating.

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Not bad, not bad, right? No brainless plot

Are stars, fire, water, wood, earth, and sun correct?