I Am Su Daji, Am I Going to Confuse Your Heart?

Quite interesting. Come on, author, it will definitely become popular. I hope to see more scenes of fairy fights and strategic and tactical games. In addition, I think about the protagonist's gender consciousness, whether to marry someone, and whether to marry a wife. None of this matters. After all, this is not what everyone comes to read about novels about gods. There is no need to emphasize that "there is no man in my heart". What's wrong with having a man? Just good friends. What's wrong? The key is whether you, King Zhou, did it well or not? If the author does not want the protagonist to have an emotional connection with King Zhou, he can emphasize that the protagonist is deliberately wronging himself and catering to the other party, and then depict King Zhou's shortcomings, so that it will not look so sweet and ambiguous. I think the main focus of this kind of novel should be to have fewer enemies and more friends. (Jiang Ziya, Boyikao, Nezha, and Lei Zhenzi can all be friends. Different camps doesn't mean they can't be friends! Let them love and hate the protagonist, admire and fear them.) Let the Shang Dynasty be strong on the outside and powerful on the inside. Let Xiqi lose his troops and generals, and be in a dilemma. Only in this way can he show his cleverness, and then destroy the Shang Dynasty, so that he can sell it at a good price. Build your own temple and gain status and good reputation. Anyway, beings like King Zhou can still be on the list of gods even if they die. It's a shame. If you really like them, you can just rescue them quietly. Looking forward to the subsequent development of the novel.

The fundamentalist background of the Gods, and the changes in demons, immortals, gods, and humans after the Gods are used to explain his world view. The author's spiritual core reflects the idea of ​​dialectics of nature. The major plots in the plot are well connected. It is currently my favorite book of Bianwen. The author consciously makes his own setting different from the traditional prehistoric world. If you can realize this, you will find the author's treatment very interesting. If you have to substitute other authors' settings, it will be very painful.

I haven't started reading it yet, but I lost interest after seeing the synopsis. It is said in the original book: You three demons can hide their demonic forms, stay in the palace, and confuse the king's heart; when King Wu defeats Zhou to help him succeed, you must not harm all living beings. After the thing is accomplished, you and others will also achieve positive results (this is the original text of Fengshen) But what did the three demons do next? She harmed the common people and helped the tyrants to do harm. Is it still Nuwa's fault? I asked you to forfeit Yin and Shou the world, because it was based on the weather: I didn't expect you to commit evil for no reason, destroy the lives of thieves, poison the loyal, be miserable and abnormal, and greatly destroy the virtue of heaven's good life. Today you have sinned a lot, so it is time for you to rectify the law (original text)

Speaking of the fate of the Cholera Dynasty, what could be more obvious than the promotion of technology, productivity, and equality? There will definitely be chaos at least in the early and middle stages. Whether it will be destroyed or reborn from the ashes in the later stage depends on how the author cheats.

Read the introduction: Is Nuwa the villain? Are you having epilepsy?

The author came from a female channel? The article about Su Daji in the book is okay, but once it is about King Zhou, there is a strange smell. The way women chirp is not at all like the words of a human king. The word "other party" appears all the time, as well as the word "request", which doesn't look like a human king at all.

Can you people read the original novel before writing it? Even if the original work is not famous, can you not regard the second creation and the third creation as the original work?

Let's be clear, it is destiny to destroy Shang in the eighteenth year of Tuesday. If you want to destroy Shang Nuwa in advance, you can't do it. Who would expect you, a little fox, to do such a thing? And there is no need to worry about Nuwa killing the donkey. Nuwa's reaction after seeing the poem was "If I don't retaliate with him, I won't see my inspiration." She wanted to let the world know that she should not offend herself. In this case, both immortals and mortal high-ups must know what happened afterwards, and Nuwa must give Daji a good ending. The death of Daji in the original work was simply because she completely forgot Nuwa's instructions, and in the end she even directly helped King Zhou to make an enemy of King Wu. Whoever died would die if she didn't.

The original work of Fengshen Yanyi is very lively, but the Shang Dynasty will undoubtedly die. The list of gods and defeating Zhou and helping Zhou are two different things. As long as Jiejiao is not tied to the Shang Dynasty, all members of Jiejiao can survive. Honghuang Liu insists on tying Tianshu to destroy Shang and Chanjiao to kill 12 immortals and the list of gods. These are three different things.

It feels like this is an old problem of Dragon Palace, it likes to preach too much. The separation between the plot and the preaching content is extremely serious, and the setting is not novel. Du Niang's book was like this and this one is still the same, no progress at all.

What Nuwa asked Daji to do was to make King Zhou sing and sing every night. From then on, the king would not go to court early in the morning. Just do nothing else. If you look at it this way, it's all King Zhou's fault for being obsessed with women. Can you still blame Daji?

There were actually people who whitewashed Daji. Your leader has already planned things for you, telling you what you can and cannot do. Daji was determined to make his own decisions and was greedy for wealth, so he assassinated King Wu Jifa. If things are done like this, who will die if you don't die?

Those who have read the "Feng Shenwen", run away and sell Nuwa casually, thinking that Nuwa's promise does not count, helping King Zhou's luck and threatening Nuwa. This is writing Nuwa as a villain. If you write like this, those who like to watch Fengshen can't stand it, and those who don't like Fengshen can't find it. It's strange that the data is good.

What do you think? You said that Daji was practicing cannibalism in Xuanyuan Tomb. You really don't take Huangdi seriously?

Unbelievable. In the primitive days, I was arranging telegraphs and making wires. It is simply strengthening my brain. Frequency, wave rate, electrical signals, numbers, programming, materials... None of them have been developed over thousands of years, and none of them have been improved again and again. Stop looking down on technology, asshole. There are too many flaws, no brain, no shaping, and taking it for granted. Summary: Not recommended.

Conferring gods and cultivating immortals, you are just doing farming and cultivating religions. Cultivating immortals is a bit nondescript and boring.

This author's old books are basically 100

Mainly the nine-tailed fox is stupid. You are well. I saw the baby girl coming. Just plead guilty. Don't say anything. Just be taken away. You must surrender Nuwa. 😥Aren't you looking for silence? Just like the carp spirit. Eat people every day. Guanyin Bodhisattva is here. You were taken away strangely. I have to shout. Oops. Didn't Bodhisattva call me here? Why do you still blame me? To preserve reputation. See how Guanyin treats you😥

Become a disciple of Jichang. The author is claiming to be a god. As a worker under Nuwa, you are worshiping a human prince as your teacher.

I've read Chapter 22. Yun Zhongzi in the front is a good fortune golden immortal who is immune to disaster. You just say it. Now there is an old man who has not yet cultivated immortality. You also say that he is afraid that Nuwa Empress's reputation is not loud enough? I borrowed part of the settings from Journey to the West. Why didn't I see how the monsters in Journey to the West were made? Even if they are beaten to death, they will not say that it was their master who ordered them, so that their backstage can protect them. In a spy war drama, you are just killing someone without fighting! 😅😅😅Farewell!

The later part of this book is all about establishing conflicts and disputes. After the dispute, it is about who advocates and who demonstrates the truth one after another. There are no big scenes, no love, no conflicts, big or small, it is all business war (debate).

Western-style succubus: big still, big frowning valley, artificial clip sound Chinese-style succubus: mourning everywhere, blood everywhere, nothing more than a thought to save the common people King Zhou? No! My dear Davarich, let us change the world together (eyes gradually become firmer)

It's impossible for Daji to survive. This is the black glove. I give you a goal and you do it. If you don't do it well, you die. Well done, but if it brings bad reputation to me, I will die. He was conscientious and did not dare to do bad things, so he was obsessed with King Zhou and survived without going to court? Then it was rumored that the Empress Nuwa sent a vixen to cause trouble for King Zhou who refused to go to court, causing the traitorous ministers below to be in power and the people to live in dire straits? Can you still become a god? This is not necessarily because the evildoer is good at making opinions and confuses the king and does not go to court. As a result, treacherous ministers are in power and the people are in dire straits. The evildoer should be killed!

Just tell me one thing: Tu Xingsun was jealous because Deng Jiugong verbally promised to betroth Deng Chanyu to him, but when they met, he found that Deng Chanyu and Su were in love. After Deng Chanyu's family surrendered to Xiqi, they secretly tortured Su to death in the face of the danger of annihilation of the Yin Shang Dynasty. Tu Xingsun made a big fuss after being caught by Yang Jian. Although Su got back together, But Xiqi took this matter and confused marriage and internal fighting, and magnified the small ones It's not that it can't be handled this way, but the author didn't know the nature of internal fighting and mutual harm before the battle, and treated the two things as a marriage. I can understand that mortals are afraid of the disciples of gods, but gods don't even deal with the bad things of their own disciples, so they are speechless.

It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away!

It's over one million words, which is pretty good to be honest. It can be seen that the subsequent expansion of the world view is too big and the author cannot control it. In addition, there are too many preaching and reasoning parts in the full text. I always hope that the plot and character creation will be more vivid and rich, but the large length of reasoning makes people wonder whether the author is "making dumplings for jealousy", as if he wrote a story to explain his own theory. There are too many truths, too straightforward, and the corresponding plot is not rich enough. In the end, it seems like Daji is preaching to the readers. So the only remaining highlight of this book is watching Daji upgrade and establish her power. However, with the sudden expansion of the world view, the original fun of the upgrading/farming stream no longer exists, and it is really no fun to follow Daji's experience and constantly watch the statements of some great principles.

Thanks to the author. I lost my previous account, but I successfully found it in the comments. I would like to thank the author for helping me find my previous account.

Directly provoking Di Xin and Haotian to confront each other, as long as Kong Xuan doesn't take action, Dashang will definitely be in trouble.

The world of cultivating immortals is too painful. Thirty years is enough time for society to move from agriculture to reform and opening up, and enough time for time-travelers to climb up technology and modernize. However, in the book, you can only watch the Shang Dynasty perish. Even if the magic power of cultivators can open mountains and lakes, mine deep mines, and carve gold and silver, you cannot take advantage of this in the world of cultivating immortals. In this book, King Zhou will listen to you if you reason with him, he will trust you if you treat him well, and he will resist if you let him go and call you names. In another world, if you teach him the Theory of Contradiction for a few years, he will rebel with you, but in this world, he can only be a subjugated king. This kind of character usually doesn't appear in male protagonist stories. It will steal the spotlight from the male protagonist. In Saibian Marriage, it is the male protagonist's status. It's a pity that if you appear in Bianbaili, you can only rock the bed for thirty years. At least, the genuine King Zhou went crazy with the fox play, while the pirated King Zhou didn't even eat the fox tofu in one bite, it was just a wet dream.

There was a time when I really wanted to read Su Daji's fanfic, and today I met 😁 by chance Are they singles?