Rebirth of a Wealthy Dreamer

Bored, I want to see blood flowing like a river

I would like to give you a suggestion, be less preachy. The first half of Du Niang is okay, but the second half is completely preachy. A lot of chapters are not telling stories, but are about the author's own feelings about what is said, what is said, what is said, and what is said. The book has become stronger, and within a few chapters I have begun to write some of my own feelings about value. It's not that you can't write, but you have to understand the difference between novels and essays. This kind of thing has only been touched briefly. What everyone is reading is a novel, and what you are reading is a story. Story, you have told the story well and polished the words are more important than anything else. What argument do I want to read? Why did I come to see you? There are a lot of professional books out there that are thick and black, and there are more professional arguments out there. I've written it. The story written by Shi Qingshan in front of you was quite good. The second half of Du Niang's story is all about personal views on things. Not long after starting this book, the old habit has returned. Do people really want to see your thoughts on something? Are you attracted by your Lily label? Polish the story well and be less preachy, otherwise your paper will not look like a paper, your novel will not look like a novel, and you will not be able to grasp both ends.

Don't know why this book is not enjoyable at all. . . I feel that the protagonist has become more and more assimilated. After more than thirty years of life, he feels like a native, while the police fairy is more like a time traveler.

It's really a rare good book, the logic and IQ are online, and the protagonist's thinking is mature and not pretentious! Is this the ceiling for orange writing now? It's a pity that today's Orange readers are basically middle school students and some college students, childish ghosts with no social experience! The pearl is covered in dust!

Preaching is indeed serious. Why do you want people to spend money to read the correct questionnaire? If you understand the truth and have your own three views, isn't it just a waste of money to read nonsense? If you come here to rest and have fun, aren't you just spending money to get yourself into trouble?

Is it Lily? Can it increase lifespan?

Yeah, is this another change? 😍

The eldest brother writes well like Du Niang, causing trouble when there are more than 100 pictures. I don't care if the comments are crazy. In the end, those three little demons only did a few odd jobs, so don't just stop responding to comments at all.

At first I thought it was pretty good, but as I read more, I felt that the book was a bit like the plot was developed for the purpose of preaching about three views, and the theme serves the purpose of preaching about three views (it doesn't make me irritated at the moment). Although the protagonist is not a perfect person, he is described as having a perfect feeling, without fear or pain. Although the novel expresses these negative emotions, the readers do not feel them deeply. The interaction with the characters in the book is somewhat like a template, which is different from a poorly used routine. The character creation is deliberate. (This is very sad)

Brother, you can really write. Open several books at the same time😰

This protagonist might as well be written as an ordinary student. This sounds a bit inconsistent in reading. If nothing else, he is just a fairy. He is preyed upon by humans and beaten into the sand. As a result, the protagonist only believes everything he says? What a novice

There are more than 200 chapters, who is cp?

Here you go, you are so awesome, let's open it three times

No, is there a problem with this start? Look at what you wrote. What do you want to see? I don't want to watch a protagonist who is married, has a daughter, and has a mature relationship. The emotional line is directly stuck, right? You know the sense of immersion. Who has time to read novels when he is busy with his family?

Like other readers have said, I also feel that there is too much preaching and personal stuff. 1. If your preaching is correct, you should also consider the readers' perceptions. For readers who have already understood the truth, it is equivalent to reading a piece of nonsense and a waste of eyesight. Assuming that you, the author, think that your private opinion is correct, then you should also consider how people with different experiences from yours would agree with you, because not everyone can have the same wonderful experience as you. 2. However, the author has to consider that your preaching is wrong. People feel like they are always right, but obviously not everyone is always right. If one of your sermons is indeed superficial or wrong, then for readers who have better answers in mind, wouldn't it mean that they have to forcibly substitute the protagonist's backward values? I think most experienced people have experienced this feeling, and it doesn't make people feel comfortable. And the older readers may be, the more likely they are to be disgusted. I quite like the background design, power system, character setting and other aspects of the novel. I have read your novel a long time ago. Unfortunately, Du Niang has read more than half of it and still couldn't finish it. I think this is probably the reason why I can't follow it. I hope there will be less private goods, please!

If it becomes a hundred, then collect it, keep it and keep pursuing it.

If the plot doesn't revolve around sex, I really don't understand why it would be written around.

The author's knowledge reserve is really strong. If he is not obsessed with the subject of transformation, Lily, and writes less hard knowledge and strengthens the story, he will do well.

What's wrong with the author? It won't be Yang anymore. I hope the author can find the status as soon as possible and resume updating. Come on

This one is good, analogous to the Red Mansion. Explained why lack of money leads to luxury, in order to prevent everyone from seeing the weakness of the family. But the writing style is immature

I'm about to start a new book. I hope the plot of the next one won't be too dry and straightforward. After all, when Buddha preached the sutras, he always told stories first to let others understand.

From today's perspective, the essence of the world is actually similar to that of computer programs, which are all additions, deletions, modifications, and searches.

The pace is too slow and I feel so tired