Douluo: Start by Building a Zanpakutō

My experience and feeling is that no matter how cunning or powerful it is, such as Tai Chi Diagram, Pangu Ax, or Qiongqi Chaos, as long as Jinwu Yuechan becomes a martial spirit, she will feel like "Who dares to dismount and fight?"

If you are too literary and young, even if there is a Douluo system, it will be extremely boring. If you like the literary youth, it is better to write your own original work 😥.

Snowflake, weak? It's best not to appear on the profile

There's something wrong with your writing style, it's not suitable for writing fan fiction at all.

In the first ten chapters, I don't understand what I read? ?

I was confused when I read it. I wanted to write it with personality, but it was like a riddle and had a literary flavor.

It was diagnosed as an attack of literary youth syndrome. I didn't see any effective plot in the first ten chapters.

The writing is quite good, why don't you continue writing?

Today Chadow gave Yuhabach a slap in the face 🙂

What's up, this is a knife! I feel like there's no big problem in the Douluo fandom.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I just read a few pictures and feel that the author's writing style is good; I hope he doesn't want to be a eunuch.