The Second Episode of Life in Another World Starting from Quitting the Team

Did the brave man do something wrong? If we don't sacrifice the logistics personnel, how about sacrificing the combat power? A trash fish is a trash fish. He likes to pin his hopes on a fool. He deserves to die.

Because of the riot in the secret realm (many monsters appeared), the city owner launched an activity to gain points by killing monsters. The points can be exchanged for things. The protagonist ranked first in points and chose the most expensive one (the points were enough, and it was suitable for him). Then you have to go through the process, go to the city lord's mansion for a banquet, and take on another designated task to get the reward. Is this city lord so dishonest? After doing this, who will participate in his activities? The riots in the secret realm will not have much impact on the adventurers. The worst is to find another place to make a living.

The final battle... If it can be ended, then there will be no need for the team. The importance of logistics at this time is indeed not as important as direct combat power. If sacrifice is necessary, then there is no problem with the hero's approach. It is a pity that the hero is not smart and people lied to her. She has to take responsibility for her wrong choice.

After reading the latest chapter, I still haven't seen the feeling of quitting the team... But the daily interactions you wrote are very good, you can consider a style where the conflict is not so obvious.

The beginning is a little frustrating, as people have been sacrificing you in your previous life. This is already a deadly feud. He also honestly quit the team and returned the equipment. Even if he has the ability to start a team but has no ability, he has to force them to leave. It's like someone slaps you twice and you cry and say you won't play with them again.

It looks like a novice. It is really not difficult to get started with this kind of writing. But if you write about a hero quitting the team, you must make people feel happy by mentioning the hero. After the logistics team quits the team, it will be obvious that the XXN team. To the extreme, the protagonist can also be a hero. If the goddess is destined to be a hero, this kind of hero or even the goddess is not a fun thing from the reader's point of view. After all, the readers are all from the protagonist's point of view. From a pig's perspective, he was a cow and a horse in his previous life and was retaliated against. In this life, he wants to take revenge and return to his hometown. The proportion of daily life and main story in this article is unreasonable (mainly because too much about the hero is taken up. During the main story, a few sentences about the hero being a clown is enough)

So what is the profession of the protagonist? What the hell is this job transfer? Don't understand

The key to quitting is that you actually matter.

This type of subject matter in Nikki is actually quite boring, so there is no need to move it here.

It's so light and novel. The character creation is not very distinctive. There are many chapters that I just read and then skipped. Not much desire to catch up

Very smooth description of daily life, the author can completely use daily life as a gimmick and selling point. I think it can reduce the conflicts in the story and strengthen the relationship between the protagonists. And the author's writing style is definitely based on having read many Japanese light novels, and he completely complies with the writing pattern of emphasizing character over structure.

Not a time-traveler, but a reborn person, nothing interesting to see

Chapter 41 is in progress. The plot is smooth and the protagonist is steadily improving himself. It is very comfortable to watch. There are a few places where the word order is confusing, but the brain automatically corrects it. It seems to be a good book at the moment, and I look forward to the author's next chapters.

There is nothing wrong with the writing. One look at it shows that there is something really wrong with the brain of the brave man.

It's normal. Japan usually looks down on auxiliary occupations (￢_￢)

The review is that I have never seen any orthodox Japanese RPG game where the protagonist directly sacrifices his teammates, just like ff7 Cloud sacrificed West or The Legend of Zelda Link sacrificed Pulia. If you can do such an abstract thing, you deserve to end up BE

I feel that the writing is bland and unremarkable. It does not establish a macro world view and makes people read in a fog. It also establishes internal enemies and external worries. The only enemies are women. There are no ups and downs and it can only be regarded as ordinary.

It's too procrastinating. It's been so many chapters and it's still on the same map. The iron pestle has been ground into a needle. No matter how good the early writing is, the reader's patience will be worn out Besides, this is a team withdrawal story. As for the brave, there is too little mentioned. The fun part of this type is to compare the life of the protagonist and the brave after they separate, too little

How honorable 😍

This author. . . I used to write about cultivating things. The way I used words made me look dramatic.

Unlike many other works written for the sake of writing, you can definitely see that the author wants to write seriously. I hope the author can keep it this way. Books written by newbies do lack traffic, but I believe that the author will accumulate more and more readers sooner or later if he keeps writing.

This is all the monthly passes I have saved this month

Why do you update one chapter every day 😢