I'm a Bounty Hunter in America

The third case was not good to watch from the beginning. I feel that all the recent new books are the same. The pig's feet are all quite useless. Either IQ or the system is suppressed, and the strength is suppressed. The first-level hunter arranges a death-defying extraordinary plot! You have to rely on people to save you. An old monster who has lived for two hundred years cannot defeat the son of a former gang leader 🤫

The subject matter is quite good, but I don't know if I can write it tastefully, but the sister in the introduction makes me want to leave. Nowadays, most people are only children. It is very unpleasant for you to write about a younger sister. From a plot perspective, having a sister has no benefits, but is all trouble.

I just finished reading all 23 chapters of the current update. In summary, the details and rhythm of the bounty hunter case are good. But then we get into the supernatural. Generally speaking, novels involving the supernatural begin to directly or indirectly participate in supernatural cases from the first few chapters. What I write now is actually quite acceptable. I don't know what will happen next. The disadvantage is that there are too many relatives and friends in a mess. I have been reading novels for so many years and have read so many foreign novels from foreign countries. This is the first time, and uniquely, there are novels about foreign Chinese parents. Nearly 10 appeared in the first 6 chapters. Chinese relatives and friends. Parents, sister, aunt, a whole bunch of aunt's kids. Brother Hua. A little too much. Being used to seeing Qidian Orphanage, I felt a little uncomfortable. Also, the protagonist is too young, 21 years old, with 8 months of police training, and probably has never gone to college. A normal college graduate would get 22. Graduation in the United States is in March or September. Why is the protagonist too young? Set it to 24.5 Which is about the same. I personally hate any reaction from the other characters in the novel to the protagonist's young age. Including but not limited to, sighing that he is so powerful at such a young age. Or being called a child by any character. Others questioned what ability he could have at such a young age. There are currently no relevant lines in the novel. Like 👍. Last but not least, I hope that in future cases, there will be more processes and the skill of finding people will be a little wider. There needs to be more content in the last "one mile" tracking. Don't make it too simple. For example, every case involves finding the person, killing him, and then catching him. It's just too boring. Now just waiting for the update, come on. ✊✊✊

The subject matter is still very good, but the content is a bit uninteresting. You kill everyone you see when performing a mission, and the plot of demons and ghosts coming to exorcise demons comes out in dozens of chapters, which is a bit outrageous.

If there is supernatural or fantasy content, there will be little interest in reading.

The third case started to be written randomly.

By Chapter 48, mysterious events have occurred. The protagonist's abilities are still weak and ordinary. It doesn't make sense.

Physical exorcism requires both evil spirits from the Wen family.

Not bad, good, responsible. If I don't write it down, I can still give you a notice.

A few more chapters, 😎