Fame Panel, Lingyuan Immortal Way

There is a female protagonist, let me take a look first 😍😍😍

As human beings, our biological instincts require us to reproduce as much as possible in order to obtain pleasure and satisfaction. However, as we read novels, we naturally do not want too many interactions based on gender to occupy the space of the novel. The author's writing is worthy of recognition, but the title and content of your book are about the protagonist's fantasy of cultivating immortality. Strictly speaking, According to the logic of the setting, there is no possibility for the heroine to keep up with the protagonist's progress. The consequences of forcing a heroine are 100% ridiculous. As a bookworm, I have seen too many good books that failed due to gender reasons. Since you asked the author, please don't try to challenge the reader's sanity. I suggest that the heroine be axed. . . . . .

The writing is clumsy. At first glance, it seems to be okay, but upon closer inspection, it seems to be very ordinary. It has three shortcomings: the writing is average, the story is average, and the transitions are blunt.

The comments section is full of resentment. Is it that exaggerated? This Shennong went in to take a look. If it is 💩, I won't come back to comment. If there are merits or it looks good, I will comment below.

It looks awesome, but the details are a bit unclear. Tsk, all these years of reading novels have been in vain.

It's not suitable for me, it's too strenuous to read. I'm here to read novels, not semi-white classical Chinese texts 😅

After taking a look at the author's writing style, there is still room for improvement. It is not clear at all, but mixed with a lot of inner drama, and the paragraphs are also very average. It looks really messy. Let's not talk about whether your story is good or not. No matter how good your writing method is, can others read and understand what is going on? If this is the author's first book, it's pretty good. If you improve your writing style, I can still look forward to your next book. You can read Wenzhao Gong and learn how to write various paragraphs in it. After revising it, the overall quality will be much better. This book suffers from a large part.

This introduction looks very attractive to me, but after reading the comment section, I am a little afraid to read it 🙂🙂🙂

It's good to watch, but some plots are not foreshadowed and it's uncomfortable to watch. The graphics are strong but a bit dry.

The author recommends that you learn from an old book, Chunyang Dao: Classical Genius Flow. The sentences are smooth and the details are intertwined. Your biggest problem is the way you write it in a picture format. The reader doesn't have a link between the previous and the next when they read it. The narration part is too dry. If you want to write a cool and genius part, you must pay attention to it. Try not to be present in person when pretending to be B.

Newcomers have limited writing skills and focus on asking for advice.

The east wind blooms flowers on thousands of trees at night, and even blows them down, and the stars are like rain. BMW carvings fill the road with fragrance, the phoenix flute sounds, the jade pot turns light, and fish and dragons dance all night.

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If it is the first time for the author to write a book then I feel that the author still has some potential This book is almost interesting and should wait for you to read it later, if you still write it later.

I've read too many cool articles, and it's very uncomfortable to read, and I feel like I want to cry without tears😭

I haven't read it yet, but I read the comments and cheers for the author.

The author did a great job, keep up the good work!