I Am Really Not a Great Player in Football

It's quite interesting, good luck to the author!

I originally thought the writing was okay, but suddenly I wrote about a domestic female star.

The author failed to grasp the fun point. According to the title and introduction, the rhythm of the whole book should be written in a funny and funny direction. The main character's locker room arranges tactics normally. When on the spot, he starts the tortoise shell divination, and immediately adjusts the tactics when it's over. The main thing is to make on-the-spot adjustments. Then, in order to fight against the protagonist, the opponent uses magic to defeat magic, turns on spells to return to the battle, and recruits African wizards to do the same. You secretly perform divination in the locker room, and no one cares about it. There is no description of this at all. What's the point of it? Isn't that just an ordinary game? Be unconventional, what is the difference between you and others? Because the readers you mentioned in the title of your book have expectations like the King of Yellow Balls and the divination stick. But the content is only about ordinary games, which creates a sense of gap. Don't think that divination is about divination. African wizards are too outrageous or can't be put on the stage and should be banned. People have done this stuff in real life. It's so outrageous. There are a lot of European superstitions.

The creativity is okay, but the writing is mediocre

It smells like the practices of the Yellow Ball King's coaches.

I would like to suggest that it is better for the protagonist to have less contact with the domestic football association and some domestic commercial companies. Let's not talk about Ronaldo being defrauded of his golden voice. If you are a coach in a club and are misunderstood by the players: you rely on the commercial value created by the domestic market, then you will be in trouble (making stars, raising prices, winning awards, Real Madrid?) As for the football association, you are responsible for the author, I believe in you, come on

You can't understand the hexagrams and you can't interpret the hexagrams. It all depends on the system. You must at least understand the main character, right?

I don't know if someone from the author told you something or if you don't know how to raise it yourself, but these are some suggestions that I thought of after reading the latest chapter. In the final analysis, it is because of my dissatisfaction with the description of off-site content. 1 I wrote a review on the road in the chapter. I can use other content to expand the off-site description ratio. For example, there are critically ill children on the club's YouTube channel who want to watch regular games and wins during the current time period before undergoing the most dangerous surgery. Here, the host can be expanded to lead the players to condolences to the young fans and make pre-match declarations to inspire the players. Then the system loopholes are discovered in time after many greedy uses, but there is no bottom line for themselves and others. If you feel regretful, you can introduce characters for comfort. 2. The bad boy in the club brings new players or young players to propose nightlife, which leads to premature depravity. You can use the eye score given by the system to let the protagonist discover doubts and then Holmes is possessed, but it can be a more funny process. Misjudgment, but in the end it is discovered. It's about picking up girls without a bottom line, sucking the blood of young players and then exposing the darkness to help them get rid of it. 3 When you returned to China, you wrote about severing ties with relatives. The protagonist must have gone to school. Then what kind of passion did you write about a low-boundary old schoolmate and a strongman locking up men? Taking the protagonist to watch the village super and experience the happiness brought by football in another way. When it comes to character building for a rich protagonist, you can't always write about a person who is high above the ground and separated from the bottom. 4 As for the fans, the protagonist participates in the fan community during the rest time to understand the fan culture. On the one hand, you can also write about the fans holding the protagonist and making demands to the protagonist. For example, I hope you don't leave. Even if you leave, please bring a league championship. Then the rational fans came out to stop him from accusing him of being too greedy. There is a lot to write about in various aspects. I don't know why the author didn't write this but instead came up with a cliché that is so far away from the domestic stars that they can't reach them. They have already been written badly by countless people before, but I don't know why. I'll write down my suggestions here because if no one says it, then the only ones left will only say that they are disgusting and give up, and love and watch it but don't watch it. In the end, there will be a bunch of emotional output that is disgusting to readers and disgusting to the author. After all, the author may not even realize that the writing is crooked. I don't know if it's because you wrote a female character with an emotional line. So it's disgusting because this road has been messed up and stinked by countless people before, so everyone is naturally disgusted. When you write this, you are telling everyone that I may be one of those disgusting authors who will write random self-pleasure and stink routines in the future, but how to change it in the future depends on the author himself. I will say this here, hoping to encourage everyone.

The content of this book is quite good among football articles. I have read 4-50 football articles so far. It is very core. I am sure it is what I said before. This is a bit like a systematic article rather than a funny article. I don't know if there will be explicit divination in the future. Let's wait and see.

As for the hexagrams, except for the first few games, I didn't write them down once, and it became a normal football article.

Among many football articles, it can be regarded as a potential new book with the level of bread and butter! Come on, author

To be honest, I don't like Barcelona coaches. If possible, could the author refer to Van Gaal more? To be honest, a giant like Beckenbauer who took the team from the second division to the top five in the world cannot be copied in modern times. The most he can copy is Simeone, and now he plays Jinyuan football. So, do you want to consider Dortmund or Juventus? Of course, if you go to Real Madrid, you don't need to consider anything. You can repeat Figo's thing and trick Neymar over.

There are only 5 items that are said to be good or bad, everyone has their own say, it is better for you to taste it yourself!

I'll give you ten monthly passes this month. I hope the author can make more updates.

What is this author's nickname? Finished reading in a while

It is readable, but many novels are only good at the beginning. I wonder what will happen to this one?

I haven't read the content yet, but the introduction is very good and interesting. It's a funny football article. If it's written well, I can create a small category.

Where to go next season? Dortmund and Arsenal are very good, they can lead young people and create miracles by winning the Champions League. My feelings about Manchester United are very complicated. There are reasons for going and there are reasons for not going.

The writing is really good, but the pacing is not very well controlled.