The System Helped Me Reach Ling Yunzhi, but I Was Fed Softly by Them

Shen Nong is here. Let me share your thoughts after reading more than 40 chapters. The opening is outrageous. You must not use your brain. You cannot read it with your brain. To be honest, it is outrageous. It should not be written like this. The beginning is about a newborn baby being born. There is no milk to feed the parents and they have no money. So the system wakes up and can starve. Li continued to eat northwest wind until he was three years old, and then he went to pick up garbage to support himself. To be honest, I feel that I shouldn't write it like this. I was also poor when I was a child. My mother was malnourished and had no milk. In this case, I usually fed rice soup, which means I didn't wash the rice very much and boiled the white water. This thing I In the past, when we entered the factory in Dongguan, they would put a lot of water in the canteen to boil, then pour the rice soup out on plates, and then continue cooking. Rice soup was meant for people to drink while eating When I was a child, I had no milk, so I drank rice soup, and occasionally soy milk, plus rice cereal. Of course, some people who have the conditions will give some animal milk to drink, but our family does not have such conditions. The book directly tells the story of eating the northwest wind. Although it is said to be a novel and a picture, it is not necessary to read it with your brain, but it is too outrageous. The family has not fed the children for several years and they have grown up. This is not a crop, right? I hope it can be modified in the future to at least make it normal Then there is the back, which is a simple protagonist system with multiple branch systems, and the rhythm of showing off and opening up the harem. The writing is not bad, it should be an old author, and the rhythm is not bad. The picture is good. If the opening problem is eliminated, the recommendation is 80 points. If it does not fall apart in the follow-up

The content of the small workshop is very strong. The only shortcoming is that the number of words is too few and it is not enough to read.

I'm a little afraid that some ancient martial arts family or cultivation family will appear later 😐

I really feel like the starting setting is really outrageous.

This novel is so powerful, it feels like drinking fake wine😰

Alas, the idea is very good. There are basically no surprises or poisons in the whole text. The plot of the parents is also well handled. The reason for sighing is that the world is not well chosen. The upper limit of ordinary modern society is there. The rest is basically expanding the world view to introduce new plots. There are no highlights. It is almost the same as the school beauty's personal master. I hope the author learns his lesson.

He is the kind of person who can finish someone else's 100,000-word plot in a few chapters. Maybe the author doesn't know details, but he understands the logic of Shuangwen. The main line of Shuangwen is mixed with a little bit of daily life and physical daily life.

I have read Chapter 20 so far, and after a slight pause, I feel like I can't continue reading. The plot is a very simple and enjoyable novel, but is it enjoyable? It feels so good, but I still feel an inexplicable emptiness after quitting... It feels weird no matter how you think about it. I lay in bed and thought about how to evaluate this book, and finally came to the conclusion that it was "empty". The protagonist is an empty person. He seems to be counterattacking and walking on the road to a successful life of pretending to be a slap in the face, but in fact he is an empty person with an obvious "gravity" label... No matter who he is in love with, it is fragile. He has no pure feelings for Guan Xueyun or Si Mingyu. It's all because of the hunger and thirst produced by body hormones that drive his behavior. The protagonist is a beast controlled by animal nature. His actions serve instinct and his heart is empty. This is a harem novel with many female characters. The protagonist is like playing a cracked version of the game, simply and mindlessly collecting characters and props that he has missed in order to "make up" for the hole in his heart... But this kind of emotionless "getting" only makes him appear more empty and depressed. The world and system settings of the novel are destined to mean that the protagonist has nothing to say about his career. After all, it is not appropriate to change the world at will. It is not difficult to start a business step by step. After all, even dogs can succeed if the system chases and feeds them. Then the emotional description is very important, but the emotional line is also a mess, there is no emotional line at all... It feels like Guan Xueyun and Si Mingyu are characters who only appear because of the needs of the protagonist. Their portrayal is seriously insufficient, and the description of the protagonist also seems to have no emotion.

Don't write about money-making careers or anything like that. This writer just writes random numbers and it's over. He doesn't care about how much money he wrote in front of him.

Just a young author who likes fantasy😆

Will all kinds of evil forces appear in such great works now?

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Let Shen Nong give us an objective evaluation.

You found novels among a large number of memes 😁

As long as there are no cultivators in the future, it will be fine.

It's so refreshing! Strong mouth! Fierce teeth! Mouth! ! !

It's very nice and fits my stereotype of Chengdu! It also fits my stereotype of the so-called upper class! What's on the must-eat list is so "Chengdu"

Not bad, but it's a pity that I ran out of investment opportunities.

It's quite interesting. The author made the protagonist very real. The heroines all have their own careers and their own emotions and thoughts. The writing is quite flesh-and-blood, good👍👍

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

It's pretty, why is there no one there?

Does the author have any new books? Please ask