Naruto: You Call This a Ninja?

This is the happiest protagonist I have ever seen working under Danzo.

Let me start by saying that the reference is limited, just a casual chat. The rest of the book is average, and some of the plots are a bit self-explanatory and awkward. . . The only thing that can be said is that the funny scenes are well written. In the early stage, it was average. It was not until the recent "Danzo Tips" that it was considered excellent. If this feature can be used from the beginning and implemented, this book will be a masterpiece. . . Most similar authors can't write this level of humor. Is the author just a little gifted? You have to play to your strengths. Also, the entry point is really awkward. It would be much more reasonable if the male protagonist were Danzo's illegitimate son or the third generation's youngest son. Doing these things as an outsider would make the character's intelligence appear particularly subdued. Also, when I first read what the comment section said about the bottomless dark master, it turned out to be pretty good. They only used enemy corpses to plant plague mushrooms, and the rest were basically fun. But it is best not to go any further and really enter the category of dark masters, not to mention that they will definitely conflict with the funny masters. Even if your writing suddenly counterattacks, the dark audience will be small and humble, unless you really don't care about the number of readers. There is nothing else to talk about. That's it, above.

Why don't you take a look at what I've written recently? I used to insist that using poison is despicable, but now it's written that Shisui gave Itachi a shot of God, so Itachi went to exterminate the clan. It can be said that Shisui desires balance in the most extreme way, and neither side wants to hurt. , Otherwise he would have exterminated the clan instead of committing suicide. Itachi himself is more inclined to the village. When Kishimoto was drawing, he tried his best to write about Uchiha's faults to cleanse Itachi. When you wrote the setting for Shisui, it was so bad that it was Itachi who was innocent? Something

What is the difference between this beginning and working as a worker? At least change it...

Take Danzo's path, leaving Danzo with no way to go. There is nothing to assassinate and assassinate the monkey. Anyway, Danzo doesn't care about multiple pots 🤭🤭 Everything he does is Danzo-sama's will 😁😁

Isn't the Evolved V-Dragon series pretty good? Why do Rollingmon basically evolve into Agumon? Or it can evolve into Lucemon too.

My strength has improved so fast. I relied on Pokémon before, but now I have reached the shadow level without any preparation.

I suggest you write this book straight away, and there will be no results if you continue writing it! It seemed pretty good at the beginning, but gradually it started to feel like it was all about how to create negative emotions. The protagonist completely abandoned the moral bottom line, was lawless, and had no shining points.

Dark text. The protagonist has no bottom line.

Is this updated once a day? Why do I feel like I haven't read it for a while and I just updated a few chapters. .

Very well written, come on, author

The plot development is too long, the content is long-winded, and it is always picking on Danzo, which is getting more and more boring. Please arrange for Danzo to go offline as soon as possible.

Agumon has disappeared. Not only has he disappeared, but his only few appearances have been brushed off. It's better not to set this thing up in the first place.