I Have Great Supernatural Powers and Can Enter Huang Liang's Dream

So far so good. The plot is also pretty good. Goldfinger needs to be controlled well. If it doesn't collapse, it will still be fine later. There is one thing to note. It means dividing the spoils according to merit. If it is an equal share no matter what. Sooner or later other changes will happen. If nothing else happened, it would be too false. People's hearts are unpredictable.

The writing and plot are both okay, but the story is too light, and the personality and background of the protagonist are very vague. Except for one friend, I feel like Sun Monkey jumped out of the stone. I feel too isolated from the world. This is also the reason why some book friends in the comment area said that reading this book is very tiring.

I think most of the current immortality novels have a bad problem and are not creative. Logically speaking, every advancement in immortality is an evolution, and the brain will be more powerful, right? Let's not talk about the golden elixir. We have already reached Nascent Soul, and we are still not creative at all. We are still looking for the exercises left by our predecessors everywhere. Our own cultivation is simply the same as none. There is no experience at all to provide a good guy.

So far, the rhythm, world view and background of the novel are very good, and the creation of a refreshing feeling is also in place. If I write more than 600 chapters and maintain this level, it will be a good thing. The current five-point evaluation is above four. But if the novel as a whole wants to keep rising, it depends on the arrangement of the subsequent plot. Many novels are great in the early stage but collapse in the later stage. In the later stage, it mainly depends on the development of the protagonist's power and the interaction with other forces, as well as the interaction between the development of the supporting characters and the protagonist. Don't throw away the supporting characters in the early stage.

The plot is pretty good, I don't know what's going on. But I feel so tired?

It's starting to taste good, it's pretty good

I was speechless as soon as I watched the beginning! A foreign surname can bully the main family in the middle stage of Qi training! Could it be that the person with the highest cultivation level in your family is only in the middle stage of Qi training?

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Develop Huangliang Meng and let others enter it to trade items. You can learn from it. I use Tao seeds to cast immortality. In Chapter 359

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Books without a female protagonist always feel like something is missing.

I feel that although there are a lot of fights, they are too bland. Not to mention the title of the book. Although dreaming has an effect, it is not too big. The miscellaneous characters drag down the whole book.

I haven't encountered any poisonous points after reading the last chapter. At least it's considered a high-quality product. Why is there no one there?

It's okay, but I don't know what happens next.

After you have raised the character to build a foundation, there is no need to spend more time writing about the characters of the same generation (they are all ordinary supporting characters. Although I know it is not a family story, these few of the same age are too far away from the road and quickly disappear). Speed ​​up the progress and open a new copy to easily unfold the plot.

As a fairy novel, it is qualified. The first part of Foundation Establishment is okay. After the Foundation Establishment, the plot is too thin and has no sense of experience like a running account.