The Righteous Me Descends from the Sky!

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For example, in the introduction. 1. Kung Fu 2. Kai Yong (Emperor Movie) 3. Tiga 4. Pokémon ... [There are other worlds waiting for you to decide. You can add appropriate worlds to intersperse according to the strength of the protagonist and the progress of the plot] [Acceptable horror films, such as the Uncle Nine series, European and American horror films, zombie films, Japanese horror films, and Japanese comics. The old introduction is as follows——

Blue and red, Bagua Tower and old trees, street lights and high-rise buildings. I feel so beautiful, I want to share it with you. {"TopicId":"616029455441264640","TopicName":"Landscape"}

The start was too flat, and there was a problem with the rhythm. The protagonist should be developed from the main perspective. As a result, the contractor wrote more words than the protagonist, and it was not interesting. Also, the protagonist Xuewu Xiaocheng didn't express his excitement. Before he could explain why, he jumped on the group of contractors. You must have something that can attract readers and retain them. It was a joy for the author to stop his own rhythm.

I saw this from Weili Zhang's book club, let's take a look and add bookshelves first.

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, Doss provides financial help, Reynold provides reinforcements to the defenders, and combines arms and equipment. Ajax team and Fred team plus a Juventus follow the protagonist. Black Gold International provides mercenaries and other support. If the protagonist takes this group of people to other worlds, such as the magic soldier, Mr. Marvel, other anime worlds, and Japanese comic worlds, I dare not think about it, and I will explode

I have modified the plot before, so I have deleted all comments that related to the previous plot (including a long comment by a very pertinent author, for which I apologize), and meaningless comments that are verbally abusive are prohibited. But a novel cannot only read good reviews, but also see unreasonable and unqualified parts, so I specially set up a negative review forum to collect negative reviews. As long as there is no verbal abuse, I will not delete them

On the Blue Star in another world, a group of German players are immersed in the fierce battle of Battlefield 5. However, the gears of fate are turning inadvertently. A mysterious light flashed, and they collectively traveled to Douluo Continent, a world full of fantasy and danger. While they were still observing the unfamiliar surroundings in confusion, a panicked shout broke the silence. I saw a graceful woman running away in a hurry. She was Zhu Zhuqing. Zhu Zhuqing shouted while running: "Run!" The players were instantly alert. Looking in the direction of her running, a group of killers were chasing after her. The players quickly took off the rifles they were carrying on their backs, and one player with quick reflexes pulled the trigger without hesitation, killing a killer with one shot. The gunfire was like a signal, and a large number of players joined the battle after hearing it. Players armed with machine guns, submachine guns, and rifles opened up their firepower, and mortar teams quickly entered the battle. On this alien battlefield, players showed strong combat qualities and firepower advantages. In less than a moment, the encounter ended with the fall of the last killer. Zhu Zhuqing also recovered at this time. She witnessed the massacre with her own eyes and was shocked. Due to physical injuries and short-term high nervous tension, Zhu Zhuqing also fainted. A commando player shouted: "Medic, save her quickly and treat her!" When Zhu Zhuqing opened her eyes, she looked at these people in strange military uniforms warily. They were talking about something she couldn't understand. A player came over and said with a smile: "Miss Zhu Zhuqing, you're awake." Zhu Zhuqing asked coldly: "Who are you?" At this time, a group of players came over, and one of the players thought that Zhu Zhuqing was indeed his goddess, how cold and cold. He explained: "We are not from this world, we come from another world, Blue Star. I was brought here just after logging in to the game today. I met you and saw that you were in danger, so we fought them off and rescued you. The system also gave us the first task, to explore this world." Zhu Zhuqing found them strange and heard their conversation. He felt that they spoke very interestingly, which was not the language style of this world at all, and they were very humorous. After all, Zhu Zhuqing himself belongs to the ghost civet spirit, a level 26 great spirit master, with strong hearing and perception. Zhu Zhuqing came to his senses and fell silent. At this time, the player said: "Miss Zhuqing, there is a tent we have set up over there." At this time, a player came over with food in his hand. "Miss Zhuqing, eat something first. Our medical soldiers have treated your wounds. You're fine." Zhu Zhuqing thought of the time she escaped from the family, the pursuit of her sister Zhu Zhuyun, and the betrayal and abandonment of her fiancé. She went through all kinds of hardships to find that fiancé and shed tears silently. The player who served the meal noticed that she was shedding tears, and thought in his mind that he knew what the plot was about. Dai Mubai was not a human being, but a beast. He abandoned his wife and ran away. The player sighed, walked to Zhu Zhuqing and squatted down in front of her, saying, "Miss Zhuqing, let's have something to eat." At this time, Zhu Zhuqing raised her head, and she found that everyone here seemed to know her, and asked curiously: "Do you know me?" The player laughed and said, "You are very popular over there." The player said, "Okay, hurry up and eat your food." Zhu Zhuqing nodded and took the food. This was the most normal meal she had eaten during this period, and she didn't eat much during this period of running away. Zhu Zhuqing's beautiful red lips began to take small bites. The player said: "After Zhuqing finished eating, there is a tent over there. You can rest there for the night. We will set off to Soto City tomorrow. If we are on the way, we can go together." Zhu Zhuqing thanked them for saving him and touched his body casually. He found that he had no gold soul coins to thank them. At this time, the player said you're welcome, you can take a walk here now, it's very safe, and the player walked away. Zhu Zhuqing watched the figure disappear. After eating, she stood up and walked towards her tent. On the way, she found that many people knew her, some called her Zhuqing, and some called her Sister Zhuqing. Zhu Zhuqing found that these people were wearing uniforms, helmets that she had never seen before, and holding weapons that she had never seen before. They also had tall, long tube artillery, and some all-metal vehicles with wheels and no horses. They were all made of steel and had a rectangular tank with a small tube on top. They were all weapons that she had never seen before. She was shocked to find that there were more than 3,000 people in the entire camp. At this time, Zhu Zhuqing also walked into the tent prepared by the player. It was very spacious, neat and clean. She lay down on the cot. During this period of time, I was running for my life and did not have a good rest, and I quickly fell asleep. The morning sun was very warm and shone into her room. At this time, Zhu Zhuqing slowly opened his eyes. This was the most peaceful sleep he had had since birth. Just then, she heard the sound of a bugle, which she had never heard before, and just then she heard the sound of dense footsteps. Zhu Zhuqing was shocked to find that they were gathering. The team was uniform, with firm eyes and murderous intent. At this moment, a player came over and said, "Sister Zhuqing, I didn't disturb you." Zhu Zhuqing found out that it was the player who delivered the meal yesterday and said, "What are you doing?" Player: I'm fine, it's just an emergency gathering. By the way, Sister Zhuqing, where are you going? Zhu Zhuqing said: "I plan to go to Soto City to find someone." " The player thought that it would be just right to go find your fiancé. Our Tiandao system gave each of our players a new task today. It is just right to allocate a platoon to beat Dai Mubai. The player said: "We have a new task here. We will allocate a platoon to Soto City to complete the task. It just so happens that we can go together. "Zhu Zhuqing had no choice but to agree. The player said: "Sister Zhuqing, come with me. "Zhu Zhuqingmai opened his long leather pants and followed the player. The two came to the front of the team. Zhu Zhuqing saw that there were about seventy people. Each player was wearing a uniform iron-gray military uniform, a steel helmet on his head, a Mauser rifle in his hand, a bayonet on his waist, a water bottle on his body, and an M24 wooden handle grenade on his left belt. His eyes were full of determination. Zhu Zhuqing found that the faces of each of their soldiers were full of childishness and determination. Zhu Zhuqing turned his beautiful face and said: "What are you going to do? "The player said: "I am the platoon leader for this mission. "He said with a bad taste: "Our mission today is to go to Soto City to beat up Dai Mubai. "The platoon leader turned his head, looked at Zhu Zhuqing and saw something bad on his face, and said, "What's wrong with Sister Zhuqing? Zhu Zhuqing came back to his senses and said, "It's okay." "The platoon leader said: "Okay, let's set off. Everyone, turn right and walk together! Get in the car. The soldiers shouted: "Yes!" "With great momentum, he got on the bus. Zhu Zhuqing was shocked to discover the terror of this army. The player platoon leader came over and said gently: "Sister Zhuqing, get on the bus. "Zhu Zhuqing said hello and quickly got into the passenger seat of the truck. The person driving the truck was still the platoon leader. The truck started, followed by five trucks. The two started chatting on the road. When it got dark, they arrived at Soto City. The truck driven by the talented people arrived at Soto City. The platoon leader in the car threw a bag of gold soul coins directly to the city guard, who took it. The guard naturally let the money go without saying anything. After all, there were all kinds of nobles in the city, and there were all kinds of weird things, and he didn't dare to care about the gentlemen's affairs. He just accepted the money and let it go. Then the convoy drove into the city. The platoon leader turned to look at Zhu Zhuqing and said, "What's wrong with Sister Zhuqing?" "Zhu Zhuqing is fine. OK, platoon leader. Then the convoy arrived at the Rose Hotel, the mission target. After getting off the bus, Zhu Zhuqing's eyes widened and she saw something she didn't want to see in her life. She saw Dai Mubai hugging the two sisters and entering the Rose Hotel, and her heart felt like a knife. At this time, the platoon leader and the player also came down. The platoon leader said, "Sister Zhuqing." Zhu Zhuqing suppressed the pain in his heart and said that it was okay. Rose Hotel. At this time, there was a sound of fighting inside. The platoon leader thought that this was the beginning of the plot. It was probably a fight between Tang Sanhe and Xiaowu. He told the soldiers behind him to wait for a while and then go in after the fighting was almost done. The soldiers were coming in three minutes! Not much left, the platoon leader looked at his watch and shouted, and the soldiers rushed in like tigers. When the soldiers saw the injured Dai Mubai, they unceremoniously hit Dai Mubai in the stomach with the butt of their rifles. Dai Mubai said in pain, holding his stomach. "Dai Mubai was very angry. He was a level 36 soul master. When Dai Mubai was about to release his soul skills, he was horrified to find that he seemed to be suppressed by some force and could not release his martial soul. At this moment, the soldier said: "I don't care who you are, you are destined to receive this beating today, brothers. "The soldiers began to beat Dai Mubai. After ten minutes, Dai Mubai was lying on the ground like a dead dog. At this time, the platoon leader came in with Zhu Zhuqing. When Dai Mubai opened his eyes in a daze, he was shocked and said: "Zhu Qing, save me, I know I am sorry for you, Zhu Qing, save me, I am your fiancé. "Zhu Zhuqing looked at him with cold eyes, as if he were a scumbag. At this time, the platoon leader player came over and said: "Sister Zhuqing, I listen to you, what do you want to do? Zhu Zhuqing looked at Dai Mubai and said coldly: "Keep fighting." "The platoon leader said: "Didn't you hear what Sister Zhuqing said? Beat! "The soldiers shouted yes! Then Dai Mubai was beaten by the soldiers. Zhu Qingzhu looked at all this and Dai Mubai screamed, tears streaming down his face. The platoon leader walked over and stood beside Zhu Zhuqing and said it's okay, Sister Zhuqing, Zhu Zhuqing is okay. At this moment, all the depression in Zhu Zhuqing's heart was released. Then the soldiers dragged Dai Mubai, who was like a dead dog, to the two of them. Dai Mubai begged for mercy: "Zhu Qing, let me go, I was really wrong. "Zhu Zhuqing was thrown out by me, and then the soldiers dragged Dai Mubai out. At this time, Tang San came over with Xiao Wu, and Tang San said: "My friend, isn't this good? "At this time, the platoon leader came over and said: "It's none of your business, please leave here, otherwise don't blame me for being rude. At this time, Xiao Wu stood up and said, "Why are you like this?" "The two parties began to confront each other. At this time, Tang San stood up, took Xiao Wu's hand and said, "Let's go." Xiao Wu left angrily. Everyone made a way for Tang San and the others to come out. Tang San took Xiao Wu's hand and left the Rose Hotel. Xiao Wu who walked out of the Rose Hotel said, "Brother, what are you afraid of them doing?" "Tang San said they gave me a very dangerous feeling, then he touched Xiao Wu's head and we are looking for another place to live. The platoon leader looked at Zhu Zhuqing and said, "Sister Zhuqing, don't be sad, just go over there. What are your plans? "Zhu Zhuqing, I plan to go to Shrek tomorrow. The platoon leader said to Sister Xing Zhuqing, it's getting late, and we have to find a place to stay and rest for the night. Zhu Zhuqing nodded, platoon leader, we will leave tomorrow.

Lan Ruobing